Template:Did you know nominations/The Hatton Garden Job
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The result was: promoted by Gatoclass (talk) 13:17, 14 March 2018 (UTC)
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The Hatton Garden Job
edit- ... that The Daily Telegraph claimed The Hatton Garden Job "begins to feel like a bizarre, Brechtian joke at the audience’s expense"?
Source: Robbie Collin, The Hatton Garden Job: 'large parts of this Guy Ritchie pastiche are, quite literally, just boring' - review in The Daily Telegraph dated 13 April 2017 at telegraph.co.uk
- Reviewed: Dominic Tweddle
Created by Moonraker (talk). Self-nominated at 08:00, 11 March 2018 (UTC).
Interesting, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. - For my taste, the article is a bit too much on the actual crime, too little on the film, but this is just DYK. I am not happy with the hook because I think "begins to feel" is a strange phrase. Can you quote differently/shorter? Or say something else? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:44, 11 March 2018 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that The Daily Telegraph compared The Hatton Garden Job with "a bizarre, Brechtian joke at the audience’s expense"? (Source: as before)
- Gerda Arendt I take your point on “begins to feel”, is ALT1 better? I was struggling to find an interesting hook that was about the film and not the crime. On your other point, the outline is of the film, but inevitably it’s also about the crime, as the subtitle of the film is “the remarkable true story”. Moonraker (talk) 07:24, 14 March 2018 (UTC)
yes, I like that much better, thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:01, 14 March 2018 (UTC)
- Gerda Arendt I take your point on “begins to feel”, is ALT1 better? I was struggling to find an interesting hook that was about the film and not the crime. On your other point, the outline is of the film, but inevitably it’s also about the crime, as the subtitle of the film is “the remarkable true story”. Moonraker (talk) 07:24, 14 March 2018 (UTC)
