Template:Did you know nominations/Terry Acebo Davis
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 15:39, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
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Terry Acebo Davis
edit... that Terry Acebo Davis has lectured at the Smithsonian Institute and Mills College, and was the first Filipino-American artist to be exhibited at the Asian Art Museum's Samsung Hall?
- Reviewed: Gerechtigkeitsspirale
Created by Ironholds (talk). Self nominated at 15:29, 23 March 2015 (UTC).
@Ironholds: The hook links to the Museum of Asian Art (in Berlin) while the article mentions the Asian Art Museum of San Francisco (in the US, obviously). I assume the latter is the correct museum? 97198 (talk) 10:51, 2 April 2015 (UTC)
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- Interesting person, good sources. - How do you feel about an infobox? - I confess that the hook starts so boring that I would not read to the end, suggest to shorten to
- ALT1:
... that Terry Acebo Davis was the first Filipino-American artist to be exhibited at the Asian Art Museum of San Francisco?--Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:13, 16 April 2015 (UTC)- Sure, although note "Samsung Hall" because I don't actually have a source explicitly saying "first at the museum". Ironholds (talk) 02:20, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
- You are right, - perhaps we should say something else, - artist and nurse? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:02, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
- "artist, lecturer on the Filipino identity, and full-time nurse"? Ironholds (talk) 15:50, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
- Please word it, - if I do we need a third person to review that, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:26, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
- "artist, lecturer on the Filipino identity, and full-time nurse"? Ironholds (talk) 15:50, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
- You are right, - perhaps we should say something else, - artist and nurse? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:02, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
- Sure, although note "Samsung Hall" because I don't actually have a source explicitly saying "first at the museum". Ironholds (talk) 02:20, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
ALT2: ... that Terry Acebo Davis is an artist, lecturer on the Filipino identity and full-time nurse?
@Gerda Arendt: done! Thoughts? Ironholds (talk) 20:03, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
- Please forgive me getting back to an older version, because without the original hook, the whole discussion doesn't make sense. Two reworded, as alternate possibilities:
- ALT3: ... that Terry Acebo Davis, an artist and full-time nurse, is a lecturer on the Filipino identity?
- ALT4: ... that Terry Acebo Davis was the first Filipino-American artist to be exhibited at the Samsung Hall of the Asian Art Museum of San Francisco? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:19, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
Full review needed now that hooks are set. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:14, 1 May 2015 (UTC)
offline sources accepted AGF --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:40, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
