Template:Did you know nominations/Military Association of Atheists & Freethinkers
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The result was: promoted by — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:15, 10 March 2013 (UTC).
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Military Association of Atheists & Freethinkers
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- ... that the Military Association of Atheists & Freethinkers provides "Atheists in Foxholes" with advocacy, community and education?
- Reviewed: Knife Edge Two Piece
5x expanded by Frederick Green (talk). Nominated by Nmillerche (talk) at 02:56, 2 March 2013 (UTC).
- This is a very interesting article! It is solidly a 5x expansion and is well-cited. My only concern is that the hook is not directly supported by an inline citation. It is a blend of two sentences and neither is directly cited. I do like the language of the hook, so perhaps you can add a clear cite for it? Allecher (talk) 01:18, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
- Problem corrected. Thanks for catching that mistake. Frederick Green (talk) 02:44, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
- I agree, the hook is now clearly cited. You are good to go! Allecher (talk) 03:05, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
- This is a very interesting article! It is solidly a 5x expansion and is well-cited. My only concern is that the hook is not directly supported by an inline citation. It is a blend of two sentences and neither is directly cited. I do like the language of the hook, so perhaps you can add a clear cite for it? Allecher (talk) 01:18, 9 March 2013 (UTC)