Jazzhead101

Your submission at Articles for creation

You recently made a submission to Articles for Creation. Your article has been reviewed and because some issues were found, it could not be accepted in its current form; it is now located at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Lee McAllistair. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. Feel free to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text {{subst:AFC submission/submit}} to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Jarkeld (talk) 12:30, 26 November 2011 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation

You recently made a submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. However, the reviewer felt that a few things need to be fixed before it is accepted.; it is now located at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Lee McAllistair. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. Feel free to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text {{subst:submit}} to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Tokyogirl79 (talk) 05:17, 2 December 2011 (UTC)

The article was written in a semi-promotional and non-neutral manner. Phrases such as "there are very, very few able to write as convincingly and memorably as McAllistair" are considered to be opinions and are not allowed on Wikipedia. Please re-write this to be encyclopedic and neutral. Tokyogirl79 (talk) 05:17, 2 December 2011 (UTC)tokyogirl79

Hi Tokyogirl79

The whole section to which you refer is a published review in a major national newspaper, The Australian, as referenced in the link. It is not the opinion of the writer, it is a published, referenced review. Please reconsider my submission, thank you Jazzhead101Jazzhead101 (talk) 05:25, 2 December 2011 (UTC)

In response to your feedback

Pop into the irc help channel for some live guidance on why the article was rejected. http://webchat.freenode.net/?channels=wikipedia-en-help

Ocaasi ^{t | c} 05:54, 2 December 2011 (UTC)

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Your article submission Lee McAllistair

Hello Jazzhead101. It has been over six months since you last edited your article submission, entitled Lee McAllistair.

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