- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Jolly Ω Janner 08:27, 19 February 2016 (UTC)
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Rare
edit- ... that Rare celebrated its 30th anniversary by releasing Rare Replay, a complication game of 30 Rare's titles?
Improved to Good Article status by AdrianGamer (talk). Self-nominated at 04:28, 31 January 2016 (UTC).
Promoted to Good Article statue on Jan. 30th, never featured on the Main Page, and is long enough. Hook is cited in the article and the citation is properly formatted. There are no dispute templates and the article approaches the subject in a neutral manner. However, "of 30 Rare's titles" doesn't appear to be grammatically correct. An ALT is suggested below. QPQ is complete.
- ALT1 ... that Rare celebrated its 30th anniversary by releasing Rare Replay, a complication game of 30 Rare titles?
- ALT2 ... that Rare celebrated its 30th anniversary by releasing Rare Replay, a title compiling 30 video games created by Rare?
- Since this is what the Rare Replay game actually is; a compilation game that features 30 titles/video games created by Rare. Also better grammar as suggested. @Z1720 and AdrianGamer: for comments. Cheers, Doctor Crazy in Room 102 of The Mental Asylum 01:52, 7 February 2016 (UTC)
- I like ALT2 the best. Thanks for the comment @Drcrazy102: Z1720 (talk) 01:56, 7 February 2016 (UTC)
- Both ALTs sound great. Thanks for reviewing/suggesting! AdrianGamer (talk) 05:58, 10 February 2016 (UTC)
