IrishZenny

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Once again, welcome! Schazjmd (talk) 16:18, 22 January 2024 (UTC)

Article leads

Please read MOS:LEAD so you can understand the purpose and format of article leads. Your edits, stripping content away from the lead, are incorrect. If you have any questions after reading that guideline, you can ask me here or you can ask other editors at the Teahouse. Schazjmd (talk) 16:20, 22 January 2024 (UTC)

i am just copying other articles on this site, so ether remove the exact same verbatim criticism and language from other articles such as "andy ngo" or allow criticism on all pages IrishZenny (talk) 17:01, 22 January 2024 (UTC)

The difference is that the lead in Andy Ngo is summarizing content that is detailed and sourced in the body. Schazjmd (talk) 17:03, 22 January 2024 (UTC)

Also, based on how you summarized the source that you cited, it would help your editing if you study WP:NPOV. Schazjmd (talk) 17:06, 22 January 2024 (UTC)