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Saturn star (talk) 22:15, 2 February 2015 (UTC)Reply

Welcome aboard

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Hi. Glad to see you set up an account and enroll. Encounter any difficulties? Any suggestions for the instructions?

Hope you enjoy browsing some Hebrew Bible articles. Might start from Category:Hebrew Bible.

Cheers, ProfGray (talk) 00:55, 3 February 2015 (UTC)Reply


No difficulties as of now. This is all new to me so I am enjoying figuring it all out.

kudos

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Thanks for starting peer review! — Preceding unsigned comment added by ProfGray (talkcontribs) 20:07, 11 February 2015 (UTC)Reply

Trible

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Your paraphrase is good. But it reads more like a description of the story, rather than a description of Trible's argument. I think you need to add Trible into the text more, and help the reader see where Trible is making points (that aren't the plain meaning of the text). Thanks! ProfGray (talk) 19:15, 6 April 2015 (UTC)Reply