Template:Did you know nominations/Wirjono Prodjodikoro

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 13:48, 25 December 2011 (UTC)

Wirjono Prodjodikoro

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Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 14:11, 11 December 2011 (UTC)

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Eisfbnore talk Eisfbnore talk Eisfbnore talk AGF for the Indonesian sources and the offline in English I can't access Eisfbnore talk Eisfbnore talk The section 'Personal life' suffers from peacockery and weasel wordings. Eisfbnore talk

--Eisfbnore talk 20:32, 22 December 2011 (UTC)

  • Personal life section removed as none of it was entirely necessary, although perhaps useful. Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:50, 22 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Issues have been addressed. Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:29, 24 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Article looks good now, no overt problems. Offline hook refs AGF. I prefer the first hook; I tweaked the language in both. Yoninah (talk) 21:07, 24 December 2011 (UTC)