Template:Did you know nominations/William Hood Dunwoody

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The result was: promoted by — Maile (talk) 16:01, 12 September 2015 (UTC)

William Hood Dunwoody

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Portrait of William Hood Dunwoody by Julian Russell Story

... that William Hood Dunwoody (pictured) was a silent partner in what was to become General Mills?

ALT1:... that the Minneapolis Institute of Art bought what is called one of the best Rembrandts in the United States (pictured) with a gift from William Hood Dunwoody?
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Comment: picture for ALT1

Created by SusanLesch (talk). Self-nominated at 01:39, 19 August 2015 (UTC).

Comment I'm sure Lucretia is "called one of the best Rembrandts in the United States" but the only ref here is a museum publication from 1922, which I can't see. Also chunks of the article should be integrated into Minneapolis Institute of Art (not a DYK requirement). Johnbod (talk) 15:35, 22 August 2015 (UTC)

Hi, Johnbod. You're right I neglected a citation. It's there now! P.S. Moved some to the MIA article. There's an argument for moving the gallery but I don't know the context well enough to do that (MIA may have several or many million dollar donors). -SusanLesch (talk) 14:16, 23 August 2015 (UTC)

Full review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:41, 26 August 2015 (UTC)

This article is new enough and long enough. The image is in the public domain, the article is neutral and I detected no close paraphrasing. Both the hooks are acceptable, with inline citations, but I would go for the original hook as in ALT1 it is not readily apparent which article the hook is about. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:31, 5 September 2015 (UTC)