Template:Did you know nominations/Trafalgar Cemetery

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 04:05, 20 October 2012 (UTC)

Trafalgar Cemetery

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... that the Battle of Trafalgar is commemorated today in Gibraltar's Trafalgar Cemetery (pictured), where some of the casualties are buried?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Bab al-Nairab

Created/expanded by ACP2011 (talk). Nominated by Prioryman (talk) at 06:44, 18 October 2012 (UTC)

Note: this nomination is intended to run on Trafalgar Day, 21 October 2012

Per the discussion at Wikipedia talk:Did you know/GibraltarPediA Options, Gibraltar-related articles are temporarily being reviewed by two individuals. In addition to the regular DYK criteria, at least one reviewer should also indicate whether they perceive any conflict of interest or promotional concerns about the article under review. IP addresses are not allowed to do the reviews.

Review 1:

Article does not contains anything "promotional".♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:52, 18 October 2012 (UTC)

Review 2:

The x5 expansion seems fine and I've checked out all the sources, which seem quite acceptable. The hook seems a bit weak though. It should perhaps mention that sailors from the battle are buried there, which isn't obvious. Perhaps something like "... that the Battle of Trafalgar is commemorated today in Gibraltar's Trafalgar Cemetery (pictured), where some of the dead sailors are buried?" Warden (talk) 19:27, 18 October 2012 (UTC)

That's a very good suggestion. I've rewritten the hook accordingly. Thanks for the feedback and the review. Prioryman (talk) 19:34, 18 October 2012 (UTC)