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The result was: rejected by PumpkinSky talk 21:55, 28 May 2012 (UTC)

NOVA-MBA Association

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  • ... that NOVA-MBA Association membership has been historically restricted to Italian MBA graduates of certain schools?

Created/expanded by Filippo Scognamiglio (talk). Nominated by Nathan2055 (talk) at 17:41, 6 May 2012 (UTC)

  • Several issues:
  • The article needs copyediting.
  • The lede states that the organization's goal is to "Facilitate the participation of Italian Talents to top US MBA programs", yet the first section says that membership is restricted to those who have already graduated from an American MBA program.
  • "In other MBA programs, the number of Italian students is typically less than 3-4 per year, which usually implies that Italian clubs do not formally exist, and students are typically part of broader European groups, such as, for example, Harvard Business School's European Club" The source given doesn't say that.
  • There are several unsourced sections or paragraphs.--Carabinieri (talk) 17:48, 20 May 2012 (UTC)