Natascha.Stone

Your submission at Articles for creation: Carl Segebrecht (March 17)

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Hoary (talk) 12:57, 17 March 2023 (UTC)

Hello, Natascha.Stone! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Hoary (talk) 12:57, 17 March 2023 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Carl Segebrecht has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Carl Segebrecht. Thanks! Hoary (talk) 23:46, 17 March 2023 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Carl Segebrecht

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 00:02, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Carl Segebrecht (January 31)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Noahfgodard was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Noahfgodard (talk) 21:33, 31 January 2024 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Carl Segebrecht has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Carl Segebrecht. Thanks! Noahfgodard (talk) 21:51, 31 January 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: House of Langfeld (June 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Hoary was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Hoary (talk) 11:31, 7 June 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: House of Langfeld (July 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by CFA were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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C F A 💬 20:33, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: House of Langfeld (August 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Utopes was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 17:59, 21 August 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: House of Langfeld (September 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Hoary was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Hoary (talk) 22:58, 1 September 2024 (UTC)

Hello Hoary, thank you for your advice and guidance on this matter. I appreciate the work you do. I have now removed some parts that sounds biased towards all the PR puff. But I haven't removed it entirely because I still think that it can serve as a source. Other than that I also edited other paragraphs a bit and make it more straight up and clear, as well as adding another source and adding more detailed information for the family's history that I got from the wikipedia page of the Spee Family (its in German). Hope this is helpful. Let me know if there is anything else. :) Natascha.Stone (talk) 17:40, 8 September 2024 (UTC)