Nbalkam
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editHi, I saw your help request on my talk page. You can find your sandbox here: User:Nbalkam/sandbox or by clicking the "sandbox" link on the top toolbar. You can also click to your sandboxes from the "students" tab of your course Dashboard page. Please review this training for keeping track of your work with the Dashboard. Thanks, Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:46, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
Zainab's Peer Review
editI thought the paragraph on Orthodox Christian-Muslim Relations was really good. I liked the background given and the transition from peaceful relations to deteriorating relations. I would suggest more background on the collaborative relations between Muslims and Christians and why things went downhill. I think that would be very helpful to provide some context on their relationship. Everything mentioned in the article was relevant to the topic and there wasn’t a moment where I questioned what I was reading. The links for the citations work The link to the citations work, which is something I didn’t know how to do on my own draft and the information used provided great facts. The sources used are legitimate and up to date. As long as the last paragraph is edited and everything is in good shape and headed in the right direction.Zainabmojaddedi (talk) 18:28, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
Anika's Peer review Content I think your addition of this section to the article is really interesting. I like that you establish a clear timeline of events.
Tone and Balance Your tone is neutral and the perspective does not disproportionately favor any particular view.
Sources and References Your sources seem solid, but I think your references are missing a little information. None of them have a year of publication.
Organization The content is well written. Maybe you could break up a few of your longer sentences. I only saw a couple of minor typos.
Overall impressions I think that your addition of this section is helpful and a good contribution to the overall article. I think you do a good job of summarizing a long history of relations into a few key events. Ajhwik (talk) 00:29, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:32, 8 April 2020 (UTC)