Template talk:Did you know/Shinde Chhatri

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Crisco 1492

Shinde Chhatri

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The result was: rejected by PanydThe muffin is not subtle

  • ... that you cannot open your umbrella when inside Shinde Chhatri, a memorial to Mahadji Shinde, even when it is raining as it is considered disrespectful to the warrior?

Created by Tambeparag (talk). Nominated by Srikeit (talk) at 06:00, 27 July 2011 (UTC)Reply

  • Now that I think of it, it might be even better without "a memorial to the warrior Mahadji Shinde]]"... loses some context, but makes the hook shorter, punchier, and it might be more likely that people click it to find out more. rʨanaɢ (talk) 01:57, 28 July 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • Like ALT2: ... that when at Shinde Chhatri visitors cannot open their umbrellas even in rain?
Good idea. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:47, 7 August 2011 (UTC)Reply
  Article currently has an expansion tag and there are some unreferenced sentences. [1] Seems to be some close paraphrasing too. Otherwise, length and date check out. Hook fact is referenced. Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:14, 9 August 2011 (UTC)Reply
  Issues not addressed in one week. Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:45, 16 August 2011 (UTC)Reply