Bushido77
Joined 22 October 2015
Latest comment: 16 days ago by Ktkvtsh in topic Your submission at Articles for creation: Robert Heisner (August 26)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Robert Heisner (August 11)
edit Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by HistoryTheorist were:
The comment the reviewer left was:
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Robert Heisner and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
- If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.
Hello, Bushido77!
Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ❤HistoryTheorist❤ 20:50, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Robert Heisner (August 21)
edit Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Jlwoodwa were:
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Robert Heisner and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
- If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.
- Thanks for the feedback. I am trying to learn this Wkipedia editing. I am surprised by the "neutral point of view" comment. I ran the article through Grammarly using the formal and academic settings. I will see if I can figure out my problems, and try again. Bushido77 (talk) 19:32, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
- If you are using generative AI to write some or all of your draft, you should read WP:LLM. jlwoodwa (talk) 20:18, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. No, I am not using any AI. Just Grammarly, which makes suggested edits based on my settings. I am doing all the writing myself. I set the Grammarly program for "academic" and "formal" which I had hoped would make the article more "encyclopedic." Apparently, I have more to go. Bushido77 (talk) 20:35, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
- If you are using generative AI to write some or all of your draft, you should read WP:LLM. jlwoodwa (talk) 20:18, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Robert Heisner (August 26)
edit Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ktkvtsh was:
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Robert Heisner and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
- If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.