Template:Did you know nominations/William Vitarelli

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:51, 18 June 2016 (UTC)

William Vitarelli

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... that after William Vitarelli won a US Supreme Court case that associated him with the Communist Party USA, he led various community and educational projects in Micronesia?

ALT1:... that William Vitarelli led various community and educational projects in Micronesia after winning a US Supreme Court case that associated him with the Communist Party USA?
Reviewed: Mary Alice Powell Lindsay

Created by FallingGravity (talk). Self-nominated at 21:56, 5 June 2016 (UTC).

@FallingGravity: New enough when nominated; long enough; no copyvio or close paraphrasing; neutral; QPQ done. The hooks are a little awkwardly phrased, though - it wasn't the case itself that associated him with the Communist Party. ALT1 is a little cleaner, so maybe:
- ALT2:... that William Vitarelli led community and educational projects in Micronesia after winning a US Supreme Court case about his alleged associations with the Communist Party USA?

Opabinia regalis (talk) 04:56, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

@FallingGravity: Is that copyedited hook OK with you? Opabinia regalis (talk) 00:45, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, it looks great. My only quibble would be if the word "concerning" would be better than the word "about", though my mind keeps flip-flopping on the issue. I figure they both mean pretty much the same thing. FallingGravity (talk) 00:51, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

In that case, good to go, either word is fine :) Opabinia regalis (talk) 06:28, 17 June 2016 (UTC)