Yes, the page does need some sentencing structure. Local hormone's lead section is a run on sentence and should be broken up. Classification scheme is well organized. However, some references and citations should be included to help in the categorizing of local hormones ie based by structure, location, abundance, etc. I like how there are wiki links for every local hormone placed. Spelling looks good as well. Cashmeresilk 10/20/17
I still think the page needs some structure. Looking as a freshman biology students pov, there's some terms I don't think I understand. You could add hyperlinks to some of those keywords, links to wear I could get information, or you could expand the literature a bit to include a slight explanation. Your not going in depth about all the classes of local hormone, so a very supportive previewing literature of them should be included. Cashmeresilk 11/19/17
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