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The Massachusetts Bible Society
editHi, you left a note at WP:EAR#The Massachusetts Bible Society asking for someone to look at your draft article. Firstly, the usual practice is to put draft articles into a subpage, such as User:Annerp1/Massachusetts Bible Society. The advantage of this is that you can have more than one draft article on the go and you can put information about yourself (if you wish to) on your user page. Now the artcile itself:
- The picture is too big. It should be a thumbnail.
- Direct html links in the prose are deprecated, use inline citations instead.
I have reworked the article and placed it at User:Annerp1/Massachusetts Bible Society. In my opinion the reworked artcile is reasonably neutral and could be placed in main space. It would be good to find other newspaper references from other newspapers as currently they are all one journalist in one newspaper. Much else obviously can be added. Hope this helps. Jezhotwells (talk) 19:21, 9 March 2010 (UTC)