User talk:Klynnh/sandbox

good info, but check some grammatical errors and add some organization. also, make sure you have sources and links by the time youre done. but good topic!! Acvanauken (talk) 18:59, 5 April 2012 (UTC)

This needs work but good job so far! Kmbyers (talk) 19:01, 5 April 2012 (UTC)Kmbyers

Very interesting information. Advice I have for it is to add citations, and maybe break it up into sections. Idonthaveacomputer (talk) 19:01, 5 April 2012 (UTC)