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Your submission at Articles for creation: Philip Benfey (October 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Jannatulbaqi was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Jannatulbaqi (talk) 14:11, 22 October 2024 (UTC)

Hi would it be able to check again. I added many more references from reliable secondary sources. Thanks! Root bio (talk) 15:57, 23 October 2024 (UTC)

If you submit it again in the same way you did the first time, it will be reviewed again. However, at a glance it looks like there may be issues with the neutrality of the article. Content like "a visionary in the field of plant science, making significant contributions to understanding the genetic and molecular basis of root growth and development. He was also a dedicated mentor, fostering the careers of numerous scientists worldwide" is subjective and praising rather than objective and neutral. I'd suggest checking out Wikipedia's policies on neutral point of view and verifiability, and this list of non-neutral words to avoid. AntiDionysius (talk) 16:02, 23 October 2024 (UTC)

Oh also, if you have a personal connection to the subject (say if Benfey was your friend, family member, colleague or teacher), then you have what Wikipedia calls a Conflict of Interest and should read up on what that means. Thanks! AntiDionysius (talk) 16:03, 23 October 2024 (UTC)

thanks so much. I revised and added another source.

I don't find the submit for review button. Is it already out for review again or do I need to do anything? Root bio (talk) 16:36, 23 October 2024 (UTC)

No problem at all. I think the template with the submit button got deleted during one of your edits, so I've re-added it. AntiDionysius (talk) 16:41, 23 October 2024 (UTC)

Thanks so much Root bio (talk) 19:00, 23 October 2024 (UTC)

Hello, Root bio! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Jannatulbaqi (talk) 14:11, 22 October 2024 (UTC)

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Happy editing! Cheers, AntiDionysius (talk) 15:58, 23 October 2024 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Philip Benfey has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Philip Benfey. Thanks! RangersRus (talk) 02:29, 27 October 2024 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Philip Benfey has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Philip Benfey. Thanks! Ldm1954 (talk) 23:15, 3 November 2024 (UTC)