- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by PrimalMustelid talk 12:38, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
DYK toolbox |
---|
Tokoyama
- ... that tokoyama working in kabuki are divided into specialties named after the floors of the Kabuki-za?
- ALT0a: ... that tokoyama (traditional Japanese hairdressers) working in kabuki are divided into specialties named after the floors of the Kabuki-za?
- ALT0b: ... that tokoyama working as kabuki hairdressers are divided into specialties named after the floors of the Kabuki-za? Source: Gunji, Masakatsu (1985). Kabuki. Kodansha International. p. 50. ISBN 0870117327.
- Reviewed:
Improved to Good Article status by OtharLuin (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.OtharLuin (talk) 08:47, 26 March 2024 (UTC).
- General eligibility:
- New enough:
- Long enough:
- Other problems:
Policy compliance:
- Adequate sourcing:
- Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
- Other problems:
Hook eligibility:
- Cited:
- Interesting:
- Other problems:
QPQ: Done. |
Overall: The article was recently promoted to GA and has no copyright issues picked up by Earwig. QPQ not needed and the hook is interesting. @OtharLuin: Can you provide a different source or archive? I can't see page 50 with the provided source. -- ZooBlazer 18:18, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
- Are you unable to access the book itself or are you unable to access it because you don't have an archive.org account? As for other sources, all I have to offer is either the official Kabuki-za website or Kabuki21's (a subject matter expert) kabuki glossary, but it won't be linked to the hook, which can be found in the books on archive.org only. nikai tokoyama + sangai tokoyama - OtharLuin (talk) 18:54, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
Managed to get the page to work on the archive, so everything looks GTG now. Nice work. -- ZooBlazer 19:35, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
@ZooBlazer and OtharLuin: per WP:DYKINT, hooks are supposed to be interesting to those with no knowledge of the subject; however, this hook is unintelligible if you do not know the subject or Japanese well. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 10:55, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: I respectfully disagree on the question of intelligibility however I admit that the word tokoyama perhaps requires some clarification, tell me what you think. - OtharLuin (talk) 11:28, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
- Per WP:DYKMOS, hooks should not contain parentheses, OtharLuin. How about the following ALT0a: ... that traditional Japanese hairdressers working in kabuki theatre are divided into specialties named after the floors of the Kabuki-za in Tokyo? This at least gives the reader some idea of what the hook is going on about. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:36, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: I respectfully disagree on the question of intelligibility however I admit that the word tokoyama perhaps requires some clarification, tell me what you think. - OtharLuin (talk) 11:28, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
- Are you unable to access the book itself or are you unable to access it because you don't have an archive.org account? As for other sources, all I have to offer is either the official Kabuki-za website or Kabuki21's (a subject matter expert) kabuki glossary, but it won't be linked to the hook, which can be found in the books on archive.org only. nikai tokoyama + sangai tokoyama - OtharLuin (talk) 18:54, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: Not convinced by your proposal too, I'd like to keep the word tokoyama... I modified the initial hook - OtharLuin (talk) 12:36, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
- Is it okay now or do you want further changes AirshipJungleman29? -- ZooBlazer 15:28, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Please do not modify the original hook OtharLuin; it makes it confusing for new reviewers. For reference, OtharLuin's alterations are now titled ALT0a and ALT0b. ALT0b is borderline, because I still think that the ability of non-familiar readers to understand the hook and get interested is severely compromised, but if another promoter feels that they can promote, I'll leave it up to them. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:33, 15 April 2024 (UTC)