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November 2009
editThank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. When you make a change to an article, please provide an edit summary, which you forgot to do before saving your recent edit to Willis M. Rivinus. Doing so helps everyone to understand the intention of your edit and is especially useful when reading the edit history of the page. Thank you. ukexpat (talk) 18:23, 3 November 2009 (UTC)
Pennsylvania Canal (Delaware Division)
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Thanks for adding nicely written material and especially, references to support the material. Much improved.
However, you were looking for feedback. The layout is now unbalanced. A good layout includes an opening lead, size dependent on the length of the entire article. In this case, a two paragraph lead might be about right. This one has more in the lead than in the remaining sections.
Would it make sense to add a section break after the second paragraph, and call it "History"? I've only skimmed the article, so I don't want to make the change myself, but take a look at WP:Layout and see if you can identify where a section break would make sense, and what its name should be. Don't hesitate to re-organize material if that helps.--SPhilbrickT 18:40, 6 November 2009 (UTC)