User talk:Communista/sandbox

First Discussion

Starting my talk page Communista (talk) 13:53, 22 May 2024 (UTC)

Kinoti draft review

Hi, @Communista, I'm doing a short review as requested. It's a good start, so I'll suggest a few things you can work on. I'm willing to set up a zoom session to go deeper into any questions you might have. I tend to run reviews this way: I go through the article and list issues and things to work on. It can get extensive, so please excuse me if I come across as overly harsh; I've found that I get the most out of extensive reviews and that's how I learned to conduct them, so that's what I do. I also hate reviews that direct you to do things like, "Change the typo in the second section," when it's just as easy and saves more time for everyone to just correct spelling, grammar, and format errors and then explain what I've done in the edit summary. I may come here to explain what I've done, especially when it has to do with Wikipedia policies and traditions. Hope it's helpful. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 22:23, 17 June 2024 (UTC)

Communista, sorry I just noticed that I've already worked on/reviewed another sandbox draft, about the same subject, at User:Giluwa/sandbox. I sent the review and explanation for what I did in an email to User:RosPost. So please disregard what I've just said, you can delete it if you like. ;) Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 22:38, 17 June 2024 (UTC)

No Christine. Go ahead and review. We and Giluwa worked on the communista sandbox. just see if it has improved. I will be grateful 105.163.156.11 (talk) 00:46, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

please go ahead 105.163.156.11 (talk) 00:46, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

@Figureskatingfan we have worked on Kinoti's article and referenced it as much as we could. I see the Wikipedia administrator had requested for it. Kindly go through it and see if there is anything that we should add.

Thank you for your continued support. Communista (talk) 11:49, 14 July 2024 (UTC)