- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 07:14, 4 November 2011 (UTC)
The Dewarists
edit- ... that The Dewarists believe "Some things are just worth doing", they are in search of a song and by the end of the journey artists will have a track that will reflect each genres?
- ALT1:... that The Dewarists casts musicians from various parts of the world, collaborating to create original music while travelling across India to create a whole new genres?
- ALT2:... that by the end of the journey The Dewarists will have a song that will reflect the culture of the place they travel and each of their genres?-aηsuмaη ༽Ϟ 14:15, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- Comment: Article created on October 22, 2011
- Reviewed: Ute Cemetery, United States Assay Commission, Djenar Maesa Ayu
Created by Ansumang (talk). Self nom at 20:41, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
The history checks out fine, but I don't think the hook is very interesting. It isn't going to be clear what The Dewarists is, so few people outside India will click on it. I would use the word "Indian" in the hook and also mention that Palace Episode 1 was filmed at. Aside from that, it's fine.--Wehwalt (talk) 20:38, 28 October 2011 (UTC)- Can you make it interesting, however you think suitable ? aηsuмaη ༽Ϟ 20:57, 28 October 2011 (UTC)
- ALT3 ... that the first episode of the musical documentary series The Dewarists was filmed in historic Samode Palace near Jaipur , India, where a song based on a poem by Rabindranath Tagore was recorded?
- How does that sound? If you can put in a cite mentioning that Tagore won the Nobel Prize, into the article, we can add that into the hook as well if you want.--Wehwalt (talk) 21:09, 28 October 2011 (UTC)
- Previous one was okay. Adding Rabindranath Tagore would make the hook longer. But I prefer the part:a song that will reflect the culture of the place they travel and each of their genres? aηsuмaη ༽Ϟ
(←) How about this: ALT4 ... that in each episode of the musical documentary series The Dewarists, musicians record a song that will reflect the culture of the place they travel and each of their genres? aηsuмaη ༽Ϟ 21:26, 28 October 2011 (UTC)
