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Peer Review by Jessica Kurf

Hello Salehi.s, this is Jessica Kurf. Here is the peer review for the first drift of wiki project.

The lead section for your article is not clear enough for general readers to understand fully. the logical relationships between neutral stimulus, conditional stimulus and unconditional stimulus, between conditioned stimulus and conditioned response, and between unconditioned stimulus and unconditioned response are sort of confusing. The suggestion to consider is to add a table or figure to explain the relationships between these terms maybe. As for the Ivan Pavlov's Research section, the author can write more for this paragraph and talk in details about the study on cerebral cortex activity. In addition, the author may take off the link for the word “bell” because this word does not need the further explanation.

The author use neutral tone and content and the source cited is reliable. However, the author may consider add more information to this wiki page to build a better structure and balance the coverage for each topic.

Jessica Kurf (talk) 21:03, 28 November 2016 (UTC)Jessica Kurf