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Storia delle biblioteche e della documentazione sp.editciao, spero di aver fatto tutto bene Dino Marco (talk) 15:37, 18 September 2015 (UTC) Ciao, grazie delle dritte, ora è tutto chiaro UsersGeggia (talk) 15:44, 18 September 2015 (UTC) Ciao, mi auguro che il messaggio sia visibile correttamente. Grazie, a lunedì! LucaSper92 (talk) 09:38, 20 September 2015 (UTC) Ciao, spero di essermi iscritta correttamente. A domani! Arianna Santin (talk) 13:22, 20 September 2015 (UTC) Ciao! Anche io spero di aver eseguito correttamente i tuoi consigli!Giulia.comun (talk) 13:37, 20 September 2015 (UTC) Ciao, spero di non aver sbagliato nulla! Grazie, a dopo! F.Mocellin (talk) 08:24, 21 September 2015 (UTC) Ciao, con un pò di ritardo ma ci sono arrivato pure io.Matteo cefis (talk) 07:50, 23 September 2015 (UTC) History of English Culture - TrainingeditHey there, here's my homework. --Annaannieann (talk) 08:24, 19 September 2015 (UTC)Annaannieann Ciao Navarro, I'm newly registered so here I am at last! See you in class this afternoon :) __Eslee110 (talk) 09:57, 28 September 2015 (UTC) Hey Navarro, here's my message ! See you in class next week! ClaraC12 (talk) 14:37, 21 September 2015 (UTC) Hi Navarco, here is my message. See you in class next Monday Micheladv92 (talk) 09:42, 19 September 2015 (UTC) Hi Navarco. Which project is this? Library or 18th c crime & justice? I have put some suggestions on my user page if you'd would like to have a look... but I think Im not using my user page for its proper purposes... by the wya it took me ages to find the tilde on a Mac - its to the right pf the alt (left shift) but its not the key! Jfclegg (talk) 16:38, 19 September 2015 (UTC) Hi Navarco, finally I am here too. See you on Monday! Irene1209 (talk) 17:37, 19 September 2015 (UTC) Hi, here I am as well! See you tomorrow! Asile91 (talk) 11:38, 20 September 2015 (UTC) Hi Navarco, well, I do hope I got this right. See you tomorrow! 858rine (talk) 14:09, 20 September 2015 (UTC) Hi Navarco, it's nice that you managed to organize wiki-project. A dopo :) Infinitas.is (talk) 17:01, 25 September 2015 (UTC) Hi Navarco, this is my message. See you tomorrow! Gio1291 (talk) 17:48, 20 September 2015 (UTC) Hi Navarco, this is my message for you! Hope that I did it right. See you tomorrow! Patrick.ucciardo (talk) 17:50, 20 September 2015 (UTC) Hi Navarco, I hope I have done it well even if it will require more time to keep in mind every passage! See you tomorrow!18:34, 20 September 2015 (UTC)Im 2u (talk) Hi Navarco, here is my contribution to week2. Franberg5 (talk) 20:33, 20 September 2015 (UTC) Hello! Here's my contribution, hope I got it right. See you tomorrow! Daniele.zecchinato (talk) 21:27, 20 September 2015 (UTC) Hi Navarco, I hope I'm doing everything right, this whole thing can be a little be daunting. See you soon! G.ale.1105 (talk) 06:48, 21 September 2015 (UTC) Hi Navarco, here is my contribution as well. See you later! Friedninja (talk) 06:57, 21 September 2015 (UTC) Hello Navarco! Here I am as well but I definitely need more training in this, it's very stimulating. Pbord (talk) 08:32, 21 September 2015 (UTC) Hi, it's nice that you managed to organize this ptoject.Infinitas.is (talk) 17:09, 25 September 2015 (UTC) Hi, hope I got this right. It's a little bit confusing at first, but I find this project pretty interesting. See you on Monday! GMari92 (talk) 13:47, 26 September 2015 (UTC) Hi Navarco! I can't wait to give my contribution to this project and get to know more about the "wikipedia world". I hope I'll manage it! Altereli (talk) 19:42, 26 September 2015 (UTC) Hi Navarco! I've join in the project. I'm trying to catch up all the previous lessons! Thank you! JMChaleat (talk) 19:22, 27 September 2015 (UTC) Hi! Here's my contribution for week 2, better late than never! See you later! Elisa.danesin (talk) 08:52, 28 September 2015 (UTC) Hi Navarco! I'm happy to be part of this project! --Federicac23 (talk) 07:31, 29 September 2015 (UTC) Hey there! I'm finally here too... See you tomorrow! Oneyrox (talk) 15:24, 11 October 2015 (UTC) ciaoeditAndybrendy89 (talk) 11:12, 21 September 2015 (UTC) testeditTestMl17221746 (talk) 13:23, 28 September 2015 (UTC) TesteditTesteditHello --ClaraC12 (talk) 14:46, 29 September 2015 (UTC) TesteditHello :)JMChaleat (talk) 14:46, 29 September 2015 (UTC) Ciao HEBMOORE16 (talk) 14:47, 29 September 2015 (UTC) testedittestLela Lazishvili (talk) 14:49, 29 September 2015 (UTC)lll
testeditTesteditHi Navarco I'm Elia, I'm trying to send you a message, hope this is the right way --Elia7491 (talk) 15:27, 29 September 2015 (UTC) Two doubtsedit1) Perhaps it would be better if I worked on the list of topics in my sandbox - ?. 2) Since there is no fixed system of citing sources I could in theory use my preferred Harvard system. But most articles do not, and in modifying existing articles one has to use the system used by the creator, so perhaps this would be counterproductive-? --Jfclegg (talk) 07:17, 4 October 2015 (UTC) TesteditHi Navarco, it's Elisa! I started this week, and I really like this project, even if I'm not very goog at it! I'll try to improve my skills, anyway!Xieyilian92 (talk) 17:07, 4 October 2015 (UTC) List of criteriaeditWrite here your suggestions!--Navarco (talk) 20:42, 5 October 2015 (UTC) Hi everybody! In addition to the criteria we discussed in class, I thought that maybe the presence of reliable media (pictures, illustrations, printings, given the historical period we are dealing with) could be a plus for a good article. --Pbord (talk) 10:17, 6 October 2015 (UTC) Hi! Besides what we talked about in class, I agree on the importance of including different types of media.. Moreover, I think it is important to highlight the fact all of those articles, as many others I have checked, begin with some sort of summary of what the reader is going to find within them, which, I think, is quite useful. Asile91 (talk) 21:01, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi! It might be taken for granted, but I think an important aspect to keep in mind is that a good article is one that does not have only superficial information. On the contrary, a good article involves an in depth work on the subject, which means not only writing what you know, but research for more. In other words, a good article is full of relevant and pertinent details and does not end with few superficial lines about the topic. Micheladv92 (talk) 10:09, 7 October 2015 (UTC) I totally agree on both points. Also you need to see a logical progression of the information: every sentence should be an independent unit but at the same time it should "justify" what's coming next in order to have a readable article. --Pbord (talk) 15:45, 7 October 2015 (UTC) I think that the author of an article should constantly keep in mind that readers know little or nothing about the topic, so he/she needs to ask him/herself "How can I explain it clearly to make them understand?" The text should be simple - which doesn't mean superficial - and it should develop logically to help users build knowledge on the subject from scratch. If the author takes the knowledge of users for granted, some topics won't be explained properly and users will have to do their own research on what the author failed to explain. Annaannieann (talk) 17:10, 7 October 2015 (UTC)Annaannieann Hi, I have given some thoughts to the good article criteria, and I believe it is really important to use professional style of writing (with technical language when needed), but avoid being too much abstruse. Possibly insert intertextual links to other wikipages to explain the most technical terms (see for example “pupillage” in William Garrow, or “poacher” in Dick Turpin). But also presenting all the most important and relevant facts, staying focus on the argument and do not digress in unnecessary details. About the images I think we should add adequate captions and always paying attention to their copyright status. I found very interesting the fact that all these good articles present a sum-up identity table at the beginning of the page reporting birth/death dates, nationality, possible “other” names, occupation, spouse(s), children, parents, ect. Another section you usually find in good articles is the one on later theories or relevant comments (see Elizabeth Canning) or even on the possible legacy of the person in question (like in William Garrow). Irene1209 (talk) 10:06, 9 October 2015 (UTC)irene1209 Hi, I totally agree with what has been said. I think that what makes a good article has to do both on the content you write and with how you write it. The section about someone's life, for example, seems to be well written if it shows how exactly the life of that person was relevant for the sake of the article (for example marking with more paragraphs the different parts of their lives), and does not consist in just writing a short summary of their life with very few details. In fact, I think that we have to keep in mind that the reason why we are contributing to Wikipedia is not only to make summaries of what we know, but most importantly to spread the knowledge of something, and to do so, we have to get into details. Another thing that I noticed in the featured articles is that there is always a section dedicated to the scholars' theories about the topic of the articles (e.g. theories, impact, legacy, modern view) that help to put the subject in perspective. Obviously, a good list of references and a good structure (images, paragraphs and such) definitely help! --Elisa.danesin (talk) 17:07, 9 October 2015 (UTC) Hi everyone! I just read James MacLaine article and I think I have understood why you put it among the bad ones. Firstly, it is not divided into sections, so it could be very hard for users to get the precise information they need, because they would be forced to read all the article. Secondly, there are several robberies mentioned, in an ambiguous way, without a chronological context and I think nobody needs incomplete information. So, I think that a good article needs, in addition of all what you have said, a clear division in sections and the events must be very rich in details. I hope this could be a useful contribution and I apologize if I have repeated something you have already said. --Elia7491 (talk) 15:21, 10 October 2015 (UTC) I agree with many of the criteria which have been proposed so far. Good articles should be well researched and based on sources which are reliable, preferably recent, and listed at the end. Their general structure should be clear and logically organised. Language should be altogether accurate and communicative enough. Specialised language is important to make our discourse more precise and accurate. However, it could be selected and used by keeping in mind that the encyclopedic entry we are creating is also meant to be understood by people who have no or little knowledge on the subject. At the end of good articles(ex.the ones on Dick Turpin and Jack Sheppard)you can also find external links taking you to other primary and secondary texts which can be useful for readers willing to deepen their knowledge on the subject.Ml17221746 (talk) 15:31, 10 October 2015 (UTC) Totally agree with many of the criteria proposed. In my opinion good articles should follow some simple rules such as:
Sorry if I repeated something already said but that's what I think should be useful for a good article. --Patrick.ucciardo (talk) 13:48, 11 October 2015 (UTC) Hi everybody, I totally agree with every proposal. I read some of the good and bad articles suggested in the email and I tried to compare them. I think that the clearness is a good point, it could fail not only when the tone is not professional and reliable but also when the article in not well organized and is presented as a jumble of information. I believe the detailes could add quality to the article and the different sections have to follow a precise scheme in order to allow the reader to create simple, mental links. As in an encyclopedia, every article could be clear, without any useless confusion. I am sorry if I repeated something, I hope this could be useful. Gio1291 (talk) 13:57, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
Hello to everyone! I'm late to the discussion, so I'll probably end up repeating what many before me have said already- sorry for that! So, I believe that clarity, order, and adequate sources are fundamental to write a good Wikipedia article: it should look as, and be written like, an academic expository essay, following therefore the same basic outlines. 858rine (talk) 19:11, 11 October 2015 (UTC) Hi! I agree with all the things said before and I think that an article must have clear sentences, neither too long nor too short; and the punctuation is fundamental to make it understandable. If the author of the article uses only short sentences writing things without explaining it, the result is like the section Fiction in Bow Street Runners which seems to be a shopping list. --Federicac23 (talk) 08:42, 12 October 2015 (UTC) I agree with the criteria which have been proposed so far. A good article should be well written, covering all the relevants facts in an unbiased way, and based on reliable sources. It should be divided into sections and subsection and provide a table of contents. When possible it should be accompanied by images or other relevant media content. I have chosen the Sarah Malcom article to see what makes it a bad article. In my opinion, the prose is not very good, coming off as disjointed and clunky. The article is not really comprehensive; it provides a broad summary of the facts but is not very detailed, especially in the account of the trial and in the description of Hogarth's painting. The final sentence introduces new content but doesn't expand on it. Moreover, the article doesn't follow the style guidelines very well: there is a lead section, but it lacks a table of contents and the subsection “Life” conflates her life, her trial and the information about Hogarth's painting.Finally, as far as images are concerned, they lack title, date, location and proper sources.G.ale.1105 (talk) 11:37, 12 October 2015 (UTC) Hi everybody! I agree with the main criteria proposed. I think that fundamental to a good article are, not only, the sources used to write it down but also the ability of the author in this process. Being clear is very important because it helps the reader knowing more about the subject in question without the peril of being confused. If an article doesn't follow these simple criteria, the reader can easely be lead astray by false informations. Im 2u (talk) 15:30, 18 October 2015 (UTC) More topic suggestionsedit1. William Spiggot/Spigget, leader of gang of 8, see OBO and OA, put to peine forte et dure 1721 could be added to ‘Cases’ § of Peine forte et dure, and/or an example of highwayman. Would also connect to Ordinary of Newgate, Thomas Purney (see Hitcock & Shoemaker p.174) 2. Richard Savage (the poet) The present article makes no mention of Savage's trial for murder on 6 December 1727 (see H&S Tales p221). One could add a § in Life section --Jfclegg (talk) 16:40, 11 October 2015 (UTC) 3. The Blackguard Children. Not to be confused with the Blackguard as described in the current article. There is a section on this children in Hitchcock and Shoemaker, and they feature in Defoe's Colonel Jack 4. Some considerations upon street-walkers, with a proposal for lessening the present number of them, in two letters to a member of Parliament, to which is added, a letter from one of those ... persons ... [Daniel Defoe] Pamphlet, text at http://catalog.hathitrust.org/Record/100577320 --Jfclegg (talk) 06:44, 12 October 2015 (UTC) Topic changeeditDear Navarco, I just change my topic from "Ballads" to "Penal transportation". I just sent an email to Prof. Clegg and she said it's ok and that I had to inform you about this change. Gio1291 (talk) 20:43, 19 October 2015 (UTC) Dead link in bibliographyeditHello Navarco, I was "testing" the sources already present in my article and I found a dead link to a book. Should I change it with a working link that includes the same citation? (I googled it and there are some options available) See [[1]] ^3 Thank you.Pbord (talk) 18:32, 22 October 2015 (UTC) How to improve my pageeditHello, could you check my and Charles Hitchin's talk page to tell me how to improve what I have done, please? Lela Lazishvili (talk) 19:49, 2 November 2015 (UTC) Hello, I have already made the changes and would like to hear further suggestions. I'm still working on the adding and improvement of the text.Lela Lazishvili (talk) 13:06, 12 November 2015 (UTC) QuestionseditHi Navarco, I have two questions and hope you can help me to find the answer. The first one concerns references. I wonder whether it exists a parameter to insert "Ibid". The second question concerns the section "See also". Is there a manner to create different subsections instead of just listing links one after the other?Thank you very much!Ml17221746 (talk) 20:16, 2 November 2015 (UTC) DoubteditHi Navarco, I have a question: what exactly is the edit explanation you mentioned in the wikiproject timetable? probably it is obvious but I just have this doubt. Gio1291 (talk) 19:50, 3 November 2015 (UTC) Article images: lack of materialeditHi, I added an image to the molly house page, but I'm not so sure about my choice, because I couldn't find anything concerning my topic in a specific way on commons. I found and added an illustration of a male brothel in a French book, even if molly houses were more like "clubs" rather than brothels. They were treated as if they were brothels in the proceedings though, and I thought I could add it with a caption for this (rather weak actually) reason. What do you think? Thank you for your time. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pbord (talk • contribs) 17:39, 4 November 2015 (UTC) Doubt on linkseditHello Navarco! I have a doubt. It might be stupid, but it's better to be safe than sorry, right? When I use a website, should I put the exact link to the page I've used or should I use the link to the homepage? Thanks Annaannieann (talk) 18:14, 4 November 2015 (UTC)Annaannieann Trouble with sectionseditOops, sorry about the name thing! I'm now having trouble with sections on my sandbox (I know, I'm late). When I create citations and they appear in the "References" section, everything works fine. However, when I create an "External links" section and insert the link, the references automatically move into this section when I save. What should I do? I don't want to mess with the entire article when I add my references and links! Thanks you Annaannieann (talk) 10:36, 6 November 2015 (UTC)Annaannieann about refernceseditHi, about your change in my references list: does it mean that I should follow this other style? How did you manage to insert the link to google books? and I also think it is the wrong book because I used the oldest edition present in the library published in 1989 by John Hopkins University and not the one published in 1992 by Taylor & Francis. They are probably the same (for sure they aheve the same title) but I am a little confused about how I should put this references at the end. Thank you for help anyway. --Irene1209 (talk) 10:21, 11 November 2015 (UTC)
Published articleeditHi Navarco. I've finally published my article. I thought it was too incomplete before. Anyway, I have a problem with the image of a trial that I wanted to add. I wanted to show how the trial in question represents the Irish accent on the page, but the pictures on the Old Bailey are protected by copyright. May I report a sentence? If so, should I insert it as a quotation or as a citation? Thanks! Annaannieann (talk) 18:10, 11 November 2015 (UTC)Annaannieann
Uploading ImageseditHi Navarco, I followed your advice and added the image of Baretti's dictionary. Now I was thinking of uploading an image of the Haymarket area, the place where the aggression of Baretti took place. I found this picture on the internet http://www.victorianlondon.org/crime1/the_haymarket_at_midnight.jpg , though it shows the Haymarket some years later 1769 I think it could be interesting, as it is still portraying the Haymarket as a place of prostitution. But how can I do with copyrights? Am I allowed to upload it to Common? Thank you! Micheladv92 (talk) 10:43, 12 November 2015 (UTC)
Charles Hitchen next stepeditHello, I have done some editting and wanted to ask you to have a look and offer further recommendations. Iàm still working on the improvement of the text though. Thank you. Lela Lazishvili (talk) 13:36, 12 November 2015 (UTC) P.S. I have found the picture of Hitchen only on the blog page, is there any way I could use it? I can't find the image of the pamphlet 'The Regulator' other than book, is it possible to upload it? Lela Lazishvili (talk) 13:42, 12 November 2015 (UTC)
recommendation on the editing of the article Charles HitcgeneditHi @Navarco:, 1. I've answered the first question above after erasing some references in the article... but still interested if I need to cite smaller portions of the text when the reference is absolutely the same. 2. I'd also be interested if the "banner" at the beginning of the article could be removed, and if I could do it, at least before nominating the article. 3. Could you also tell whether giving a title to the first summery paragraph is alright? And last, what does "editing conflict" mean? I still have my text and is it possible for it to be altered again before nominating? Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks.Lela Lazishvili (talk) 18:08, 23 November 2015 (UTC)--Lela Lazishvili (talk) 18:09, 23 November 2015 (UTC)
Format of images on Wikimedia CommonseditHello Navarco!I have uploaded an image on Wikimedia Commons but it appears also a message informing me that the pdf format may expose my private information.Here is the link https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Title_page_of_Augusta_Triumphans_(1728)_by_Daniel_Defoe.pdf Could you please advice me a different format or procedure? Thank you very much.Ml17221746 (talk) 15:26, 13 November 2015
Doubt about a message on Wikimedia CommonseditHi Navarco!I think I really need your advice again...on the basis of the message which I have received at the following link, I may have uploaded my image in the wrong way. But I would not know what they expect me to correct. https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Ml17221746#.7B.7BAutotranslate.7C1.3DFile:Title_page_of_Augusta_Triumphans_.281728.29_by_Daniel_Defoe.pdf.7Cbase.3DImage_license.2Fheading.7D.7D Thank you very much. Ml17221746 (talk) 14:51, 14 November 2015 (UTC)
message on the chosen article's talk pageeditHi Navarco! thanks for your useful tips. I noticed you wrote me on my talk page about announcing the intention of editing the article on its talk page. I actually did it before starting to edit the article, as it was required by the wiki project timetable. Someone also answered me giving some tips about quoting. So when I found your message I was a bit surprised because I was sure I had done it. But I can see why you wrote me to do it, because there isn't any message on Bosavern Penlez's talk page, and I don't understand why. Anyway I'll try and do it again. Could it have been removed ? Thanks (Giulia Odo (talk) 13:55, 15 November 2015 (UTC))
Image for articleeditHi Navarco, I've looked for an image to add in Footpad's article last week.I had some problems in the uploading but on Monday the 9th I finally uploaded it. So the article now includes an image and I'm working to improve it. See you on Monday!Im 2u (talk) 15:46, 15 November 2015 (UTC)
RatingeditHello! I've been working on the Thomas de Veil page and I've tried to get it rated again on the Wikiproject England and Wikiproject Biography. How should I proceed? Thank you so much! 858rine (talk) 23:25, 16 November 2015 (UTC)
Creating stubs and the assignment of week 11editHi Navarco! I have a question concerning the assignment of this week. We should work on suggestions which have been given to us. Pbord has kindly suggested me to turn some of the red links of my article into blue ones by creating stubs of few lines. What do you think? Would it be pertinent? Thank you! Ml17221746 (talk) 13:34, 18 November 2015 (UTC)
If you decide to go on, create it in your sandbox and publish it only when ready. You can then post a message in the talk page, explaining that you created it together with your other main article, to give a better understanding on the topic. You might list further readings if others are willing to improve it in the future.--Navarco (talk) 12:32, 21 November 2015 (UTC) DYK for Second Thoughts are Bestedit
Stub PageeditHi, I created a stub page for andrew moreton as you suggested, but I noticed that the link in Second thoughts are best and Augusta triumphans does not turn blue. Is that normal? Thank you for your help --Irene1209 (talk) 21:42, 23 November 2015 (UTC)
InformationeditHi Navarco! I came late at yesterday class, can you tell me of what have you discussed about? Could I find all informations in your last email? ThanksIm 2u (talk) 21:07, 24 November 2015 (UTC)
Copyright on an imageeditDear Saul, for my article about pickpocketing I would like to include an image that I found on a website Mrs Clegg gave me a link to. However, as I tried to upload the image, wikipidea asks me the type of licensing, and I cannot find the right one in their list. On the website where the image is they say that "EBBA is open access, licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial 4.0 International License. All materials are available for non-commercial use free of charge. Attribution is required for all non-commercial re-use of EBBA's images, recordings, and other resources." So if I understand correctly, I am allowed to put the image on Wikipedia since it is a non-commercial use free of charge. But on the Wikipedia list, they don't have the option "Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial 4.0", so what should I do ? Thank you in advance for your answer ! --ClaraC12 (talk) 11:04, 25 November 2015 (UTC)
Unsure about a pictureeditHi Navarco. I have found a website with an image I could use, but there is no indication about sources or copyright. I'm not sure whether to trust this link or not. What do you think? http://www.aycliffehistory.org.uk/html/People.htm Thank you! Annaannieann (talk) 18:30, 26 November 2015 (UTC)Annaannieann
Doubts conserving topic and redirectionseditHello. I would like to ask you a question that we can't answer with prof. Clegg. Conserning the article about William Spiggot , Prof. Clegg suggested to add a paragraph to explain Peine forte et dure, Why the legal term is in in french and link it toward the French page. However I wondered, as a page on peine forte et dure already exists, if it is necessary to explain it. I would rather think that readers would go to the redirected page of the Peine forte et dure to know about the legal term and all rather than read it on Spiggot's page? And also do you think it is relevant to link it to the page in another language ? Thank you. --JMChaleat (talk) 16:26, 27 November 2015 (UTC)
Correcting the title of articleseditHi Navarco, I have a question about a stub article which I created some days ago. Its title should be An Essay Upon Project. The title at the top of the page, however, is An essay upon projects (some of the letters should be capital but they are small). But in the text I wrote them correctly. What could I do to correct it? Thank you!Ml17221746 (talk) 14:31, 28 November 2015 (UTC)
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