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Overall, the content provided in this article is plentiful and relevant to the topic of Comparative psychology.
There are some words and phrases throughout the article that could be linked to other Wikipedia pages so that the article can be better connected to other Wikipedia content. This would also allow the reader to have a better idea about the meaning of certain words and phrases or the background of significant people mentioned. Such words, names and phrases include: phylogenetic history, Niko Tinbergen and reproductive success. These words, names and phrases could be linked as such: Phylogenetic history, Niko Tinbergen, reproductive success.
The abundance of information provided in the article is organized into 12 different sections. The division of the article into sections is very helpful because it makes the article easy to navigate through and allows the reader to narrow their search to specific information about Comparative psychology.
Some sections in the article are smaller than others and more information could be added to make each section approximately the same size and equally represented. For example, the sections on "Animal cognition" and "Disorders of animal behaviour" could be made larger.
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Wikipedia discusses the topic of Comparative psychology in a much more detailed, formal manner than how it was discussed in class. Much of the information learned in class is included in the article but there is a lot of information from the article that was not discussed in class, especially in the "History" section.
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All of these topics sounds promising but a word of caution for Vacuum Activity, make sure you provide new information that does not overlap with the Fixed Action Pattern page. In all cases, make sure you focus on the animal behaviour aspects and can find enough articles to support the topics
The existing article is stub-class and describes interspecies friendship but focusses on mostly the friendship between humans and dogs
There are no sections present about friendships between other animals and the behaviours that exist in these friendships
I plan on adding a section about behaviours that exist in other interspecies friendships (besides humans and dogs)
I plan on adding descriptions about human bonds with other animals
I plan on describing interspecies communication and how that relates to friendships
I plan on describing how interspecies friendships come about (evolutionary approach) and going more in-depth about mutualism
Possible Reference Papers:
Sanders, C. (2003). Actions Speak Louder than Words: Close Relationships between Humans and Nonhuman Animals. Symbolic Interaction.,26(3), 405-426.
Zuberbhler, K. (2000). Interspecies semantic communication in two forest primates. Proceedings of the Royal Society B: Biological Sciences,267(1444), 713-718.
Lyn, Heidi, Greenfield, Patricia, & Savage-Rumbaugh, Sue. (2006). The Development of Representational Play in Chimpanzees and Bonobos: Evolutionary Implications, Pretense, and the Role of Interspecies Communication. Cognitive Development,21(3), 199-213
Munera, J. (2008). Early introduction age and other factors: Precursors to feline/canine friendship? Journal of Applied Companion Animal Behavior, 2(1), 29–32.
Feuerstein, & Terkel. (2008). Interrelationships of dogs ( Canis familiaris) and cats ( Felis catus L.) living under the same roof. Applied Animal Behaviour Science,113(1), 150-165.
Kraus, D. (2011). Friends: True Stories of Extraordinary Animal Friendships. The Booklist,108(1), 99.
Borgi, M., & Cirulli, F. (2016). Pet Face: Mechanisms Underlying Human-Animal Relationships. Frontiers in Psychology,7, 298.
