Template:Did you know nominations/Mining industry of Tunisia

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The result was: promoted by Keilana (talk) 02:44, 3 September 2015 (UTC)

Mining industry of Tunisia

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Moved to mainspace by Rosiestep (talk), Nvvchar (talk, Dr. Blofeld (talk), and Kelapstick (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 17:29, 2 July 2015 (UTC).

  • Full review needed. Volcanoguy, the review must be based on the DYK criteria, and list what you checked and what was found. Please see the DYK reviewing guide for more details, and WP:DYK and WP:DYKSG for the detailed criteria; a summation can be found above the edit window when you edit these review templates. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:42, 22 August 2015 (UTC)
  • New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. The hook is very good, but it lacks an inline cite in the article. QPQ done. Yoninah (talk) 20:17, 1 September 2015 (UTC)
  • Thanks Yoninah for the review. I have fixed the reference of USGS in the legal section. The hook needs revision and I propose this ALT1 hook: ... that the government of Tunisia owns and regulates all mining operations but private operation is promoted by the National Office of Mines? Nvvchar. 01:13, 2 September 2015 (UTC)
  • Thanks for adding the cite. But why change the hook? The original hook is very hooky; the alt is too explanatory and therefore rather dry. Yoninah (talk) 09:08, 2 September 2015 (UTC)
  • Yoninah It is fine then. Please consider the original hook for approval.Nvvchar. 09:27, 2 September 2015 (UTC)
  • Great. Hook ref verified and cited inline. Original hook good to go. Yoninah (talk) 10:18, 2 September 2015 (UTC)