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AfC notification: Draft:John Robert Mills has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:John Robert Mills. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 08:45, 23 September 2016 (UTC)

Thanks Robert. Changes made as suggested. Appreciate your helpful advice.

September 2016

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Thank you. I will try to remember to login before editing :)

John Robert Mills

Please stop uploading smaller size images of the same person. It is not the size of the image that is important but the funtion "upright" that you set on the article. I have changed it in your article of JRM to show you. Please read Wikipedia Help!

Pierre cb (talk) 12:29, 26 September 2016 (UTC)

Hi Pierre. The reason for uploading photos of same subject is that the originals from PhilipMillsUK were all marked for deletion, probably for copyright issues. The photos I uploaded are smaller but sufficient for purpose and have correct crown copyright permission. Moonbouncer54 (talk) 16:08, 26 September 2016 (UTC)

• If large version are copyrighted, smaller ones would be too. Pierre cb (talk) 15:26, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
• The issue is the way they were uploaded, I believe. i.e. without the {{OGL}}. So the photos are free to use subject to attributing crown copyright etc Moonbouncer54 (talk) 16:08, 26 September 2016 (UTC)

Hi Pierre. Is it ok to increase the 'upright' size to 1.07? This makes the photos very slightly wider than the infobox, but looks better IMHO Moonbouncer54 (talk) 16:08, 26 September 2016 (UTC)

• It is up to you but the template is made for standard photos. The rendering varies accoding to the means you consult the article from. Pierre cb (talk) 15:26, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
• Thank you for advice Moonbouncer54 (talk) 16:08, 26 September 2016 (UTC)

Pierre. Thanks for your knowledge. Is it acceptable to add 'British' before scientist ?

• I have answered on your draft page about this. Pierre cb (talk) 15:26, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
• Thank you Pierre. Hopefully the article will be approved soon. When it is, does the 'Draft: John Robert Mills' become the title? i.e. John Robert Mills (without the 'Draft: prefix). I ask because if it does, I can keep the sub-headings as they are without a title heading which then makes the TOC look better (without the 1.1, 1.2 etc). Or is there a better way to achieve TOC labels of 1, 2, 3, 4 etc but still using Title? Moonbouncer54 (talk) 16:08, 26 September 2016 (UTC)

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A tag has been placed on Draft:John Robert Mills requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page appears to be a clear copyright infringement. This page appears to be a direct copy from http://cayley.co.uk/john-robert-mills/. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites or other printed material as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing.

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Please note that full permission has been granted to use the text on the page: http://cayley.co.uk/john-robert-mills/ The text below has been added to the web page "Copyright Permission for Wikipedia The text of this page is available for modification and reuse under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution-Sharealike 3.0 Unported License and the GNU Free Documentation License (unversioned, with no invariant sections, front-cover texts, or back-cover texts). In particular, CCC Trading Ltd gives permission for the use of text contained on this page to be used by Moonbouncer54 on the Wikipedia page relating to John Robert Mills. For verification please contact the site owner of CCC Trading Ltd (T/a Cayley Chemicals), Philip Mills by email: cayley@btinternet.com" Therefore please remove the tag for deletion Thank you Moonbouncer54 (talk) 18:13, 29 October 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:John Robert Mills has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:John Robert Mills. Thanks! jcc (tea and biscuits) 15:54, 28 October 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Robert Mills (October 29)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 18:52, 29 October 2016 (UTC)

Hello! Moonbouncer54, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 18:52, 29 October 2016 (UTC)

John Robert Mills

Great work there on getting the license, but the copyright statement cannot be "CC-BY-SA 3.0 for Wikipedia", it has to be this text is "CC-BY-SA 3.0 for every, full stop". Almost there :) jcc (tea and biscuits) 09:40, 30 October 2016 (UTC)

Hi Jcc. Could you advise on how that can be achieved please Moonbouncer54 (talk) 09:48, 30 October 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, I seem to have missed out a word- "CC-BY-SA 3.0 for every page". All you would need to change is the title on the website from "Copyright Permission for Wikipedia" to "Copyright", and add a note stating it overrides the footer. jcc (tea and biscuits) 10:04, 30 October 2016 (UTC)

Excellent. Consider it done, or will be in the next few minutes :) and thanks for help Moonbouncer54 (talk) 10:17, 30 October 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:John Robert Mills has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:John Robert Mills. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 22:21, 3 November 2016 (UTC)

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Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 08:47, 15 November 2016 (UTC)

Roger (Dodger67) Many thanks for accepting the article. Many thanks also to others who provided help, advice and assistance. Moonbouncer54 (talk) 07:20, 18 November 2016 (UTC)