Misterbrownstone

Graeme Gilbert

Hi, I noticed you reverted my change to Graeme Gilbert. The edit was not a mistake, the section was unsourced, clearly contentious and intended to show the subject of the article in a poor light, given the language ("quite fanciful"). According to WP:BLP, such content is to be avoided. Silvrous ^Talk 20:26, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mata Hari (pinball machine) (March 10)

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Kevin Rutherford (talk) 06:20, 10 March 2014 (UTC)

Welcome to Wikipedia!

Your contributions to the Pinball project are very welcome. I'm also active in this project. However many short stubs often get deleted. Try find at least some sources. See following articles for example: The Wizard of Oz (pinball) or Tee'd Off.

• Find sources: Google (books · news · scholar · free images · WP refs) · FENS · JSTOR · TWL + name of the actual pinball machine your are looking for

You can also expand existing articles before creating new ones. Again your help is very welcome! :)

--Fluffystar (talk) 21:22, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps you could incorporate some of these sources:

• http://mwpinball.com/1978-bally-mata-hari-1500/
• http://www.thepinballfix.com/matahari/index_mh.html
• http://collectionary.com/item/bally-mata-hari-pinball-machine-instruction-manual-schematics-game-1104-e
• http://translate.googleusercontent.com/translate_c?act=url&depth=1&hl=de&ie=UTF8&prev=_t&rurl=translate.google.de&sl=de&tl=en&u=http://home.arcor.de/a.schick/bally/de/Mata_Hari.html&usg=ALkJrhgraADbRhSnn-VZn7b6bRvHEmg8fw
• http://www.pinballclinic.com/gamepages/MataHari.htm
• http://stevechannel.com/matahari.htm
• http://www.legendaryauctions.com/LotDetail.aspx?inventoryid=73218
• http://www.pinballnyc.com/model/mata-hari/
• http://users.cis.fiu.edu/~jweiss/matahari/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by 185.44.151.132 (talk) 11:48, 21 March 2014 (UTC)

==Okay, cheers guys! I'll try to resubmit it with new sources as suggested. Thanks! Misterbrownstone (talk) 11:55, 21 March 2014 (UTC)

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