Hi from Qi

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Hi. This is Qi, Qiao from TC850. See you next class!qiaoqi 03:02, 25 January 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Realqiao (talkcontribs)

Hi from Shan

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Hi. My name is Shan Yang. I am also in TC 850 course. See you tomorrow!

Testing...

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Let's see if I did this right. I'm still not sure about this editing stuff. I'm Alison or Football1502 from TC 850. I will get this eventually. :) Football1502 (talk) 02:59, 25 January 2011 (UTC) Football1502Reply

Is this what we are supposed to do?

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Hey Ben. Got no clue what I'm doing so I'm going to spam your page :p

IDrewYou (talk) 20:31, 25 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

Wikipedia ambassadors mentor program

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Hi, I'm Chevymontecarlo and I would be happy to be your mentor for the Wikipedia online ambassadors program. Let me know if you have any questions or problems whilst learning about Wikipedia and editing and suchlike; I'd be happy to help! Best of luck, Chevymontecarlo 21:18, 17 February 2011 (UTC)Reply

P.S. I know you originally requested KrakatoaKatie as your mentor, but seeing as she's away at the moment and hasn't gotten back to you, Ragesoss suggested that I perhaps be your mentor instead. Hope that's okay. Chevymontecarlo 21:21, 17 February 2011 (UTC)Reply

Feedback from Johannes M. Bauer

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You added a modest extension of the entry. However, you inserted it between two paragraphs addressing the EU. I would shift the entry one paragraph down so that the two paragraphs relating to the EU are following each other. Moreover, the article is on local loop unbundling, whereas your entry refers to unbundling in general. Maybe it would make sense to specify that local loops were only one of the UNEs in the US but are the one that remains to be in place. You could add these thoughts in the US section of the entry. Moreover, the entry would benefit from some language on the current status of unbundling in the US. Footnote [8], which somebody else has added refers to one of my own papers and I am sure that I do not say what the person is referring to ... So, if you want to improve further, you might want to check that. --JMBauer (talk) 21:42, 1 March 2011 (UTC)Reply