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Hello! I am an active participant in my college's Gender Studies class and am particularly interested in topics regarding Transgender Healthcare and Transgender people and military service, along with women in military service.
First Edit Practice
Header: Grammar Edit
Text: "The word "lesbian" in the line "...that they had less to lose than lesbian or gay men..." under the "Criticism" heading should be changed to either "lesbians" or more accurately, the phrase "lesbian women"."
Second Edit Practice
Header: Clarification/Word Choice Edit
Text: "It would be better understood if there was a clarification made between the "guard" and the "reserve" in the line, "It is estimated as of 2014 that there are approximately 15,500 transgender individuals either serving on active duty or in the guard or reserve forces within the U.S. Military." under the "United States" subheading. I believe there should be a revision differentiating between the two by adding the phrases "National Guard" and "Army Reserve".