User talk:Tdroback/sandbox

Peer Review

Hey,

So it's a very good article, and I'm afraid I don't have much more to add, but may I suggest inserting the articles as notes instead of just in the Bibliography, and linking them to each point you make? Such as this sentence "Many Scholars theorize that the warrior bending down is Ajax, and the other warrior with the large shield is Menelaos.", could you add a reference to it, for us to know which article you're referring to? And I think it would be great to add a couple more links to other already existing articles, such as Exekias of course, or just Achilles, Patroklos and the Trojan war in general.

Cheers Rstrioux (talk) 02:43, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

What is the title of your article? Make sure it's something clear and distinct (think about how someone would search for your article on Wikipedia).Jpaga (talk) 13:47, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

Citations, citations, citations! This is a great article, but it totally suffers from the lack of in-article citations! Robert Y. Rob6820 (talk) 01:05, 27 November 2017 (UTC)

(More) Comments from Prof. Paga

Hi Tommy - this is a good article! You have some great comments from your peer-reviewer and TF, and here are a few suggestions of my own.

• Add more hyperlinks throughout, in order to integrate your article into Wikipedia more generally.
  
• As both Roxane and Robert said, citations are very important! Without clear citations to reliable sources, your article will likely be deleted when you move it over to Wikipedia.
  
• Make sure to proofread carefully (for instance, Achilles is always capitalized).
  

Jpaga (talk) 18:02, 2 December 2017 (UTC)