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Your submission at Articles for creation: Earthtime (August 12)

Latest comment: 30 days ago3 comments2 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Bobby Cohn were:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

This submission provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter. Please see the guide to writing better articles for information on how to better format your submission.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Bobby Cohn (talk) 20:31, 12 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hello, Starfish114! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Bobby Cohn (talk) 20:31, 12 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hello Bobby Cohn, Thank you for your feedback is there anywhere in particular that I should focus on first? Starfish114 (talk) 20:39, 12 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Earthtime (August 13)

Latest comment: 29 days ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Curb Safe Charmer were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Earthtime and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 08:30, 13 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Skies Painted with Unnumbered Sparks (August 13)

Latest comment: 29 days ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Curb Safe Charmer were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Skies Painted with Unnumbered Sparks and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 08:32, 13 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Earthtime (August 14)

Latest comment: 28 days ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Utopes was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Janet Echelman is not a reliable secondary source for coverage about "Earthtime", as they made the sculptures. The subject should primarily be significantly described by secondary, reliable sources who are independent of the subject, in order to meet Wikipedia's standalone-notability guidelines. Generally speaking, echelman.com and ted.com should presumably not be used as "references to establish notability". At the moment, it doesn't seem this topic has standalone-notability, outside of the article for Janet Echelman which already exists and this topic can be discussed at if desired.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 23:16, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Earthtime (August 15)

Latest comment: 27 days ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LR.127 was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This page may be better off as part of Janet Echelman's article, not an entirely new article. Some reliable, published sources exist in this draft; if they were brought to merge with the artist's article (and trimmed down to only list the facts), it may be better for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Earthtime and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

LR.127 (talk) 19:03, 15 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

August 2024

Latest comment: 27 days ago2 comments2 people in discussion

Hello, I'm Yoshi24517. I noticed that in this edit to Janet Echelman, you removed content without adequately explaining why. In the future, it would be helpful to others if you described your changes to Wikipedia with an edit summary. If this was a mistake, don't worry, the removed content has been restored. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Yoshi24517 (Chat) (Very Busy) 21:47, 15 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

I am organizing the series of sculptures into one article. My apologies for not adding the comment. Would you be willing to restore what I had? Starfish114 (talk) 21:52, 15 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

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