User talk:Laursren/sandbox

Sources

Your sources look good. Josef Horáček (talk) 17:22, 29 October 2015 (UTC)

Your edit was reverted because you added the sources wrong. You were supposed to add citations to specific places in the text. For help, read this: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Referencing_for_beginners. Josef Horáček (talk) 21:08, 3 November 2015 (UTC)

The Lead

Your lead looks good. Delete the first three sentences - those belong to a more general article on LGBT. Then post the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:08, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

You deleted four sentences, not three, but I fixed it for you. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:27, 9 November 2015 (UTC)