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editWelcome to Wikipedia! Unfortunately, you are editing the wrong location to start a new article about Robert Selman. You have been editing a Wikipedia maintenance template about draft articles instead of starting an actual draft article. Please see Wikipedia's document on creating your first article or use the Articles for Creation process if you want to start a draft article. -- Gogo Dodo (talk) 19:21, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
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To provide a little more feedback on the draft: As I said yesterday via IRC, its sources largely are Selman's own writings, and the draft then provides your interpretation of those primary sources. A Wikipedia article should instead be a summary of what secondary sources - published reviews of Selman's works, articles about him published in newspapers and reputable magazines, maybe a festschrift - have reported about him. This goes particularly for interpretation, and for content that could be considered promotional. Significant parts of the draft don't cite any references, and if that were a live article I'd immediately add "[citation needed]" tags - for example, not even the primary sources connect Selman to My Little Pony, and at a glance I failed to find a source that confirms the connection. Phrases such as "is perhaps best known for X" would need a source that not only confirms Selman did X - but what he is best known for. If no such sources can be found, such phrases should be reworded. "Seminal work" could be seen as a peacock term and would again need a third-party source discussing the importance of the work in question. In general, a shorter, well-sourced article would be preferable over a long, weakly-sourced one. Huon (talk) 09:46, 3 May 2015 (UTC)
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