User talk:Aoba47/Archive 2
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Shine (Gwen Stefani song)
Hello, Aoba47. This is a courtesy notice that the copy edit you requested for Shine (Gwen Stefani song) at the Guild of Copy Editors requests page is now complete. All feedback welcome! Cheers, Baffle gab1978 (talk) 22:18, 8 April 2016 (UTC) |
- @Baffle gab1978: Thank you! Let me know if you have any questions about the article that need to be clarified. Aoba47 (talk) 23:23, 8 April 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks Aoba47, the article was straightforward to copyedit, though feel free to correct anything I may have misinterpreted, or other silly errors on my part. Cheers, Baffle gab1978 (talk) 01:06, 9 April 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you! You helped to improve it a lot. Aoba47 (talk) 03:23, 9 April 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks Aoba47, the article was straightforward to copyedit, though feel free to correct anything I may have misinterpreted, or other silly errors on my part. Cheers, Baffle gab1978 (talk) 01:06, 9 April 2016 (UTC)
GA Cup
Sorry to see you leave the GA Cup! You did a lot of good work in round one. :) Johanna(talk to me!) 02:23, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
- @Johanna: Thank you! That is very sweet. I enjoying being able to participate in the GA cup, but unfortunately school and work got really intense. I am glad that I got a chance to work with you as you have done a lot of great work on here and I am just glad that I am not completing messing everything up on here lol. Hope you are having a great weekend. :-) Aoba47 (talk) 03:35, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
Reference errors on 19 April
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No Time for It
Hello: The copy edit you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article No Time for It has been completed. Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.
You will notice that I archived one of the article’s citations (#1). I suggest that you archive the rest of the URLs as time allows. This ensures that the article's references are available "forever" and that it doesn’t develop “dead links” over time. The site I use is https://archive.org/web/. Simply copy the URL in the citation and paste it in the "Save Page Now" box on the archive.org site and click save. This creates a copy of the original page and provides you with a new URL to add to the original citation. If you look at the URL I've archived you'll see the syntax. You add the new URL to the end of the original citation like this: |archiveurl= http etc|archivedate=25 April 2016}}. Not all websites allow archiving - CBS TV news and the NY Times are two I've come across, so there's not much you can do about that unless there is an alternate citation you could use.
Kind regards,
Twofingered Typist (talk) 13:34, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
- @Twofingered Typist: Thank you! The article looks and flows a lot better now. I have been having some trouble with https://archive.org/web/, but I will try it again in the future. Aoba47 (talk) 14:18, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
A barnstar for you!
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For expanding Shine (Gwen Stefani song) during the FA review process! Keep up the great work! Carbrera (talk) 00:54, 28 April 2016 (UTC) |
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 01:00, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
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2016 GA Cup-Round 3
Hello, GA Cup competitors! Thursday saw the end of Round 2. Sainsf once again took out Round 2 with an amazing score of 996 (a higher score then he received in Round 1!). In second place, MPJ-DK earned an astounding 541 points, and in third place, Carbrera received 419 points. In Round 2, 142 reviews were completed! At the beginning of April, there were 486 outstanding nominations in the GAN queue; by the end of Round 1, there were 384. Another demonstrable way in which this competition has made a difference is in the length of time articles languish in the queue. At the beginning of this GA Cup, the longest wait was over 9 months [1]; at the end of Round 2, the longest wait had decreased significantly, to a little over 5 months.[2] It's clear that we continue to make a difference at GAN and throughout Wikipedia, something we should all be proud of. Thanks to all our competitors for helping to make the GA Cup a continued success, and for your part in helping other editors improve articles. We hope to see all remaining users fighting it out in Round 3 so we can keep lowering the backlog as much as possible. To qualify for the third round, contestants had to earn the two highest scores in each of the four pools in Round 2; plus, one wildcard. We had an unusual occurrence happen in Round 2: because only one contestant submitted reviews in one pool, we selected the contestant with the next highest score to move forward to Round 3. (There will be a rule change for future competitions in case something like this happens again.) For Round 3, users were placed in 3 random pools of 3. To qualify for the Final of the 3rd Annual GA Cup, the top user in each pool will progress, and there will also be one wildcard. This means that the participant who comes in 4th place (all pools combined) will also move on. Round 3 will start on May 1 at 0:00:01 UTC and end on May 29 at 23:59:59 UTC. Information about Round 3 and the pools can be found here. Good luck and have fun! Cheers from Figureskatingfan, 3family6, Jaguar, MrWooHoo, and Zwerg Nase. To subscribe or unsubscribe to future GA Cup newsletter, please add or remove your name to our mailing list. If you are a participant still competing, you will be on the mailing list no matter what as this is the easiest way to communicate between all participants.
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GA Cup-Round 3 Clarification
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Thank you for pointing that out and saving me from more embarrassment - I really need to keep it in mind to do that. It's been too many times. JWNoctistalk to me 02:07, 9 May 2016 (UTC)
- No worries, I make a lot of mistakes on here that were far more embarrassing lol. Thank you for commenting! Aoba47 (talk) 04:31, 9 May 2016 (UTC)
Date inconsistency in Shine (Gwen Stefani song)
I noticed that you put up Shine (Gwen Stefani song) for a copy edit request and hope to get it to FA. I did a few quick cleanup steps and a couple of minor copy edits.
While looking through the citations, I see that there are a few date formats that don't match the most commonly used format. That should be cleaned up before the article goes to FAC. Good luck! – Jonesey95 (talk) 12:37, 17 May 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for the c/e. Since I am still very new to Wikipedia, I still have to do research on here to find the correct way of citing dates. I will fix it as soon as I can. Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 17:19, 17 May 2016 (UTC)
Bizounce
Hello Aoba47:
The copy edit you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article Bizounce has been completed.
Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.
Don't forget to archive your article's URLs when you have time.
Kind regards,
Twofingered Typist (talk) 18:03, 17 May 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you. I will archive the article's URLs as soon as I have time. Aoba47 (talk) 18:57, 17 May 2016 (UTC)
A barnstar for you!
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Thank you for the peer review! Moscowamerican (talk) 20:42, 17 May 2016 (UTC) |
Thank you! Just trying to help. Aoba47 (talk) 20:52, 17 May 2016 (UTC)
Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Bizounce you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 03:01, 19 May 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 03:02, 19 May 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of No Time for It
Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article No Time for It you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 03:01, 19 May 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 03:02, 19 May 2016 (UTC)
File:DebbiMorganSeer.png listed for discussion
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- @Stefan2: I'll just remove the image from the article. Aoba47 (talk) 14:08, 26 May 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Liz Sanbourne
Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Liz Sanbourne you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 00:40, 29 May 2016 (UTC)
The article Bizounce you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Bizounce for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 05:01, 29 May 2016 (UTC)
The article Bizounce you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Bizounce for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 00:21, 30 May 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Whitney Russell
Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Whitney Russell you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Sainsf -- Sainsf (talk) 11:20, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
Precious
you stand apart
Thank you for all your amazing contributions to Wikipedia articles related to songs and television, thorough GA reviews (we miss you at the GA Cup!) and your polite and collaborative attitude. You must be one of the few editors who are so productive from the first day of joining here, most others take a lot of time to learn, but you won a barnstar in your first 15 days! We wish you the best, and would love to see more from you in the future. It's your day, why? because you are an awesome Wikipedian!
Sainsf (talk · contribs) 11:39, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you! That is really kind and amazing for you to do. I am just trying to do my best on here and I have definitely made plenty of mistakes, but I greatly appreciate your message. I look forward to working with you in the future. Hope you have a great day! Aoba47 (talk) 15:48, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
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Your GA nomination of No Time for It
The article No Time for It you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:No Time for It for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 03:01, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Russell family (Passions)
Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Russell family (Passions) you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 03:40, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of No Time for It
The article No Time for It you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:No Time for It for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 23:41, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
2016 GA Cup-Finals
Hello, GA Cup competitors! Tuesday saw the end of Round 3. Sainsf, for the third time, won with a sizable 487 points and a shocking 29 articles reviewed. In second, MPJ-DK had 168 points and 7 reviewed articles. In second place, MPJ-DK earned 168 points with just 7 articles, and in third place, Carbrera received 137 points with just 9 articles. Our two wildcard slots went to J Milburn with 122 points and Sturmvogel 66 with 101 points. In Round 3, 65 reviews were completed! At the beginning of the GA Cup, there were 595 outstanding nominations in the GAN queue; by the end of Round 3, there were 394. Another demonstrable way in which this competition has made a difference is in the length of time articles languish in the queue. At the beginning of the GA Cup, the longest wait was over 9 months [3]; at the end of Round 3, the longest wait had decreased significantly, to a little over 5 months [4]—nothing before 2016. It's clear that we continue to make a difference at GAN and throughout Wikipedia, something we should all be proud of. Thanks to all our competitors for helping to make the GA Cup a continued success, and for your part in helping other editors improve articles. We hope to see all remaining users fighting it out in the Finals for the GA Cup so that are successes continue. To qualify for the Finals, contestants had to earn the highest scores in each of the three pools in Round 3; plus, as well as the top 2 of all remaining users in all of the pools. For the Finals, users were placed in one pool of the remaining five users. To win the GA Cup, you must have the most points. The Finals started on June 1 at 0:00:01 UTC' and end on June 30 at 23:59:59 UTC. Information about the Finals and the pools can be found here. A clarification: in order for the points to count, you must mark your reviews as completed; it's not up to the judges to ensure that all reviews are completed by the end of a round. We wish all the contestants the best of luck! Cheers from Figureskatingfan, 3family6, Jaguar, MrWooHoo, and Zwerg Nase. To subscribe or unsubscribe to future GA Cup newsletter, please add or remove your name to our mailing list. If you are a participant still competing, you will be on the mailing list no matter what as this is the easiest way to communicate between all participants.
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Gwen Stefani songs: "Truth", "Asking 4 It", "Rare"
Could you do me a huge favor? The mentioned songs have been listed for deletion here, despite them having independent sources written about them. I know you reviewed two out of the three of them, so your input may be helpful. Thank you very much. Carbrera (talk) 20:36, 3 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Carbrera: Will do; thank you for bringing this to my attention. Aoba47 (talk) 20:37, 3 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Liz Sanbourne
The article Liz Sanbourne you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Liz Sanbourne for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 21:40, 3 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Liz Sanbourne
The article Liz Sanbourne you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Liz Sanbourne for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 03:01, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Olivia (Olivia album)
Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Olivia (Olivia album) you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 03:20, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Whitney Russell
The article Whitney Russell you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Whitney Russell for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Sainsf -- Sainsf (talk) 05:21, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
Shine (Gwen Stefani song)
Hello Aoba47:
The copy edit you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article Shine (Gwen Stefani song) has been completed. I must say that I too was having trouble understanding "the prose is not of FA standard" comment. I hope my minor fixes help.
Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.
Kind regards,
Twofingered Typist (talk) 13:36, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for your help! You are always a really great editor and your fixes definitely help. Aoba47 (talk) 16:21, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks. I've had a look after your updates and made very few changes. I clarified a point: "She later praised the lyrics after watching the film with her children and seeing the complete animation for the Paddington Bear character." I don't have access to the DVD interview so I wanted to make sure that she was referring to the character's animation and not the film itself. If it was in fact the complete film, you'll have to fix this in the lead and in the Composition section. Regards. Twofingered Typist (talk) 11:53, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you; she is referring to the character so the clarification was needed. Aoba47 (talk) 15:03, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks. I've had a look after your updates and made very few changes. I clarified a point: "She later praised the lyrics after watching the film with her children and seeing the complete animation for the Paddington Bear character." I don't have access to the DVD interview so I wanted to make sure that she was referring to the character's animation and not the film itself. If it was in fact the complete film, you'll have to fix this in the lead and in the Composition section. Regards. Twofingered Typist (talk) 11:53, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
Vincent Clarkson
Hello Aoba47:
I just wanted to let you know that I have finished the copy edit you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article Vincent Clarkson. Since it is discussing a television show character I made a number of changes to the verb tenses so that the show is described in the present tense. I hope I caught them all.
Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.
Kind regards,
Twofingered Typist (talk) 21:29, 7 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for copyediting for the article. I always forget about tense when writing so I will keep that in mind for that future. Aoba47 (talk) 21:55, 7 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Olivia (Olivia album)
The article Olivia (Olivia album) you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Olivia (Olivia album) for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 17:00, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Olivia (Olivia album)
The article Olivia (Olivia album) you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Olivia (Olivia album) for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 00:02, 11 June 2016 (UTC)
DYK nomination of Bizounce
Hello! Your submission of Bizounce at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and some issues with it may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) underneath your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! Random86 (talk) 01:50, 11 June 2016 (UTC)
DYK for Bizounce
On 14 June 2016, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article Bizounce, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that Olivia's debut single "Bizounce" was described as giving a "steely boot to a crap lover" in the style of TLC, Kelis, and Eve? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Bizounce. You are welcome to check how many page hits the article got while on the front page (here's how, Bizounce), and it may be added to the statistics page if the total is over 5,000. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.
The DYK project (nominate) 12:02, 14 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Russell family (Passions)
The article Russell family (Passions) you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Russell family (Passions) for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 00:25, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Russell family (Passions)
The article Russell family (Passions) you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Russell family (Passions) for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 02:21, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Vincent Clarkson
Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Vincent Clarkson you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 03:21, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Chad Harris-Crane
Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Chad Harris-Crane you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 13:20, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Vincent Clarkson
The article Vincent Clarkson you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Vincent Clarkson for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 13:20, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
Kyra (Charmed)
Hello Aoba47:
The copy edit you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article Kyra (Charmed) has been completed.
Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.
Kind regards,
Twofingered Typist (talk) 15:20, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 16:33, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Vincent Clarkson
The article Vincent Clarkson you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Vincent Clarkson for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 20:41, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Chad Harris-Crane
The article Chad Harris-Crane you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Chad Harris-Crane for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 22:20, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Chad Harris-Crane
The article Chad Harris-Crane you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Chad Harris-Crane for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 03:01, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
DYK for No Time for It
On 21 June 2016, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article No Time for It, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that Fantasia described her song "No Time for It" as a combination of her childhood singing in church and desire to "tap into that whole rock world"? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/No Time for It. You are welcome to check how many page hits the article got while on the front page (here's how, No Time for It), and it may be added to the statistics page if the total is over 5,000. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.
— Coffee // have a cup // beans // 00:02, 21 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Kyra (Charmed)
Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Kyra (Charmed) you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Sainsf -- Sainsf (talk) 02:20, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Billie Jenkins
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Your GA nomination of Christy Jenkins
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Don't give up
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- @AJona1992: Thank you for your kind words! My decision to end the peer review and consider retirement from here actually did not have anything to do with the FAC process. I appreciate all of the constructive feedback. However, I am too busy with school and work to devote a lot of time to Wikipedia anymore. I have decided to take a wiki break instead. Thank you again for your comments. :-) Aoba47 (talk) 16:28, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
- You're welcome and hope to see you back soon. Take care – jona ✉ 18:14, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
- @AJona1992: I ended up just working on a completely different article instead lol. I think for the time I am happy with bringing "Shine" to the level of a GA article. I really wanted to get it to FA since it would be the first unreleased song brought up to that level (at least as far as I know). I may revisit it when I am less stressed about it. Congratulations on Missing My Baby; it makes me want to listen to more Selena lol. Hope all your work on here is going well. Aoba47 (talk) 06:26, 24 June 2016 (UTC)
- Like – jona ✉ 01:05, 25 June 2016 (UTC)
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- @Baffle gab1978: Thank you! Let me know if there is anything that I need to do. Aoba47 (talk) 00:12, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
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A barnstar for you!
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For your continuous work to improve TV industry related articles. Here's one for the flawless and expeditious work on Did You Hear What Happened to Charlotte King?. Good job. :) NumerounovedantTalk 20:08, 28 June 2016 (UTC) |
- @Numerounovedant: Thank you for your support! I am planning on c/e and preparing that article for FAC sometime in the future because I think that episode and the show deserves more attention. You do a lot of excellent work on here so it means a lot to hear this from you. Let me know if there is anything I can do to help you anytime :-) Aoba47 (talk) 21:18, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
- I sure will when I have something that may interest you. Till then good luck with this and ping me if you need any help. NumerounovedantTalk 07:06, 29 June 2016 (UTC)
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DYK for Christy Jenkins
On 2 July 2016, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article Christy Jenkins, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that Brad Kern cited the nature versus nurture debate as one of the issues related to Christy Jenkins? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Christy Jenkins. You are welcome to check how many page hits the article got while on the front page (here's how, Christy Jenkins), and it may be added to the statistics page if the total is over 5,000. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.
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GA Review
Hey Aoba, hope you doing good. If you find some spare time you would you mind taking up the review for Mélanie Laurent, if the article interests you. NumerounovedantTalk 15:30, 11 July 2016 (UTC)
- @Numerounovedant: Thank you for your comment and I hope everything is going well for you as well. Unfortunately, I will be too busy with school and work to do an adequate job on the GA review for your article. Besides, my primary area of focus on here is television and fictional characters (and occasionally music), and articles on living people are a little out of my comfort zone so I do not want to do anything incorrectly. One thing I did notice when looking over the article was that you should attribute and source the quote in the "Early life" section. Otherwise, it is a very interesting read (I never heard of this woman before so it was cool to learn more about someone else). One of these days, I'll have to learn about the style and approach for articles on living people on here. Aoba47 (talk) 06:32, 12 July 2016 (UTC)
- No problem, however, I strongly recommend you watch Inglorious Bastards (if you haven't), as Laurent plays a French cinema owner who plans to assassinate Adolf Hilter. It also has a strong ensemble with Brad Pitt, Christopher Waltz and Diane Kruger involved in another (more dynamic and action filled) way of carrying their assassination plans. I am sure you'll love the film and Laurent's performance of course. XD NumerounovedantTalk 13:21, 12 July 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for the recommendation! I keep meaning to watch that movie (It looks awesome and I am probably one of the last people to have not seen it yet lol). Good luck with the article! Aoba47 (talk) 18:48, 12 July 2016 (UTC)
Hello, Aoba47. This is a courtesy notice that the copy edit you requested for Did You Hear What Happened to Charlotte King? at the Guild of Copy Editors requests page is now complete. All feedback welcome! Good luck with FA and all the best, Miniapolis 17:39, 11 July 2016 (UTC) |
- Thank you! You have improved the article a great deal, and I appreciate it a lot. Aoba47 (talk) 17:42, 11 July 2016 (UTC)
- Glad to help. Good luck and all the best, Miniapolis 23:02, 11 July 2016 (UTC)
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- @CAWylie: Thank you very much for your encouragement! If I ever encounter any problems or need any guidance, I will definitely reach out to the WikiProject directly. I am very grateful to have access to the project, and to have received such warm support and constructive criticism since I first joined Wikipedia. Aoba47 (talk) 00:44, 15 July 2016 (UTC)
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FAC
You might want to invite reviewers for your nomination, try helping in other FAC's or maybe other reviews so you can approach editors for help with your own. I'll put up my comments shortly. Good Luck. (Stay away from Wikipedia:Canvassing) NumerounovedantTalk 15:47, 23 July 2016 (UTC)
- @Numerounovedant: Thank you for your advice! I was hesitant about asking other users for comments as I did not want to accidentally violate Wikipedia:Canvassing. Aoba47 (talk) 17:52, 23 July 2016 (UTC)
- It isn't canvassing untill you leave a neutral message for help. :) NumerounovedantTalk 18:01, 23 July 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for the clarification. I was always a little uncertain about the rules when it came to that. Aoba47 (talk) 19:49, 23 July 2016 (UTC)
- It isn't canvassing untill you leave a neutral message for help. :) NumerounovedantTalk 18:01, 23 July 2016 (UTC)
DYK for Billie Jenkins
On 27 July 2016, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article Billie Jenkins, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that Brad Kern created the character Billie Jenkins to "lighten the load, screen-time wise" for Charmed 's three principal actors? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Billie Jenkins. You are welcome to check how many page hits the article got while on the front page (here's how, Billie Jenkins), and it may be added to the statistics page if the total is over 5,000. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.
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Love, Inc. (TV series)
Hello:
The copy edit that you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article Love, Inc. (TV series) has been completed.
A suggestion - the Critical Response has far more negative reviews than are warranted. Three or four of the harshest reviews is likely enough. At present it looks as if you've included every on-line mention you could find.
Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.
Kind regards,
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- @Twofingered Typist: Thank you for your comments; I will alter the "Reception" section according to your comments. The series primarily received negative reviews, but I will take out some of them. Aoba47 (talk) 16:27, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Twofingered Typist: I have made some adjustments to the "Reception" section, and combined two of the paragraphs. I have eliminated the source where I only cited a few words from the main article. Please let me know if the changes are good enough, or if you think more needs to cut to improve the article. I would really like to put this up for FAC sometime in the future so I greatly appreciate your feedback. Aoba47 (talk) 16:37, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Aoba47: These changes are a great improvement. Now there's a balance between positive and negative - and the negatives are from solid publications. Regards Twofingered Typist (talk) 18:04, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you again! I greatly appreciate your feedback. I hope you have a wonderful rest of your day. Aoba47 (talk) 18:28, 4 August 2016 (UTC)