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Your submission at Articles for creation: Sehba Musharraf (February 7)

 
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Dan arndt were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
Dan arndt (talk) 07:20, 7 February 2023 (UTC)
 
Hello, LordVoldemort728! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Dan arndt (talk) 07:20, 7 February 2023 (UTC)
@User:Dan arndt you said wrong. She passes Wikipedia:Notability (politics) which says the person is notable if "The person is the monogamous spouse or life partner of a national head of state in any country.". For reference you can see this and for your information I am also an Wikipedia:AfC reviewer. ​​​​​​​𝐋𝐨𝐫𝐝𝐕𝐨𝐥𝐝𝐞𝐦𝐨𝐫𝐭𝟕𝟐𝟖🧙‍♂️Let's Talk ! 07:31, 7 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Acknowledge your comments - my view is that the article should at minimum address the requirements of WP:ANYBIO. Noting that your second reference doesn't state the page number in the book. The third reference simply states "attended by the first lady of Pakistan, Sehba Mushraaf". The first reference at least gives a little more coverage than her name. Given her position I think you could come up with a little more biography in reputable secondary sources at least. Dan arndt (talk) 07:45, 7 February 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sehba Musharraf (February 7)

 
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
KylieTastic (talk) 08:33, 7 February 2023 (UTC)