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Your submission at Articles for creation: John Shook (October 28)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ibjaja055 was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Ibjaja055 (talk) 22:24, 28 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hello, Fab Papa! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Ibjaja055 (talk) 22:24, 28 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hi lbjaja055,

Thanks for the feedback. It is my first page creation, so I was not expecting to get it right first time. I will go to the help desk to get help. Fab Papa (talk) 10:09, 29 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hi lbjaja055,

I have changed and added new sources to make sure they were all independent from the subject: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:John_Shook Fab Papa (talk) 12:29, 29 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

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