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BHP Billiton Ravensthorpe Nickel Project
editYour recently created article BHP Billiton Ravensthorpe Nickel Project already exists as Ravensthorpe Nickel Mine. I will propose a merger of the two as Wikipedia does not usually have two articles on the very same topic. Calistemon (talk) 23:42, 23 October 2010 (UTC)
- I've proposed a merger of the two articles into Ravensthorpe Nickel Mine. This does not mean, the content of your article will disapeear or your effort will have been wasted. Instead, the two articles will become one, with BHP Billiton Ravensthorpe Nickel Project becoming a redirect. My choice for the Ravensthorpe Nickel Mine is because the other title is outdated as BHP does not own the project anymore. Please feel free to comment at Talk:Ravensthorpe Nickel Mine and participate in the merger. Calistemon (talk) 00:10, 24 October 2010 (UTC)
User;120.16.188.129
editHello Funkywinders, this IP addresse, User:120.16.188.129, happens to edit the same article as you right now, just wondering if it is you. Using an account and an IP address at the same time, especially on the same subject, is generally frowned appon, see Wikipedia:Sock puppetry. Calistemon (talk) 23:26, 24 October 2010 (UTC)
Assistance
editI think, you have pretty much found out already how to have it reviewed. From my limited abilities, you are doing a great job, especially for a new user. You've avoided the most common trap new users, including myself, fall into, not to reference your information, its all very well referenced. The only improvement I can see there is to convert them from the blank url's to a more Wikipedia-like style. Quite a few options are open to you there, I tend to go more basic myself. For an example: Reference [1] could become.[2]
References
edit- ^ http://www.bhpbilliton.com/bbContentRepository/News/RelatedContent/RYINOverviewPaper.pdf
- ^ THE RAVENSTHORPE NICKEL PROJECT AND THE EXPANSION THE YABULU REFINERY BHP Billiton briefing paper, published: March 2004, accessed: 25 October 2010
Thats just one quick thing that I can see. That way, an uninvolved reader can pretty quickly distinguish what the reference actually is and where from. Otherwise, your article looks pretty good to me. Calistemon (talk) 08:42, 25 October 2010 (UTC)
BHP Billiton Nickel West
editEver contemplated to rename your article BHP Billiton Nickel West and expand it to include information on the other related operations in Australia? I think, that article name would be a good home for all the information you have carried together so far. Calistemon (talk) 09:33, 25 October 2010 (UTC)
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