Template:Did you know nominations/Typhoon Phyllis (1975)

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The result was: promoted by Alex ShihTalk 12:07, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

Typhoon Phyllis (1975), Typhoon Rita (1975)

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Created by Yellow Evan (talk). Self-nominated at 15:53, 13 July 2017 (UTC).

  • Thanks for the articles and the DYK. Both articles are well referenced, long and new enough and are free from copyright issues ([1] & [2]). QPQ's done, too. The hook is interesting and there's a citation immediately coming after it in Typhoon Phyllis (1975) while I could not find the hook in the other article (Please insert the hook in Typhoon Rita (1975), too.) Moreover, please edit the hook to indicate that the cyclones "contributed to the majority of tropical cyclone casualties." --Mhhossein talk 06:35, 18 July 2017 (UTC)
  • @Mhhossein: Thanks for the review. Added missing word. Hook is in the second article: "Around this time, Rita became the second of seven tropical cyclones that season to be observed by Japanese radar." YE Pacific Hurricane 06:42, 18 July 2017 (UTC)
Thanks for the corrections. But AFAIK, both hooks should be found in both articles. --Mhhossein talk 13:42, 19 July 2017 (UTC)
@Mhhossein: And that is currently the case. YE Pacific Hurricane 15:03, 19 July 2017 (UTC)
Would you mind helping me with finding the original hook in Typhoon Rita (1975)? Thanks. --Mhhossein talk 10:35, 20 July 2017 (UTC)
@Mhhossein: "Combined with Typhoon Phyllis, the two storms contributed to the majority of tropical cyclone casualties in Japan during the 1975 Pacific typhoon season.[4] " YE Pacific Hurricane 15:27, 20 July 2017 (UTC)
Sorry for the delay. I don't know why I did not get notified by your ping! Anyway, thanks for adding the hook to the article. Every thing is alright with both articles. The nomination can go ahead toward Preb area now. Mhhossein talk 07:56, 26 July 2017 (UTC)