Template:Did you know nominations/Youth in Nigeria

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by BlueMoonset (talk) 17:40, 11 December 2014 (UTC)
Hook improperly made, and nominator never responded to talk-page notifications.

Youth in Nigeria

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~~... that youth in Nigeria are ...?~~

Comment: This article was created as a part of a Global Youth Studies class assignment.

Created by Hatigges (talk). Nominated by Gobonobo (talk) at 06:48, 21 November 2014 (UTC).

IMO this is not a hook. Also there are numerous tags in the article text that need to be cleaned up before this is approved. Yoninah (talk) 14:16, 25 November 2014 (UTC)
The hook is not a hook. HYH.124 (talk) 10:07, 26 November 2014 (UTC)

The "citation needed" tags have been removed, but the hook is unacceptable and the sourcing is still quite problematic. The primary source (FN1) is just given as "Nigeria 2009 National Youth Policy", and there must be more information included about it than just what I'm assuming is a document title. There are two bare URLs, FN5 and FN8, which are not allowed for DYKs; further, FN8 is an invalid URL, and assuming the space was added accidentally, takes you to a web page that doesn't mention Nigeria at all. If this is to be cited, an exact web page is needed, along with additional information. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:44, 2 December 2014 (UTC)

No response from nominator despite two pings on talk page (the pings have since been archived off the page), and plenty of edits in the interim by said nominator. Closing as improperly nominated and subsequently abandoned. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:40, 11 December 2014 (UTC)