Wikipedia:Dispute resolution noticeboard/Mass killings under communist regimes
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- AmateurEditor (talk · contribs)
- Cygnis insignis (talk · contribs)
- Davide King (talk · contribs)
- Paul Siebert (talk · contribs)
- Nug (talk · contribs)
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Dispute overview
In August two editors (Davide King,Paul Siebert) started making edits in the article that completely reversed the status quo on this sensitive topic. A heated dispute over specific edits followed, which was largely led by AmateurEditor and Cloud200 on one side, and Davide King Paul Siebert on the other. Their position can be summarised as attacking practically every single aspect of the article (while declaring they don't), starting from validity of the very concepts of "mass killings", "communist regimes" and any causal connection between the two. The subject is complex and subject to interpretation, but rejecting it completely is equivalent to denialism since mass-scale extermination of people in countries declaring themselves as "communist" is a well-documented fact, and link between the ideology and these exterminations is clearly demonstrated by large body of primary and secondary sources, all linked in the article.
Both AmateurEditor and myself engaged in the discussion, honestly analysing and responding to every single argument of the opponents, however their position doesn't seem to be impacted by any number of sources or arguments. They ignore any arguments and just continue flooding the discussion with extremely lengthy and verbose comments that are loosely related to the subject and rarely directly respond to the arguments we raised. The discussion thus was unproductive and I have personally disengaged from the discussion after being treated with ad hominem arguments that implied I have no right to take part in the discussion for being from Eastern Europe.
Since September they have practically taken over the complete article rewriting it to their liking, in a manner that is best illustrated by this edit[[1]]: WP:WEASEL, unsourced and WP:POV.
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
Massive dispute in Talk:Mass_killings_under_communist_regimes, continued to some extent in personal talk pages [[2]] and archived in Talk:Mass killings under communist regimes/Archive 50
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
Revert all edits done by Davide King and Paul Siebert since September. Both AmateurEditor and myself were open to discussion and changes to the article, but not a complete and subjective rewrite that turned it from head to heels.
Summary of dispute by AmateurEditor
editSummary of dispute by Davide King
editSiebert gave an accurate summary, while Cloud200's not only lacks context and assumes that their position is the right one, and we must be some Soviet/Stalin apologists, which could not be further from the truth, but is actively harmful, inaccurate, and misleading — WP:BOOMERANG. Guess what? You stopped discussing, you did not revert me (as I wrote here, everything is sourced in the body, previous lead was not sourced either, and we need not to source it if a summary and paraphrase of what the sourced body already says), and eventually my edits have been accepted (see here). The real problem is that some users have a complete lack of knowledge about the topic — see this (the new lead and Siebert's explanation for comparison with the previous lead, this is what users like Cloud2000 actually believe in, even though is OR/SYNTH). It is absurd I have to do this but ...
No one is denying that many, many people have died under Communist regimes, what we are disputing is that this is a scholarly discourse (it is at best only discussed by genocide scholars, which are a minority within a minority, and have not been published in mainstream political science journals, and even then they mostly limit themselves to Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot, which are the only ones who fit the most commonly accepted definition of mass killing) or consensus, or that MKuCR is an accurate categorization; the truth is that it is OR/SYNTH the same way mass killings under capitalist, Christian, fascist, Muslim (mockup) regimes, yet we do this only for communism because, as summarized here, "victims of communism" (e.g. the Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation) is more of a propaganda topic than a scholarly debate (see this, especially the notes with sources) but many users actually believe in the former and merge the two, when that is far from an accurate summary of the topic, hence the heart of the matter of that article's diatribe.
The new lead is a better and more accurate, though by no means perfect, summary and proper introduction of the topic, which should show how it is has been misunderstood, falsified, and a good source of citogenesis for years (Conservapedia and Metapedia's "Mass killings under Communist regimes" — I cannot link the latter, not Encyclopedia Britannica or any other proper encyclopedia that would establish notability as those users want the article to be structured), which is not a good thing at all. The real issue is that some users have been supporting and defending atrocious policy and guideline violations (NPOV, OR/SYNTH, and WEIGHT), not Siebert and I, who have been arguing in good faith; clearly, one of us must be wrong but I am still not convinced it is Siebert and I. You have yet to show they are wrong in their summary of the dispute and article's problems.
Davide King (talk) 03:48, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
Summary of dispute by Paul Siebert
editFirst, I disagree with Cloud200's description of the conflict, this describes my position in more details. Second, the overall description of the dispute is as follows:
- "The article is describing numerous and poorly connected events that happened in XX century in different countries. Numerous publications exist that describe those events separately (Type 1 sources). Some publication do comparative analysis, for example, compare two or more Communist states, or compare one or several Communist states with non-Communists etc (Type 2 sources). And, there is a relatively small group of sources that discuss "Communist mass killing" as a single concept (Type 3 sources). Currently, the article relies heavily on Type 3 sources, and other sources play just a subordinated role, or are completely ignored.
- The problem is that the type 3 sources sometimes directly contradict to other sources, and they may contain biased interpretations, use outdated figures and questionable facts etc. Type 3 sources are essentially ignored by country experts, so there is no open disputes between Type 1&2 and Type 3 authors. Even worse, Type 3 sources are unhomogeneous, and they frequently contradict to each other, without saying that openly.
- Nevertheless, the article treats the topic as a well defined and universally recognized topic (similar to the Holocaust), which has some common terminology (it doesn't), commonly accepted statistics (in reality, the number of victims is a subject of one's political views, because there is no agreement what category of life loss can be considered victims of Communism), some common causes (which is not true, for most country experts provide different explanations for each case). And it is not a sruprise that this article directly contradicts to Wikipedia articles about almost every individual event taken separately (Cambodian genocide is one obvious exception).
- In other words, this article is a single huge POV fork, and that situation should be either fixed, or the article should be deleted. I am comfortable with both outcomes, because all essential information will remain in Wikipedia, in such articles as Mass killing, Democide, Classicide, The Black Book of Communism, Red Holocaust, Great Purge, Cambodian genocide, Holodomor and many others.
--Paul Siebert (talk) 19:12, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
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One side note. It seems there is some behavioural issue here. Thus, the filer provides that link as a proof of her attempts to resolve the dispute. As we can see, that post was made by me, and the filer never responded. In connection to that, I am wondering why the filer presents her own refusal to collaborate as my ostensible "ownership" of the article. Not only that is an unprovoked personal attack, it is simply not true.--Paul Siebert (talk) 20:27, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
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Mass killings under communist regimes discussion
edit- Volunteer Note - The filing editor has not notified the other editors, which is required as part of a filing at this noticeboard. Robert McClenon (talk) 23:32, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
- Sorry, my mistake. All parties have been notified per the protocol, although I have also posted a notice in the article's talk page yesterday to which two people already responded. Cloud200 (talk) 06:40, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
- Volunteer Note - This case appears to involve both a content dispute that is more extensive than the usual scope of disputes that are handled at this noticeboard, and allegations of conduct violations. The statement of what is being asked appears to include rolling back one to two months of editing to an earlier version of the article. We don't act as arbitrators or as an editorial board. Also, both sides have said that there may be conduct issues by the other side. However, if all editors agree to moderated dispute resolution, I am willing to try to mediate this dispute, with the understanding that it is likely to break down either into one very large RFC or several relatively large RFCs. All editors will have to agree that they will allow me to try to mediate in order to proceed, and I will request that an administrator back up my authority as mediator. After notice is given, the next question is whether the editors want moderated dispute resolution and whether they will agree to set aside any conduct concerns. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:12, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
- Volunteer note: Note Cloud200 canvassing users to this discussion with non-neutral messages (and choosing those who they think would support them).--Ymblanter (talk) 07:47, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
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- I would be very happy for Robert McClenon to mediate in the article as this is precisely what we need there - an objective, experience third-party who will moderate arguments on both side.
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I would like to highlight that I'm not rejecting changes proposed by Siebert and King and I have on multiple occasions proposed a civilised way to discuss their specific edits, one by one, based on sources and include them in the article as specific views on the subject. What I am rejecting is their way of turning the discussion into a Gish gallop where any specific statement on our side is countered by a five pages of text that involves dozens of digressions interluded with ad hominem attacks, accusing us of being "Eastern European" and "a Stalinist"[4] (!) only because I do support the idea that USSR as a state was responsible for the mass atrocities it committed as a state. At the same time these editors do not seem to accept any alternative views on the subject and gradually replace them in the article, thus completely overturning its meaning. |
Cloud200 (talk) 11:29, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
Before I agree that Robert McClenon mediated this dispute, I would like him to answer several questions.
- Do you know that the filer is actually a newcomer, and the conflict around this article is more than 10 years long, and almost all concerns and objections raised in the gigantic talk page archives remain unaddressed and unresolved?
- Do you know that the number of potential participants is much bigger (I can name more than 10 other users who may be interested in participation)?
- Are you ready to delve into all details of that conflict?
- Do you realize that potential outcome of this dispute may range from compete restoration of the article to its full rewrite (and even deletion)?
If the answer to all those questions is "Yes", then I am ready to accept you as a mediator, but be prepared that the mediation may be very long and hard.
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In addition, the filer is throwing accusations that are factually incorrect and may be interpreted as personal attacks. The filer has already been duly notified that the topic is under WP:DS, and I warned the filer that their behaviour may result in AE actions. I think it would be incorrect to conduct the mediation process in parallel with AE. Therefore, since it seems it is hardly possible to discuss content and conduct issues simultaneously, the most productive way would be as follows:
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- (2) I agree to participate in mediation, which will be devoted exclusively to the content dispute, and no behavioural questions will be raised.
--Paul Siebert (talk) 14:46, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
- User:Paul Siebert - I will be posting Statement Zero by the moderator (myself) within a few hours. The participating editors will be asked to agree to it. The rules for mediation at DRN have always said that we discuss content only, and that there is to be no discussion of editor conduct. No editor except the moderator or an administrator may issue warnings to any other editors. There will be no casting of aspersions, incivility, or personal attacks. All editors will understand that ArbCom discretionary sanctions are in effect, and that there will be no reports to Arbitration Enforcement or WP:ANI. I will be posting Statement Zero within a few hours. If the editors agree, then I will post Statement One, which will start a mediation process that may last a few months (not just the usual two to three weeks). If any editor does not agree, then what I do next may depend on who the survivors are. Robert McClenon (talk) 15:09, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
- I got no answer to my second question. IMO, it is important to invite the users who participated in the MKuCR talk page discussion during the period from 2015 (tentatively) till now. Many of them, such as Fifelfoo, or KIENGIR quit because they came to a conclusion that the dispute came to an impasse, but I have a feeling they may express a desire to participate in this DR. It would be incorrect to start the process until all potential participants have been duly informed. Paul Siebert (talk) 15:38, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
- See below, but one of those editors has been banned. The other editor may be notified. I do not intend to have a large number of participants in mediated discussion, because that becomes chaotic. The principal means for participation by other editors will be the RFC process, but a limited number of other editors may be invited.
- I got no answer to my second question. IMO, it is important to invite the users who participated in the MKuCR talk page discussion during the period from 2015 (tentatively) till now. Many of them, such as Fifelfoo, or KIENGIR quit because they came to a conclusion that the dispute came to an impasse, but I have a feeling they may express a desire to participate in this DR. It would be incorrect to start the process until all potential participants have been duly informed. Paul Siebert (talk) 15:38, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
- User:Paul Siebert - I will be posting Statement Zero by the moderator (myself) within a few hours. The participating editors will be asked to agree to it. The rules for mediation at DRN have always said that we discuss content only, and that there is to be no discussion of editor conduct. No editor except the moderator or an administrator may issue warnings to any other editors. There will be no casting of aspersions, incivility, or personal attacks. All editors will understand that ArbCom discretionary sanctions are in effect, and that there will be no reports to Arbitration Enforcement or WP:ANI. I will be posting Statement Zero within a few hours. If the editors agree, then I will post Statement One, which will start a mediation process that may last a few months (not just the usual two to three weeks). If any editor does not agree, then what I do next may depend on who the survivors are. Robert McClenon (talk) 15:09, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
Robert McClenon (talk) 15:58, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
Zeroth Statement by Moderator (Communist Killings)
editI am ready to begin mediation about Mass killings under communism. This mediation may take a few months, not just the usual few weeks of DRN. The mediation will focus on Mass killings under communism; however, since articles must not contradict each other, it may be necessary to look at other articles, in particular on specific atrocities.
Other Editors
The participants may invite other editors who are in good standing to join in the mediation. The mediation will not be delayed while waiting for responses from other editors. Any invitation to join the proceedings must be neutrally worded. The main mechanism for involving other editors will however be the RFC process. This is because trying to conduct moderated discussion with a large number of editors becomes chaotic.
Ground Rules
The editors are asked to read the ground rules and to understand them:
- Be civil and concise.
- Civility is required everywhere in Wikipedia and is essential in dispute resolution. Uncivil statements may be collapsed.
- Overly long statements do not clarify issues. (They may make the author feel better, but the objective is to discuss the article constructively.) Overly long statements may be collapsed, and the party may be told to summarize them. Read Too Long, Didn't Read, and don't write anything that is too long for other editors to read. If the moderator says to write one paragraph, that means one paragraph of reasonable length.
- Do not report any issues about the article or the editing of the article at any other noticeboards, such as WP:ANI or Arbitration Enforcement. Reporting any issue about the article at any other location is forum shopping, which is strongly discouraged. Any old discussions at any other noticeboards must be closed or suspended. If any new conduct discussions are opened, this mediation will be failed.
- Comment on content, not contributors.
- The purpose of discussion is to improve the articles, not to complain about other editors. (There may be a combination of content issues and conduct issues, but resolving the content issue often mitigates the conduct issue or permits it to subside.) Uncivil comments or comments about other editors may be suppressed.
- "Comment on content, not contributors" means that if you are asked to summarize what you want changed in the article, or left the same, it is not necessary or useful to name the other editors, but it may be important to identify the paragraphs or locations in the article. It isn't necessary to identify the other editors with whom you disagree.
- Discuss edits, not editors. This means the same as "Comment on content, not contributors". It is repeated because it needs repeating.
Do not edit the article while moderated discussion is in progress. If the article is edited except by the moderator, the mediation may be failed.It would be better not to discuss the article on the article talk page or on user talk pages while moderated discussion is in progress, because discussion elsewhere than here may be overlooked or ignored.- Be specific at DRN . Do not simply say that a section should be improved, but tell what improvement should be made. Do not simply say that "All viewpoints must be discussed", but identify the missing viewpoints.
- Do not engage in back-and-forth discussion to statements by other editors (except as noted below); that is, do not reply to the comments of other editors. That has already been tried and has not resolved the content dispute. Address your comments to the moderator and the community. Except in a section for back-and-forth discussion, replies to other editors or back-and-forth discussion may be collapsed by the moderator and may result in a rebuke.
- The moderator will provide a section for back-and-forth comments. Keep your comments in that section, so that anyone else can ignore them. Comments in the back-and-forth section, like everywhere else, must be civil.
- Every participant is expected to check on the case at least every 72 hours and to answer questions within 72 hours, unless they have said that they will be taking a break of not more than a week.
Robert McClenon (talk) 15:58, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
Archives and Blank Pad
The moderator has not read the lengthy archives, and may or may not read the archives. This means that the participants may be asked to restate what they have already stated. If the participants think that they are starting over, that is because we are starting over. Robert McClenon (talk) 15:58, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
Zeroth Statement by Editors (Communist Killings)
edit- Agreed.I neither expected nor proposed the Moderator to read talk page archives, I just said that the concerns raised in them must be addressed too. I can present summaries of archived discussions (with links)--Paul Siebert (talk) 16:26, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
- Agreed and thank you for participation. Cloud200 (talk) 17:19, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
First statement by moderator (Communist killings)editHere are a few more thoughts on how I plan to try to handle the mediation. First, we will try to divide issues between those having to do with the reliability and choice of sources, those having to do with balance and due weight, and other disputes. Both academic and non-academic (popular press) sources may be used. If necessary, disputes over the reliability of sources can be referred to the reliable source noticeboard, which will put that dispute on hold here, in which case we will try to work on other issues. We will try to resolve disputes over wording, balance, and due weight by compromise, and if necessary will rely on RFC. If reliable sources are in direct disagreement, which is likely to happen with numbers of deaths, we will list all of the differing opinions or viewpoints. The editors are asked to reread the neutral point of view policy, which is the second pillar of Wikipedia, and to reread the verifiability policy. These policies are paramount, and no exceptions will or can be made. I will be posting a note at the administrators' noticeboard stating that we are starting mediation. This does not mean that anyone is being reported for conduct; no one is being reported for conduct. This is only a matter of visibility. Editors should not try to discuss this case at WP:AN, and I am saying not to discuss this case at WP:AN. Editors should be aware that Eastern Europe discretionary sanctions are in effect to deal with disruptive editing. So avoid disruptive editing. Each editor is asked to state, in one to three paragraphs of ordinary length, what they think are the most important issues, and also to ask any questions about how we will be working. After I see the introductory statements, I will have a better idea how to prioritize the various parts of the dispute. Robert McClenon (talk) 18:16, 5 November 2021 (UTC) First statements by editors (Communist killings)editStatement by Paul Siebertedit(It may be somewhat lengthy, but this introduction is necessary. My other posts will be more brief) Before discussing concrete sources, we need to come to an agreement on categories of sources. As I already explained (see above), all available sources can be divided on three groups. The problem is that the group 1 sources essentially ignore the group 3 sources, so there is no direct discussion between them. Let me demonstrate it using the Great Chinese famine as an example. This case is very important, because it is responsible for lion's share of deaths ascribed to Communist regimes, so if we exclude it, the "global Communist death toll figure" will become much less impressive. If I were a "naive Wikipedian" with zero preliminary knowledge of the subject, I would have typed something like this or that. However, if I believed that the Great Chinese famine was a mass killing, and wanted to find sources supporting this idea, I would have typed this. Clearly, the sources from these two lists are quite orthogonal. What is more important, if you look at the sources from the first list (for example, O'Grada's "Great leap into famine: A review essay", cited in 12 scholarly publications, or Kung&Lin's "The causes of China's great leap famine, 1959–1961" (cited 170 times), these sources use much more calm tone, are more cautious in conclusions, do not use such terms as "genocide" or "mass killings", and, importantly, never cite the authors from the last list (e.g. Rummel). The group 1 and group 3 sources exist in "parallel universes", and they tell totally different stories about the same event. Importantly, the group 1 sources are much more detailed, their analysis of facts is more careful, and their conclusions are much more balanced. However, the group 1 sources are dramatically underrepresented in the MKuCR article. Moreover, the "Debates over famine" section is quite misleading, because it creates an impression of false balance, whereas there is virtually no debates over, e.g. Great Chinese famine in majority of scholarly research papers or books, which do not consider it "genocide" or other "-cide", or a "mass killing" (for example, see O'Grada's opinion). If you look at other topics, the situation is pretty much similar: we have a large number of good quality sources on each concrete country or each separate event, which provide a quite adequate description of each separate topic (group 1 sources). We have works authored by "genocide scholars" (group 2 sources) who, as they themselves concede, are not too accurate in some concrete facts figures or interpretations, but who are mostly focused on finding general global dependencies between the type of a society and a likelihood of onset of mass killings, a.k.a geno-politicide (group 2 sources). These sources analyze all geno/politicides (Communist and others), or do comparative analysis of some separate events (e.g. China, Cambodia, USSR, or Cambodia vs Rwanda vs Bosnia, or Cambodia vs Indonesia). And we have a bunch of sources who focus exclusively at "Communist mass killings" as some separate event. These sources (the Black Book of Communism, more concretely, its scandalous introduction, is an example), represent an overwhelming minority of view, and they have been severely criticized for pushing some specific agenda (for example, that Communism was greater evil than Nazism). However, these sources are the core of the article: they set article's structure, and until that flawed structure is changed, the article will be remaining a single huge POV-fork. Interestingly, due to its structure, the article managed to distort even the views of Benjamin Valentino, the author, whose book gave a name to the article. The main Valentino's idea is that the regime type is not a good predictor for mass killings onset. He came to that conclusion by having analyzed similar type regimes, and he found that one of them committed mass killings, whereas another one didn't. His main conclusion is that leader's personality is the main factor responsible for mass killing, and a practical conclusion is: if we remove some concrete group from power, we may eliminate a risk of mass killings even without making serious transformation of the state's political system. It is ironical that the work of the researcher who wanted to demonstrate that some limited number of persons are real culprits became a core of the article that puts responsibility for mass killings on Communist ideology as whole. I see two possible solutions of this problem (article's deletion would be too radical, so I do not consider it seriously).
--Paul Siebert (talk) 19:33, 5 November 2021 (UTC) Statement by Cloud200editThe title of Mass killings under communist regimes is very straightforward: it describes events when large groups of people have been killed ("mass killing") in countries that described themselves as communist ("communist regimes"). The article is not called "genocide under..." or "politicide under...". It uses the most basic and widely understood term of "mass killing", and I don't think any of the parties disputes these killings actually happening. Siebert raises a number of issues with academic or legal definitions of the term "genocide", clearly siding with one specific side of that debate, but the article is not about "genocide" in the first place. It's about "mass killings", which is one reason why its scope is so broad to include mass executions, mass mortality due to conditions in concentration camps, deaths during mass deportations and mass mortality due to state-induced famines. Siebert then does dispute the attribution of what he euphemistically calls "excess mortality" in China or Soviet Union on the ideology of communism. This is a complex topic and there are many popular and academic views on this subject. One of them can be seen above in Siebert's comment, but this view it's by far not the only one. To the contrary, there's massive body of evidence going from Marx and Engels, through Lenin and other Bolshevik leaders, to Stalin, that quite explicitly postulates that the communist revolution must be performed by means of mass killings. There cannot be a single universal view on these subjects, as they all look at different angles. Most notably, the perspective looking at intentions of communist leaders, and the perspective of outcomes as experienced by their citizens are dramatically different, and you simply cannot average them. I do not have any problem with presenting all these views in the article in WP:DUE and WP:NPOV manner.
Cloud200 (talk) 11:56, 6 November 2021 (UTC)
Twelfth statement on MKUCR (moderator)editThis post is long. Please take your time to read it and consider it before replying to it. If you have any questions, please take your time in composing your questions about it. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:31, 22 November 2021 (UTC) Conciseness Just because this post is long does not mean that your replies should be long. They should not. Some of the statements have been very long. I am not sure who they are replying to: me, the other editors, the community? I am a moderator and not a judge, so I do not need to be persuaded by long posts with a lot of evidence. The other editors probably either agree with you or disagree with you. The community is more likely to be persuaded by concise statements than by lengthy statements. Negative Consensus As I previously noted, there seems to be what I will call a negative consensus, that the current state of the article is not satisfactory. I think that the editors agree that it has neutrality problems, although they disagree on the nature of the non-neutrality. Some editors have identified other, possibly associated problems, such as verifiability issues. So the question is where to go from here. I think that a Request for Comments is in order. What we will do now is to identify the alternate ways forward, and to put together the RFC to choose between them. AFD ? I will address at least one comment by an editor. User:Davide King writes: I think that if we truly want to move forward, we need to identify the main topic of this article. If we cannot agree on what the main topic is, and is to be structured, we should have both AfD and RfC — because it is not sufficient that AfD results in Keep or No consensus, if we, in fact, do not agree on what the main topic is, hence a RfC will be necessary. Does that mean that User:Davide King thinks that an AFD is in order? On the one hand, if they think that an AFC is in order at this time, they might as well initiate it now, and I will put this DRN on hold again. On the other hand, I think that an AFD at this point is premature, and an AFD is only necessary if the RFCs result in No Consensus or are otherwise inconclusive. But if there is to be an AFD first, rather than RFCs first, let us have it now. Inconsistencies I don't need any more evidence that there is a serious POV fork problem. The inconsistencies are one of the issues that must be resolved. Either this article should be reorganized and made consistent with the other articles, or the inconsistencies should be resolved in this article in some other way, or the other articles should be revised. However, I don't think that revising the other articles is feasible. Changes, probably to this article, are needed to resolve the inconsistencies. Conduct Allegations I don't understand what any editor expects to gain by raising conduct issues. We are aware that there is strong disagreement as to how to achieve a neutral point of view, and on other content issues. I have no reason to believe that any editor is consciously trying to impose a non-neutral point of view. If any editor really wants to report a conduct violation, they may report a conduct violation. I may then fail this mediation, or I may put it on hold. If an editor wants to complain about conduct issues in order to gain an advantage in discussion, that is not useful and will not work. Remember to assume good faith, and avoid wasting time with unnecessary comments about conduct. I may collapse any further comments about conduct issues, unless they are substantial. The Immorality of Communism I think that we all agree that atrocities have been committed in the name of Marxism-Leninism, also known as communism. We do not need to argue about whether there is or is not a moral equivalence between Stalinism and Nazism, or between any form of dictatorship and any other form of dictatorship. We will not discuss whether anyone is a "Communist apologist". Whether anyone was "soft on communism" was a distraction in American politics in the 1970s, and it is still a distraction. I may collapse any comments about moral equivalence, which is irrelevant, or apologies for communism, or any similar distractions. The Name of This Article The title of this article raises at least two questions. First, we have already discussed that it is not always clear what was a mass killing, and we should continue to be aware of this. In particular, there are questions among scholars over the extent to which at least two famines, the Soviet famine of 1932-1933 and the Great Chinese famine of 1959-1961 were human-caused. Second, this article is about Mass killings under communist regimes, but that really means mass killings under self-identified communist regimes, governments that had a stated ideology of Marxism-Leninism. Not all governments that described their economic and political policies as Leninist have been the same, and no government that described itself as Leninist has followed the same policies over a period of more than five decades. This means that any decision to lump together atrocities under different governments may be controversial. This does not mean that it should not be done, only that it must be recognized to be combining atrocities based on an identified ideology rather than specific actual policies. The point is that parsing the meaning of the title of this article should illustrate that the topic is not straightforward, and requires resolution. There seems to be agreement that this article has major issues that need to be resolved. The next step is to identify one or more RFCs concerning how to fix this article. If there are two or three competing ideas, they can be proposed as alternatives. User:Paul Siebert has said that this article should be reorganized in either of two ways. Those can be options on an RFC. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:31, 22 November 2021 (UTC) Twelfth statements on MKUCR (editors)editDavide KingeditI thank the moderator for their response and apologize for the length of the posts; I agree in trying to better summarize and avoid conduct allegations, Communism and Nazism comparisons, etc. I think their response was satisfying and helpful, especially in regards to the recognition of inconsistencies but also the Name of the Article question. "Not all governments that described their economic and political policies as Leninist have been the same, and no government that described itself as Leninist has followed the same policies over a period of more than five decades." This is indeed correct and the lumping was, in fact, something I personally lamented. I also accept that it "does not mean that it should not be done [and subsequent caveat]." It can be done through Siebert's proposal of either this topic (theory-based only, with relevant events linked when mentioned or See also — does the moderator think the linked topic is a notable one and could be a solution?) or one similar that also discusses events but without contradictions and related issues. If the moderator accept those as two possible solutions, do the other two users accept them? If they do not, while the moderator does, how can we resolve this, and what would be the next move? As for my quoted comment, I would not want to put this in hold now — I was more thinking of AfD and RfC as a future possibility when this discussion is actually closed by the moderator with hopefully a clear result either way, and I agree that the RfC should be held first in such a case. Davide King (talk) 05:34, 22 November 2021 (UTC)
As in my edit summary, I am not going to respond further in light of moderator's comments above but I am going to say this — while MKuCR has now finally proved issues, which I believe the next step should be how to fix them (I proposed two possible solutions, the latter of which may be a compromise, though I think the first one is the best in accord with our policies), all other articles' remain unproven and unwarranted allegations; if it was true, rest assured there would have been plenty of discussions about it if scholarly sources were ignored — in fact, I repeatedly asked Nug to participate to the discussion and prove those issues, e.g. at Mass killing (I am still waiting). I believe both users violated moderator's comments:
What to do when users refuse to accept the moderator's summary and fail to adhere by their requests? Davide King (talk) 13:56, 22 November 2021 (UTC)
Here. Davide King (talk) 16:02, 22 November 2021 (UTC)
Here. Davide King (talk) 16:12, 22 November 2021 (UTC) Cloud200editCommunist states (and parties, movements, websites etc) are by widely accepted definition specifically those that self-declared allegiance with Marxism-Leninism as any other criterion leads to No true Scotsman fallacy, because most (all?) of these countries directly refer to communism in their foundational documents and names of their ruling parties (Communist Party of the Soviet Union , Communist Party of China). If we're going to have an RFC on this, then it would largely undermine the whole Communist state article. Also the fact that "there are questions" does not cancel vast amount of evidence that does support the notion that both famines were fueled by state policies such as Law of Spikelets, Propiska in the Soviet Union, production quotas, requisition (!) quotas for NKVD and others documented in Causes of the Holodomor, which is the reason these "questions" have no other modus operandi than ignoring or justifying these well-documented facts. And finally, no "questions" about link of mortality in famines to state policies also cancels the mass-scale explicit executions that form the majority of the Mass killings in Communist countries article. Cloud200 (talk) 11:57, 22 November 2021 (UTC) NugeditInconsistencies Actually, the Moderator could be onto something. Revising some of the sub articles is a valid approach and certainly is feasible. It is clear that some of these sub-articles like Mass killings are poorly written and exclude valid scholarship based literally upon a single sentence in the paper by Karlsson while ignoring a ten page paper showing that same scholarship to be reliable. It seems apparent this may also be an issue for the Great Chinese Famine article too. According to Paul’s points: MKuCR says the famine was a Communist mass killing, or democide, or politicide, or classicide, or Red Holocaust; GCF says it was a man-famine that happened in China (the words "mass killing/-cides/Holocaust" are not used in that article at all)
MKuCR says that Communist ideology, Communist political system and Communist leadership were the common causes for all mass killings in Communist states, and it implies the same is true for Great Chinese Famine; GCF provides a long list of causes, starting from Great Leap Forward economic policy, to extermination of some birds. "Ideology" is not discussed at all. The word "Communist" is used almost exclusively just as a qualifier (i.e. "Communist authorities" used as a synonym for "the authorities of PRC”).
MKuCR says that the question if famine death should be considered as mass killing/-cides is a subject of debates. GCF article contains no mention of such debates.
Conduct allegations/The Immorality of Communism The moderator is right to call this out, after all, the role of a moderator is to moderate, and I thank him for that. Name of the article I already pointed to the article FAQ on why the article is named as it is (the fact that a FAQ exists indicates some kind of consensus was achieved in that regard, no?). Should I summarise the 17 page talk discussions on the subject here? RFCs Seems to me that if we go down the RFC route then one question I would like answered concerns the article Mass killings: Should we now include Rummel’s scholarship in light of Wayman and Tago’s comprehensive analysis and finding on the reliability of Rummel’s database? --Nug (talk) 12:15, 22 November 2021 (UTC) Paul Siebertedit
--Paul Siebert (talk) 17:38, 22 November 2021 (UTC) Update. I've just noticed that the article was nominated for deletion. I think this DR a good place for development of our joint position about that. This DR discussion involves proponents of two opposite views, and we already came to a consensus that the article has severe problems. That is a strong argument in support of article's deletion. If we demonstrate that we a capable of finding some common solution, that will be an argument to keep the article. Otherwise, it may happen the article will be deleted.--Paul Siebert (talk) 18:13, 22 November 2021 (UTC) Thirteenth statement on MKUCR (moderator)editThis is a procedural statement only. This discussion has become longer than the rest of the discussions, and is interfering with them. So I am creating a subpage for this case. This subpage is at Wikipedia:Dispute resolution noticeboard/Mass killings under communist regimes, and its shortcut is WP:DRNMKUCR. I am copying all of the discussion to the subpage, and am collapsing it in the main DNR project page. Your twelfth statements will be copied. If you have not yet made a twelfth statement, you may make it either as a twelfth statement or as a thirteenth statement. Robert McClenon (talk) 20:16, 22 November 2021 (UTC) Thirteenth statements on MKUCR (editors)edit |
Fourteenth statement on MKUCR (moderator)
editI am resuming this DRN without waiting for the formal close of the AFD. At this time it is clear that the article will be kept. The next step should be RFCs concerning the restructuring of the article. We should set up the RFCs to run during one period of one month, so as not to stretch the discussion out any longer than is necessary, when more than a month is already long.
Please do not reply to this statement except with questions or procedural comments until the AFD is formally closed. I may add to my statement when the AFD is closed. Robert McClenon (talk) 02:08, 27 November 2021 (UTC)
The RFC topics that have been proposed include:
- Restructuring the article to a summary style linking to event articles (and so not including details about the events).
- Discussing only those sources that discuss "Communist mass killing" as a single concept, and not specific events, or genocide scholars.
- Cutting this article down to a disambiguation page with links to other articles, including about communism and human rights violations under communism, and about specific events including the two famines and the Cambodian genocide.
- Rolling back the article to its state at the start of September 2021, and continuing normal editing at that point.
Takeaways from the AFD include:
- There are significant inconsistencies between articles.
- Many editors are in agreement that the article has neutrality problems, but there is disagreement as to what the nature of the non-neutrality is, and therefore what the fix is.
- The title of this article raises two issues.
- There is disagreement as to what events were mass killings, in particular as to whether the Chinese famine falls into that category, and the extent to which the Soviet famine falls into that category.
- While there is agreement on what regimes were communist regimes, in particular, those with a stated Marxist-Leninist outlook, there is less agreement as to whether they were really comparable.
Each editor may, after formal closure, make a concise statement concerning another RFC for restructuring or otherwise improving the article.
Each editor may, after formal closure, make a concise statement on takeaways from the AFD. Robert McClenon (talk) 02:08, 27 November 2021 (UTC)
@Cloud200, Paul Siebert, Davide King, and Nug: - For your information. I am not requesting input yet, because the AFD has not yet been formally closed by a panel. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:04, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
Fourteenth statements on MKUCR (editors)
editDavide King
editThat was a good summary of the dispute, the AfD's results, and of possible solutions. I think we may also need to have a RfC about the main topic (Communist death toll, Communist state(s) and mass killing(s), Communist mass killings, Victims of Communism)1 and which sources support it, e.g. Nug cited "The Cold War Struggle (2): Communist Atrocities", but which topic does it support? This is the problem of the whole mass killing naming. By the way, that same source also has "The Cold War Struggle (1): Capitalist Atrocities"; as noted by Siebert on the talk page, that confirms "an obvious notion that when some author group some fact into one book chapter, that does not implies a new topic is created."
One problem is that most sources about Communist mass killings are in fact chapters within general works about mass killing, and Communism is not discussed as a separate category (e.g. Fein 1993). Nug say that Mass killing is a content POV fork of MKuCR, I say it is simply a NPOV article, e.g. it reflects majority of sources which discuss the topic in general and do not make such grouping and/or treat it as a separate category, so MKuCR remains a content POV fork of Mass killing, and not vice versa.
- Notes
1. Victims of Communism is also the only topic to have secondary and tertiary coverage, e.g. Ghodsee 2014, Neumayer 2018, Dujisin 2020. One problem of MKuCR is that if we have to attribute everything, then what is the point? We should use secondary sources to summarize Courtois, Rummel, and Valentino's thoughts, not their own work. If there are no secondary sources that summarize for us the author's thought, then they are undue2 and should be removed from the article as soon as possible; there certainly are for Courtois, Rummel, and Valentino but Nug obviously disagree with our reading and understanding.
2. It is also important in which work they are cited. Are they cited in works about Communism and mass killing, or are passing mentions in completely different ones?
Davide King (talk) 06:10, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
Nug
editFirstly to @Davide King: please don’t make up claims about what I may have stated elsewhere, it is irrelevant here as well as misleading.
In regard to the Moderator’s proposed RFC topics, I think the AfD has rendered them moot. An RFC on these topics would likely have the same outcome since the AfD discussion had raised the first three options and there was no consensus on them. Also during the AfD some of the more contentious changes that originally triggered the DR process was rolled back anyway, and currently there is active editing of the article and associated talk page discussion, which Paul Siebert appears to be fully engaged in. So it seems the fourth option has been adopted by default.
The statement Many editors are in agreement that the article has neutrality problems, but there is disagreement as to what the nature of the non-neutrality is, and therefore what the fix is.
is probably the key takeaway from the AfD which can be usefully addressed by this DR process. So maybe further exploration of this to see what some RFC topics related to that could be? --Nug (talk) 17:07, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
Fifteenth statement on MKUCR by moderator
editThe purpose of resuming this dispute resolution is to formulate any Requests for Comments that will resolve any of the issues about this article. There have been at least two distinct proposals for RFCs. The first issue is the topic and title of this article, and consequently also the structure of the article. Some of the proposals have been:
- 1. The article should focus on specific instances of mass killing, in which case it should be written in a summary style with links to the articles detailing specific events.
- 2. The article should focus on the linkage between Communism (Marxism-Leninism) and mass killings.
- 3. In my opinion, an article could have both sections, but they should be separate, although cross-linked. This would of course require more work by the editors.
- 4. The article should be cut down to a disambiguation page.
It is my understanding that User:Paul Siebert is also working on an RFC to distinguish between 1 and 2, but is doing so in the "noisy room" of the article talk page. I am willing to do this in the "quiet room" of this subpage. It is my opinion that while 1 and 2 are distinct, and cannot overlap, they are not mutually exclusive.
The second proposed topic for an RFC is whether we should have a Terminology section. Paul Siebert is in the process of moving the Terminology section to other parts of the article. At least one other editor has objected. An RFC may be in order on whether to reverse those edits and maintain a Terminology section.
These possible RFCs do not overlap with the current RFC on tagging. It is my opinion that the tagging RFC is a distraction and should be ignored.
Will the other editors please comment on whether there are any other RFC topics, and provide any ideas about any RFC topics? After reading the input, other editors and I will develop the draft RFC language. I may add to this post within the next 24 hours. Robert McClenon (talk) 01:39, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Fifteenth statements on MKUCR by editors
editVanteloop
editFirst, I have not read the previous 14 rounds of discussion and the back-and-forths. I have too much MKUCR in my life already! Please forgive me if I at any point retread old ground. I have been working to create a RfC that is acceptable to as wide a range of users as possible. I am still in the early stages but I am optimistic that progress can be made. The RfC as currently proposed is as follows, with input from 3 other users. You can read the discussion here
- 1 The article should be a summary style article , providing an overview of mass killing events under communist governments
- 2 The article should discuss the concept of a correlation between mass killings and communist governments, including proposed causes and critiques of the concept
- 3 The article should be split, one for each of the above
- 4 The article should be both 1 and 2 together
The main objection has been from Paul Siebert that 4 should not be allowed as an option. However after discussion he has agreed that it is theoretically possible, although noting that option is only feasible with a re-write it from perspective of majority point of view
. The assessment of North8000 is that it's not possible to exclude that choice.
,I am sympathetic with Nug's view below that a source analysis could be useful to give whatever RfC runs the best chance of reaching an informed consensus. Vanteloop (talk) 11:14, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Note: This is an expansion of my previous statement, in the future I will try to avoid coming back to significantly change my statements
Cygnis insignis
editJoining the discussion, having familiarized myself with its long history before commenting. I first became of aware of the page because of links from discussions I was viewing elsewhere, several years ago. I don't intend to edit the article itself. Of the proposals emerging I favor moving it to "Victims of Communism", the current title sounds like the essay question. ~ cygnis insignis 10:03, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
The description of VOC in Davide's list as a common name, a weighty notion in RMs, is not something I had considered before.13:32, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
I have been considering the current redirect to Victims of Communism, and what the consequences of creating an article on that topic would be; I hesitate due to concerns about WP:Point because it duplicates verifiable assertions implied by this article.
As always, Davide has provided some worthwhile commentary, I'll replace this comment with a response when I have taken time to digest it. 13:25, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Siebert is correct in identifying that one proposed option [King's list: 1.] is tantamount to deletion, and as a dab it might be could be wiped away as not supported by its target articles. There are many articles that are essentially puffed up disambiguation pages, those inclined to collect FAs have made it a craft, but few pages that propound a received idea in this way. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cygnis insignis (talk • contribs) 13:39, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Nug favours 3 of that list, does re-badging in that way, like the current title, put enough distance between a synthetically contrived topic in French and US 'intellectual discourse' to create encyclopedic content? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cygnis insignis (talk • contribs) 13:51, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Davide King
editIdentified topics and possible titles include:
- Communist mass killings – only events universally recognized as mass killings (Stalin, Mao, Pol Pot, plus the Red Terror); either a disambiguation, list, or summary style
- Communist state and mass killing – link between 20th-century Communism and mass killings, and discussion of whether the link extends to broad communist ideology
- Excess deaths under Communist states — de facto Communist death toll, which can serve as an alternative title
- Mass killings under Joseph Stalin, Mao Zedong, and Pol Pot — comparative analysis of those three Communist leaders
- Victims of communism — another name for No. 2, which is the common name of the advocated theory, with communism as major cause and 100 million as the number
No. 4. is the NPOV version of the currently-structured article, which mixes mass killings with excess deaths, and discuss the link by relying on minority or popular press sources.
Here, I already have a work in progress about my proposed topic and its sources. Davide King (talk) 11:05, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
I agree with Nug that we should follow the panel's advice for source analysis, and first of all we should come to an agreement on whether Communism is discussed and/or categorized as a separate category or new topic by majority of scholarly sources. Plus, I would note that Nug is essentially saying that article has no serious issues (e.g. they are proposing the same structure, with their mention of 'Proposed causes' section), which is in contradiction to what the panel ruled, and to what I believe also the moderator have said. Their proposed topic, of merging discussion of events and theories, is essentially the same as the current one, which is why I agree with Siebert that this is problematic.
In fact, majority of sources given in support of the topic actually support my theory-based approach, e.g. they do not go in great detail about what happened and are more concerned about why that happened (the 'Proposed causes' section does a really bad job at summarizing them and mixes them with the popular press, and Siebert can provide further proof of this), how it can be prevented, not a description of the events themselves in details, for which they must rely on country specialists. Indeed, those genocide scholars are interested in patterns and generalizations, which is why the topic should be theory-based and focused, and discussing those scholarly theories, with any significant event linked when mentioned or through 'See also' links. Davide King (talk) 13:13, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul Siebert
editRobert's summary of the proposals seems generally correct, with three exceptions.
- 2. The article cannot focus of the linkage between Communism and mass killings. That is a direct violation of NPOV. Below, I reproduce my post on the talk page where I elaborate on that:
- "Imagine we have some phenomenon X and three theories that explain it (theories A, B, and C). Can we write an article that discusses only the theory A and the phenomenon X? Obviously no. That is explicitly prohibited by our policy,which says All facts and significant points of view on a given subject should be treated in one article except in the case of a spinoff sub-article. The theories B and C are "significant points of view on a subject X", therefore, we either include ALL theories, or discuss only A, but it should be the object of the discussion. That can be achieved only in one way: if a discussion of X is removed from the article (it must be only briefly mentioned to explain the context)."
- In our case, that means that #2 should be
The article should focus on the discussion of the theories that link Communism
(Marxism-Leninism)and mass killings.
- A minor comment: "Communism" and "Marxism-Leninism" are not synonyms. The words "Marxism-Leninism" must be removed.
- 3. That is also a violation of NPOV, for the same reason. All important points of view on MKuCR must be presented in one article, and 99% of sources available to me do not discuss those mass killings in a context of Communism. Majority of those deaths are even not described as "killings" by majority of sources.
- An RfC proposal cannot contain anything that violates NPOV, which is non-negotiable. We need to eliminate policy violations from our proposal.
- 4. Correct me if I am wrong, but conversion to dab is tantamount to deletion. I am not sure we are going to restart the RfC#4.
With regard to the title, I propose to postpone its discussion. The title and the topic are two deeply connected issues, and an attempt to solve them concurrently may be even more difficult than an attempt to solve analytically Schrodinger's equation for a hydrogen molecule (spoiler: it is impossible). The only approach is to separate variables. In our case, that means we resolve one problem first, and then start thinking about another one. --Paul Siebert (talk) 21:19, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Nug
editI appreciate the good faith efforts to formulate suitable RFC questions in regard to the topic both here and on the article talk page, but on reflection I'm thinking that at this stage RFC formulation is premature. Re-reading the AfD decision the admin Panel recommended that the DRN process be resumed and the attempts at source analysis be picked up again as the most promising way forward.
I know the Moderator is somewhat reluctant to follow the panels advice and would prefer to jump straight into an RFC, but RFC questions not informed by source analysis would likely be just as rancorous as the previous AfD. So I propose RFC question formation be parked for the moment and talk about the fundamentals first.
Paul stated "Imagine we have some phenomenon X and three theories that explain it (theories A, B, and C). Can we write an article that discusses only the theory A and the phenomenon X? Obviously no. That is explicitly prohibited by our policy, which says All facts and significant points of view on a given subject should be treated in one article except in the case of a spinoff sub-article."
I agree with that quoted text, an article must include all facts and significant points of view per WP:RS and WP:NPOV.
To my mind option 3 best fits with policy and the current article is closest to option 3. The phenomenon X here is the mass killings that have occurred under communist regimes, and the theories A, B, and C are discussed in the section Mass_killings_under_communist_regimes#Proposed_causes.
Paul states option 3 is a violation of NPOV because "99% of sources available to me do not discuss those mass killings in a context of Communism"
. But these same sources do discuss mass killings as having occurred during Collective_farming#Communist_collectivization for example, and mass killing scholars have grouped these regimes together for the purposes of analysis because collectivization is a characteristic common to communist regimes. Single country experts are focused on single countries and don't necessarily make the connection or see the bigger picture. The AfD has shown that this POVFORK argument was not proven to the Panel's satisfaction to warrant a deletion. So let's have this source analysis that the AfD Panel recommends, let's see these "99% of sources available" that Paul bases his claims upon. --Nug (talk) 10:11, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Sixteenth statement by moderator (DRNMKUCR)
editI took a break from moderating, and I apologize for the delay. I am ready to resume moderated discussion if the editors think that moderated discussion will be useful to identify the scope of an RFC.
I will comment in passing about the quantum equation of the hydrogen molecule. Of course it isn't analytically solvable. See three-body problem. Why would anyone expect that the quantum mechanical version of an intractable problem in classical mechanics would become tractable?
I do not think that there are any small issues that can be decided other than by RFC. If a small group of editors come to a conclusion here, it will not be even a local consensus until an RFC is posted.
I think that I respectfully disagree in detail with a statement by the AFD closers, when they wrote: "We therefore strongly recommend that the DRN process be resumed and pick up the attempts at source analysis carried out in this discussion, which show promise in breaking the deadlock." I do not understand how source analysis will break any deadlock, and in fact this recommendation by the closers seems to contradict their conclusion: "Unfortunately, we can find no consensus on them [the debate about whether sources were interpreted correctly], and consider it unlikely that further discussion in this forum will produce one." It is clear to me that source analysis isn't going to resolve the dispute, because there are a multitude of good-quality sources supporting different viewpoints.
If someone has an alternate approach for source analysis, please describe it. There are reliable sources to support multiple viewpoints and approaches, and enough of them so that looking for what is the "majority" viewpoint probably will not be helpful. I am willing to create a separate discussion subpage if it seems like a useful approach, but I do not intend to delay work on an RFC to try to pursue source analysis.
I agree with the statement that verifiability is not the key policy here. It is an important, non-negotiable policy, but there are sources that support multiple viewpoints. So the question is one of balance and due weight, which are aspects of neutral point of view.
What we need to do is to identify a topic for an RFC that will be useful. I think that the proposal by User:Vanteloop (which is not very different from what I proposed) has the best likelihood of resolving the focus. I am willing to consider other ideas.
I don't think that changing the name or arguing about the name is likely to be useful at this point, but am willing to consider working on the name issue in parallel with the structure issue.
On the one hand, neutral point of view is non-negotiable. However, that does not mean that any one editor has a veto on any approach simply by saying that it violates NPOV. Any editor has a right to ask that their NPOV concerns be addressed, and the community can decide on what is a neutral point of view.
Unless there is a better idea, I will, within 48 hours, create another draft subpage for the RFC as per Vanteloop, and we can edit it. If there is another idea for an RFC, we can work on two draft RFCs at the same time. In the meantime, comments on RFCs are welcomed and requested. Robert McClenon (talk) 02:28, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
Statement 16.1 by Moderator
User:Nug - You object to my identification of communism and Marxism-Leninism. What is your definition of communism that is different from Marxism-Leninism? How do you define a communist regime, since the subject is Mass killings under communist regimes? Have there been any communist regimes that were not Marxist-Leninist, or any Marxist-Leninist regimes that were not communist? Robert McClenon (talk) 05:22, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
Sixteenth statements by editors (DRNMKUCR)
editPaul Siebert
editWRT three body problem: a key step in the Born-Oppenheimer approximation is to assume that movement of one body is negligible, so it can be ignored, so the problem becomes solvable. Similarly, I proposed to ignore, for a while, one aspect of the dispute, and to focus on another one.
I totally agree that verifiability problem is not a key problem. The key problem here is neutrality. All verifiability issues of this article are a result of its non-neutrality: the sources "resist" to their usage in a non-neutral way, and significant distortion, cherry-picking or direct falsifications are needed to write this non-neutral content using these sources.
An example that demonstrate my point is "Causes" section (I already wrote about that, so I will not repeat myself). A fresh example is "Estimates" section: it uses four sources closely affiliated with the US government (and which cite essentially the same obsolete data), one desperately outdated source, of source authored by an amateur scientist, one source that cites demographic data (which is intrinsically incapable of identifying causes of deaths), one highly controversial source, which was severely criticized for its figures, and a couple of sources authored by country experts (and leaves beyond the scope tons of good quality modern sources authored by excellent country experts). Some of those sources were already recognised as lousy at RSN. Why better sources cannot be used? The reason is that the sources used in this section are the only sources that tell about "Communist mass killings" in general, and they are the best available sources about the topic defined as "Communist mass killings"
. However, if we start to talk about each of those events separately from each other, we immediately find tons of good, modern, high quality sources. The only problem is that they do not tell about Communism as a single phenomenon, they discuss each country and each event in their own historical context and separately from each other. Clearly, this section has severe verifiability problems, but the key issue is its non-neutrality. By choosing a totally non-neutral topic and non-neutral structure, the article leaves beyond the scope tons of good sources and distorts those sources that are already being used in it.
Again, the reason is non-neutrality, and Robert absolutely correctly identifies it.
WRT the veto approach. I think the right of veto is an intrinsically bad thing, because that allows some user to skip a consensus building stage. However, the DRN discussion is supposed to be a place where we must come to some joint decision. It is a least noisy platform (in that sense, I agree with Robert), and if we cannot come to a mutually acceptable version of an RfC text here, then there is absolutely no hope that that issue will be resolved elsewhere. We may disagree about something that may be a matter of taste (for example, the community may vote for the option 1 or option 2 in my proposal, or for the Nug's proposal, but each of those options are in agreement with NPOV. However, if some user claims that some additional option violates neutrality, we cannot just ignore that argument: it must be addressed and resolved here, at DRN, otherwise we de facto propose to a communisty to !vote (let me be frank, AfD in this format will be just a vote). Therefore, I think it is quite impossible to propose any RfC if there is a serious concern about non-neutrality of some of its options. Remember, consensus is marked by addressing legitimate concerns held by editors, and, until this legitimate concern has not been addressed, we cannot speak about any consensus version of the AfD text.
There is a big difference between a user who uses their right of veto, and a user who expresses a legitimate concern: the former is not a part of a consensus building process, whereas the latter is a legitimate participant of it.
A response to the Statement 16.1 by Moderator The user who objected to equating of Communism with Marxism-Leninism was not Nug. I said that. Communism is much broader concept even than Marxism. "Marxism-Leninism" is a concept that formed during Stalin's rule, and it significantly deviates from the original Marx's (and, to lesser extent, Lenin's) ideas. "Communism" may refer to some general concept of the society without private property of means of production, which (optionally) may be organised based on some scientific or rationalist principles (in contrast to a free market society). Malia defined Communism as a regime ruled by a party lead by intellectuals (sic!). Other interpretations of this term can also be found. In contrast, Marxism-Leninism is a more concrete concept. It is a pseudoreligious ideology that was based on Marx's writings, but that was significantly distorted by a group of philosophers and economists who survived Stalin's repressions, and adopted to provide a "theoretical ground" for a political system created by Stalin. It is easy to imagine an intellectual capabilities of those authors.
With regard to the term "Communist regime", it is a Western invention, for no "Communist state" described themself as such. They use such terms as "Socialist", "People's" etc. They never claimed to be Communist, they claimed that their goal was to built a Communist society in future. And, by the way, from the point of view of Marxism (and even Marxism-Leninism) the very term "Communist state" is oxymoron. According to Marx, a state is a social institution needed to maintain a dominance of one class over others. It is logical to conclude (and Marx and Lenin made this conclusion) that there will be no "state" in a Communist (classless) society.--Paul Siebert (talk) 06:50, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
- The statement 16.1
- Upon reflection, I agree that source analysis is really important, and Nug and Davide King are right.
- However, we can start it only after a decision is made about the article's topic, for the choice of sources strongly depends of what topic the community chooses.
- Only three options are logically non-controversial and are in accordance with our policy:
- 1. The topic is a concept, or a group of concepts that links Communism and mass killings;
- 2. The topic is all events that lead to premature deaths of several tens of million of people in Communist states;
- 3. Both topics should exist, so the article must be split.
- It is easy to see that any other option either contradicts to our policy or is de facto some variation of these three.
- Thus, @Vanteloop:'s #4 (The article should be both 1 and 2 together) is a violation of the policy, because it proposes to discuss the events predominantly from the point of view of one school of thought. We don't know yet if this school of thought represents a majority view, and there is no reason to expect the community may give an informed answer. To answer this question, a careful source analysis is needed, but the format of the RfC discussion is totally unsuitable for that.
- Therefore, we need to act in two steps.
- First, we ask a community, WHAT should be the article's topic (either a group of views, or the set of events; a third option is: "both" and that requires a split). We CANNOT ask a community HOW concretely should this article be written, because that is hardly a legitimate question: the answer to this question requires a thorough analysis of sources, and it would be ridiculous to expect that majority of users voting at RfC did that analysis.
- Second, after the RfC gives us an answer to the article's topic, we may start a discussion HOW it will be written based on the analysis of sources: if it demonstrates that the school of though that links Communism with mass killing is a majority viewpoint - ok, then we will write the article in that way. That may require some additional local RfCs, which is, in that context, pretty much ok.--Paul Siebert (talk) 20:34, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
- To summarise:
- Option #1 is a question "WHAT is the subject of this article?" (if the community votes for it, the decision is: "the article tells about a group of views");
- Option #2 is a question "WHAT is the subject of this article?" (if the community votes for it, the decision is: "the article tells about a group of events");
- Option #3 is also the same type question (if the community votes for it, the decision is: "make one article about events and another article about theories");
- Option #4 is the question "WHAT is the subject of the article and HOW the content should be represented (if the community votes for it, the decision is: "Write the article about the events, but discuss them in a context of one school of thought").
Therefore, the option #4 is unacceptable: in contrast to options ##1-3, it is a composite question (WHAT is a topic and HOW it should be represented?). Clearly, if the community votes for #2 (or #3), we should perform a careful source analysis to show if the sources allow us to make a discussion of Communism an important part of the story about those events.
- There is one more argument against the option #4. Imagine that we included it, and the community vote for it (which is very likely). After that we will start to analyze sources, and this analysis shows that 99% of sources do not link those mass killings and mass mortality events to Communism (which is, according to my preliminary analysis, is very likely too). What should we do in that situation: to implement the RfC results (which are not supported by our analysis of sources)? to ignore the RfC and act accordingly to the results of our analysis? to start a new RfC? As you can see, the option #4 can be a source of huge problems.
Meanwhile, the option #4 is, in reality, quite redundant. If the community votes for #2, and our subsequent source analysis confirms that many sources discuss those events in a context of Communism, we automatically switch to de facto the option #4 without any conflicts and RfCs.--Paul Siebert (talk) 22:46, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
Davide King
editWith all due respect, but I fail to see how the panel closure got it wrong in regards to source analysis; while I can agree that it is a difficult process and how to do that, I maintain they still got it right. I agree that verifiability issues are a result of its non-neutrality but they are serious because they are misinterpreted as if they are single outing Communism as a special phenomenon, separate category, and new topic when, as showed by Siebert, that is not the case (e.g. Mann) — we must seriously discuss this and what weight it has.
I agree that the question is about balance and due weight, but I fail to see how we can settle this without some form of source analysis. This is inevitabily interlinked to it — how can we achieve balance and due weight when we cannot even distinguish between majority and minority views? When we do not have a single tertiary source about the topic, and the only one that comes close to it dismisses Courtois and Rummel, and does not mention at all Valentino (three core sources), and acknowledges the lack of research and impossible task, while recognizing that majority of sources discuss it individually, not as a special, separate phenomenon as we do, how are we supposed to achieve balance and due weight?
Therefore, I have to respectfully disagree that majority and minority views are not an issue, and with no tertiary source, they are all at best minority views — we cannot write an article based on minority views, can't we? I also think that whether we should merge the events with theories, treat it as a single Communist phenomenon, merge it with the Communist death toll topic, and discuss causes, all in the same article, and whether this is a good topic and solution, is a legitimate question that must be addressed in the RfC — indeed, the AfD ruled that there was no consensus among Wikipedia editors on whether this structure was a encyclopedic topic. And we cannot have more than one topic in a single article.
For the record, it does not mean that one cannot support such structure, but it is a legitimate concern that should be addressed, and that is further legitimized by the AfD closure, or else it would have resulted in a 'Keep.' Perhaps the moderator may ask one or more admins to help them with this, both to improve the process and whether they, along with the moderator, help us to find a solution in regards to source analysis, and how we can resolve balance and due weight issues without any analysis thereof.
It is clear to me that source analysis isn't going to resolve the dispute, because there are a multitude of good-quality sources supporting different viewpoints.
I disagree because it all comes down on whether such sources support Communism, rather than Stalin's, Mao's, and Pol Pot's regimes, as a single phenomenon in a separate category or new topic from other regime types, and if so how much support they have in the scholarly literature and whether they are isolated — this is precisely what balance and due weight are about, and I fail to see how we can get to this without analyzing and comparing sources, or something like that. I have two possible solutions for this.
A simple solution may be to look at academic reviews of Chirot, Mann, and the likes, and how much weight they gave to Communism and whether Communism is an important aspect of their reviewed work. Indeed, one problem of the article is that we are all citing this to their own works, which increases the chance of cherry picking and decontextualization, rather than secondary coverage. Another simple solution would be to find a topic that has tertiary sources, and that is this one about theories, memories, and narratives. A discussion explicitily limited to Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot (three Communist leaders, not Communist regimes) is another option, as is a disambiguation page, or list, linking to universally recognized mass killing events. Anything that keeps it simple and focused rather than merging topics and stuff all in one.
P.S. Nug still got it right that on reflection I'm thinking that at this stage RFC formulation is premature. Re-reading the AfD decision the admin Panel recommended that the DRN process be resumed and the attempts at source analysis be picked up again as the most promising way forward. ... RFC questions not informed by source analysis would likely be just as rancorous as the previous AfD.
We must resolve this one way or another, which is interlinked with the issues of balance and due weight, so whether we perform a source analysis or we find another way to solve this issue in a simpler way, it must be addressed for the exact same reasons Nug outlined. Nonetheless, I am curious to hear from the moderator and other editors how we can fix such issues of balance and due weight in a simpler way — I see no other way so far. Davide King (talk) 10:03, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
Vanteloop
editI agree that working to formulate a RfC is the best thing we can do work productively on this article. I think the discussion since the AfD has shown how little improvement has been made to the article to address the fundamental concerns of all editors and the only way to break this 'deadlock' I think is for the wider community to unambiguously decide what the focus of the article should be.
I am still willing to work on improving my RfC proposal with all other editors. However, that does not mean that any one editor has a veto on any approach simply by saying that it violates NPOV. Any editor has a right to ask that their NPOV concerns be addressed, and the community can decide on what is a neutral point of view.
This is key, and gives me hope that this moderated discussion can be more productive than the talk page by ensuring the process cannot be 'gamed' whether intentionally or unintentionally. Vanteloop (talk) 10:25, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
Following up, I strongly support the creation of a subpage whatever we decide the next step is. It seems this discussion is substantially new that we can seperate it from the previous 14 rounds of discussion and doing so may encourage other users to join by lowering the perceived barrier of entry. Vanteloop (talk) 10:32, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
Regarding further arguments put forward by other editors I just want to re-iterate I fully agree with North8000's assessment I still disagree that #1 & #@ can't coexist. And add to that, that coexistence is what the current article is.....arguments that policy says that the current article shouldn't exist are arguments of the AFD's. I'm not arguing for "both", but am observing that it's not possible to exclude that choice.
Saying option 4 cannot even be offered is re-litigating the AfD. It should be up to the community to decide what is the neutral point of view, not us writing the RfC which is why I've tried to include all serious proposals for the future of the article. If option 4 so clearly violates NPOV it should be fairly easy to explain to the editors in the community why that's the case (and this is true of the other arguments against #4 put forward). There's clearly many established editors who disagree it is unacceptable to include and no editor has a 'veto' Vanteloop (talk) 22:33, 12 December 2021 (UTC) updated 1st 22:55, 12 December 2021 (UTC) updated 2nd 23:14, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
Cygnis insignis
editEvery related discussion stems from a failure of NPOV, an open invite to a battleground, I maintain it is likely to be irresolvable under this fugitive title. The closing statement was by in large appropriate, despite the scent of media statement, no consensus being a reasoned interpretation of the consensus from the discussion. ~ cygnis insignis 12:28, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
Seventeenth Statement on DRNMKUCR (Moderator)
editDraft RFC
I have created a section for a draft RFC. The draft will be moved to the article talk page and activated when we think that it is ready to request input from the community. Do not start !voting in the draft RFC while it is a draft. You may edit the statements of the options in order to improve them. The draft RFC is at Wikipedia:Dispute resolution noticeboard/MKUCR RFC 1. Robert McClenon (talk) 23:15, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
Source Analysis
I think that I have four questions and a comment at this point about source analysis. The first is who will be doing the source analysis. In particular, will it be done by all of the editors, or some of the editors, or by the moderator, and with what breakdown of responsibility? I do not plan to do the source analysis. If the source analysis is to be done by a group, I would like to see an explanation of how it will be structured and managed.
The second question is how long the source analysis will take. This will affected whether the source analysis should be done prior to the RFC on article structure, or concurrently with the RFC on article structure. Is it expected that the source analysis will take a week, a few weeks, a few months?
The third question is how source analysis will affect the need to define the topic and structure of the article. There are many sources, supporting different viewpoints. Does anyone think that source analysis will determine that certain sources are the majority of sources and therefore the prevalent sources to be used?
Fourth, I wonder whether the comment in the close about source analysis was made by one of the closers with minimal coordination by the other closers. It isn't obvious to me how source analysis would proceed.
Fifth, I may be less optimistic than the editors who think that we need to conduct source analysis at DRN. I have the feeling that any source analysis that is intended to resolve the issues with this article is like the quest for the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow. The end of the rainbow moves as one approaches it (if the weather remains otherwise the same, so that it is still raining overhead and to the east and the sun is still visible in the west). I don't think that any amount of source analysis will persuade those editors who disagree with the editor conducting the analysis. I think that a source analysis intended to resolve the issues or to break the deadlock will result in more references to add to the article, but leave the issues unresolved, because it will leave the disagreeing editors unpersuaded. For that reason, I think that we need to proceed with an RFC in spite of having disagreement about the sources. That is my pessimistic opinion.
Communism and Marxism-Leninism
An editor took issue with my equating of the term communism and the term Marxism-Leninism. It is important that we know what is meant by communist regimes in the title of the article. I think that the term should encompass governments that proclaim any sort of ideology that they claim to be Marxist-Leninist. That is, if a government says it is Marxist or Leninist, we should count it as Marxist-Leninist, and therefore as communist. If someone else has a different set of definitions that has utility, please provide it for discussion.
Comment
I have been asked to look at some of the comments made in the back-and-forth discussion. I will do that, but am posting this now because I am also posting the draft RFC for comments and discussion.
Timeline
There is no particular schedule or deadline for any editor to respond, and there will not be any particular deadline unless I say that there is one, but comments are always welcome. Robert McClenon (talk) 23:15, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
Statement 17.2 by moderator (MKUCR)
editI was asked to read and comment on the discussion in the space for back-and-forth discussion on Mass killings under communist regimes. I assume that the particular issue has to do with the planned RFC on restructuring of the article, and the argument that Option 4, which permits both Option 1 and Option 2, should not be permitted because Option 4 would be non-neutral in its point of view. User:Paul Siebert states that User:Vanteloop has failed to present a rational counter-argument to support their claim that Option 4 is a valid option. I think at this point that I do not understand Paul Siebert's argument, so it is not necessary or possible for me to judge whether Vanteloop has countered it. The argument by Paul Siebert is lengthy, but I do not understand it, possibly because it is too long. I have tried in the past to say that overly long arguments are not always persuasive, and maybe this is such a case. At this point, I will not exclude Option 4. The parties are reminded to be concise in their further arguments. Robert McClenon (talk) 07:48, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
Seventeenth Statement on DRNMKUCR (Editors)
editPaul Siebert
editDraft RFC
I generally like it. However, each options must be formulated as precisely as possible. That will allow the community to clearly understand what they are voting for. In addition, the proposal must be free of potential NPOV violations, for I share the Moderator's concern about the need to resolve NPOV problems first (and to avoid creating them). I also see some minor inaccuracies in the Moderator's text, and the wording is sometimes ambiguous. These ambiguities may be the seeds of potential disputes over a correct interpretation of the RfC's verdict. If we don't want to start another RfC about a results of this RfC, let's be as precise as possible in our definitions.
First, the word "correlation" in B gives an undue weight to a small group of researchers who performs factor analysis of genopoliticide data. In addition, this term is too narrow, for majority of authors (including most sociologists, like Michael Mann) discuss causation. Furthermore, the phrase "the concept of a correlation between mass killings and communist governments" is unclear: what does "Correlation (or causation) between mass killings and ... government" is supposed to mean? In reality, the theories that we propose to discuss tell about correlation/causation between mass killings and such factors as ideology, Marxist doctrine, etc. The term "Communist government" does not necessarily has a direcgt relation to that: in many sources "communist" is just an identifier, for example, the name of the Soviet government after 1917 (similar to the Democratic party, which is not more "democratic" than the Republican party: they both are a part of the democratic political system, and "Democratic" in this context is just a name).
My second concern is that the wording of C may contain a direct violation of NPOV. Concretely, it a priori sets some structure ("consist of two sections"), which may create an apparent hierarchy, which WP:STRUCTURE requires to avoid. That is a seed of future conflicts, so I propose to change the wording to minimizes that possibility. We cannot make the article's structure a subject of this RfC, for, per our policy, article's structure is an important tool in achieving article's neutrality. A decision about the structure must be made only after the source analysis will be performed. Therefore, C should contain no mention of any concrete structure.
I also think that the questions are too short and abstract. That is a problem, because majority of users are not aware of many details that are obvious to us. I propose to add some concrete examples into each question. By doing that, we will make the life of RfC's participant easier and show more respect to them.
My text is as follows:
- A. The article should be reorganized as a summary style article, providing an overview of all excess mortality events<re>This term should be used because majority of sources do not use "mass killing" in that context</ref> (e.g. Great Chinese famine, Soviet famine of 1932-33 etc.) and mass killing events (such as Cambodian genocide, Great Purge, etc) that occurred under communist governments.
, and linking to articles on each of the mass killing events.[1] It will also include a brief discussion of all significant views on causative factors that lead to those deaths, including the role of Communism, which will be discussed fairly, proportionally and without an editorial bias.[2] - B. The article should discuss the concept
of a correlation between mass killings and communist governmentsthat links mass killings with Communism as a primary causative factor,[3], includingproposed causes andcritiques of the concept.
- C. The article should
consist of two sections, the first of which is A, and the second of which is B[4] be an amalgamation of the topic A and topic B, where B will be discussed fairly, proportionally, and without an editorial bias, along with other significant points of view on the subject.[5]
- D. The article should be split into two articles, as described above.[6]
Source analysis I am not sure I understand what type of source analysis can we do before we get the RfC verdict, for the direction of the analysis strongly depends on the RfC results. I promise to make my part quickly after the RfC yields some definite conclusion.
"Communism" vs "Marxism-Leninism" Instead of engaging in theorising, I propose to use another approach. Wayman&Tago (Journal of Peace Research, Vol. 47, No. 1 (january 2010), pp. 3-13) says that there were 18 Communist states, according to a consensus among genocide scholars. Let's just take this list. This does not imply all of them committed mass killings, that just defines a potential article scope.
Comment
If Moderator means my comment, I respectfully ask them to disregard my request and focus on more important things.--Paul Siebert (talk) 05:00, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
- ^ That is redundant, because the hyperlink to WP:SS is already provided
- ^ This addition is necessary, because the community must understand that we are not proposing a list article, and that will be a summary style article that, like other SS, will cover all aspects proportionally to their weight.
- ^ That is a direct reference to the views expressed by Coiurtois, Malia, VoC and some other sources. The community must clearly understand what exactly we are proposing.
- ^ As I explained, that directly contradicts to WP:STRUCTURE: it a priori defines B as a separate group of views that, in contrast to other views, deserve a separate section. We literally propose a community to create an apparent hierarchy, which NPOV may not allow if our source analysis will demonstrate that this view is not a majority view.
- ^ This addition is needed, because some users may misunderstood our proposal, and reject C as a violation of NPOV.
- ^ No change is needed.
Nug
editProposed RFC
I prefer Vanteloop's amended RFC questions for the reasons explained:
A. The article should be reorganized as a summary style article, providing an overview of all mass killing events and excess mortality events that occurred under communist governments.
B. The article should discuss the concept of a correlation between mass killings and communist governments, including proposed causes and critiques of the concept.
C. The article should consist of two sections, the first of which is A, and the second of which is B.
D. The article should be split into two articles, as described above.
Source Analysis
I think plunging straight into an RFC will be business as usual, with both sides entrenched in their respective positions. A source analysis is something different, and may help better inform both sides on any prospective RFC. That’s got to be a positive. In answer to the moderator's questions:
- Who will be doing the source analysis: This could be done by a small group of editors who want volunteer, I’m sure Paul would be keen, I can contribute too, as can others. The role of the moderator would be to facilitate, give feedback and moderate in case we start losing our tempers. ;o) Probably needs a subpage to aggregate, sort and discuss sources.
- How long the source analysis will take: I wouldn’t expect it to take any longer that three or four weeks. With the Christmas/New Year break coming up I certainly will have some spare time to devote to it.
- How source analysis will affect the need to define the topic and structure of the article: We have four initial RFC options, that can steer the source analysis. On conclusion it may well be the case that only two modified options remain, so we can then have the formal RFC on that. WP:UNDUE has been identified as issue, that is what source analysis can address. First we need to identify which sources are relevant, then assess their weight based upon various criteria.
I’m sure Paul has some thoughts with respect to the importance of conducting a source analysis before diving head first into an RFC. --Nug (talk) 08:47, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
On reflection I'm probably a bit overly optimistic on the potential duration of any source analysis, so I have no objection to having the RFC first and basing the source analysis upon the result. --Nug (talk) 20:05, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
Davide King
editI think Siebert's rewording for the RfC should make everyone good — all options are considered and they are explained in better details that those who did not take part to discussion here or on the talk page, and the article's long-standing issues, can easily understand. WP:STRUCTURE is clear, and C should not contain mentions of any concrete structure, other than be an amalgamation of A and B. If there is consensus for this, the structure will be decided together, keeping or taking in mind source analysis.
I agree with Nug on source analysis, including the whos, hows, and whens. I think it makes more sense to have it before the RfC because imagine what a mess it would be if there is finally consensus for a given topic but then it is found out there are clearly issues in regards to sourcing, and we are back to this, but I can wait and accept what the moderator say.
Davide King (talk) 11:10, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
I am fine with Vanteloop's suggestion to have A be a summary style of the events, but I still think Siebert's re-wording for C is the correct one; it is also very awkward, as if there are going to be only two main sections, while amalgamation of both A and B is more clear, and the structure can be decided on source analysis. None of the options should include proposed structures, which must be discussed later on, the RfC must only summarizes the given topics, while making them clear to those who have not followed discussions.
Davide King (talk) 18:52, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
Vanteloop
editFirstly, I would like to say how pleasantly surprised I am at the progress being made towards an RfC. I was always hopeful but I think this discussion has been handled well and is on the right track. Especially for this article, if we can improve it I think we all deserve a drink. But I won't get ahead of myself.
Source Analysis I agree with the moderator's concerns. I've also read Nug and Davide King's replies. I think if there can be an agreed upper time limit (note that this doesnt mean the discussion has to use all this time) and a structure agreed upon - it would be helpful to wait for this to be done before presenting the RfC. The users involved clearly have an extensive understanding of the resources on this topic so a structured discussion could be useful.
Statement 17.2 Agree fully, especially that we must be concise in order to be fully understood. I think that back-and-forth section is a good example of why no significant progress has been made on this article on the talk page (so far).
Draft RFC
I have read the draft and Paul Siebert's proposed changes. I would suggest:
A. The article should be reorganized as a summary style article, providing an overview of all mass killing events and excess mortality events that occurred under communist governments. It will also include a brief discussion of all significant views on causative factors that lead to those deaths, including the role of Communism, which will be discussed fairly, proportionally and without an editorial bias. [1]
B. The article should discuss the concept of a correlation between mass killings and communist governments that links mass killings with Communism as a primary causative factor , including proposed causes and critiques of the concept. [2]
C. The article should consist of two sections, the first of which is A, and the second of which is B. [3]
D. The article should be split into two articles, as described above.
Vanteloop (talk) 14:41, 14 December 2021 (UTC) Reflist added 16:26, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
- ^ I understand the instinct to add this, but the option to have the article standing alone as a summary article needs to be included so it can be explicitly accepted or rejected by the community
- ^ I prefer the original wording. I think it is clearer, and other causes are (and should be) discussed and critiqued
- ^ This wording better represents the article as it currently is. (I wont bother re-re-re-repeating the arguments why this is needed here)
Cygnis insignis
editB, as edited at time of post, with reference to A for the noted "régimes" and contentions, is a slightly less synthetic topic, [but it could be made redundant by development of other articles on the historiography of US anti-communist propaganda (beginning with the totallynotnazis who paperclipped these articles of faith to any and every questioning of predatory-capitalist hegemony)] ~ cygnis insignis 15:28, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
Eighteenth Statement by Moderator (MKUCR)
editOn the one hand, I am pessimistic about the possibility that source analysis will result in agreement about how to improve the article on Mass killings under communist regimes. On the other hand, it seems that some editors either are pessimistic about an RFC on restructuring the article without source analysis, or are optimistic that further source analysis will make it easier to go forward. So I will open another subpage for source analysis. It is at Wikipedia:Dispute resolution noticeboard/MKUCR Source Analysis.
As User:Nug has suggested, my role will be primarily that of an observer, but I will provide headings to organize the source analysis, and will collapse negative interaction if necessary. I will expect the editors to provide me with one-paragraph status reports on this page, approximately weekly, and I will provide the dates that I want the status reports. I will allow no more than four weeks for the analysis of sources before an RFC is posted on restructuring the article. The RFC will be posted no later than 12 January 2022. If the source analysis either bogs down or results in too much negative interaction, I reserve the right to post the RFC at any time, in which case the source analysis can continue while the RFC runs.
The first report will be due on 18 December 2021. If it isn't one paragraph, it isn't the required report, which means that I may guess as to whether you and the other editors are making progress. Robert McClenon (talk) 01:17, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
Revised Ground Rules (15 December 2021)
editHere are the ground rules for interaction on this page. There is no longer a rule against editing the article. Most of the other rules are still in effect. The rules for the source analysis subpage are at the top of the source analysis subpage. If there seems to be repetition, it is because sometimes that is necessary.
- Be civil and concise.
- Civility is required everywhere in Wikipedia and is essential in dispute resolution. Uncivil statements may be collapsed.
- Overly long statements do not clarify issues. (They may make the author feel better, but the objective is to discuss the article constructively.) Overly long statements may be collapsed, and the party may be told to summarize them. Read Too Long, Didn't Read, and don't write anything that is too long for other editors to read. If the moderator says to write one paragraph, that means one paragraph of reasonable length.
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- Comment on content, not contributors.
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- "Comment on content, not contributors" means that if you are asked to summarize what you want changed in the article, or left the same, it is not necessary or useful to name the other editors, but it may be important to identify the paragraphs or locations in the article. It isn't necessary to identify the other editors with whom you disagree.
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- Do not engage in back-and-forth discussion to statements by other editors, except as noted below; that is, do not reply to the comments of other editors. That has already been tried and has not resolved the content dispute. Address your comments to the moderator and the community. Except in a section for back-and-forth discussion, replies to other editors or back-and-forth discussion may be collapsed by the moderator and may result in a rebuke.
- The moderator will provide a section for back-and-forth comments. Keep your comments in that section, so that anyone else can ignore them. Comments in the back-and-forth section, like everywhere else, must be civil.
Robert McClenon (talk) 01:17, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
Eighteenth Statements by Editors (MKUCR)
editPaul Siebert
editIn my opinion, the only point of disagreement that prevent us to start the RfC is C ("article should consist of two sections, the first of which is #1, and the second of which is #2.").
I disagree, because that implies a strong linkage between "#1" and "#2", which is stronger than with other topics. @Nug: disagreed, and he asked me
- "Let #1 = views == NPOV, #2 = events == NPOV, #4 = merge of #1 and #2 = events + views == NPOV + NPOV => POV. That's illogical. —Nug (talk) 11:12, 13 December 2021 (UTC)"
In responce, I gave him this example:
- "If #1 is Race and crime ("views"), and #2 is Crime in the United States ("events") is it possible to just combine #1 and #2?"
I expected the answer "No", because saying otherwise would be a blatant racism (for by making a two-part article, we would imply that race is a primary cause of crimes in the US). To my big surprise, Nug pointed my attention at the article Race and crime in the United States. However, @Davide King: and @Cygnis insignis: quickly responded, and pointed out that this article doesn't have a two-part structure (the first part about "Race and crime", the second about "Crimes in the US"), and it is more a discussion of a controversy over a linkage (or lack thereof) between race and crime. That reinforced my belief that Wikipedia is not racist.
I checked "Race and crime in the United States" by myself, and I found that it is a spinoff article of the main ("summary style") article Crime in the United States. Which is a pretty correct and neutral structure. Meanwhile, the Race and crime in the United States is a close analog of our option B (a discussion of a controversy over a linkage between Communism and mass killings).
This example shows us how we should approach to this problem, and what is not allowed. It confirms confirms that the two-part structure is not compatible with out policy, unless majority of sources demonstrate that there is a confirmed and universally recognised linkage between mass killings and Communism (as a single phenomenon).
The paragraph below is a philosophical digression, and it may be collapsed by Moderator for better readability.
- START
- "The Pauli principle of Wikipedia says that two articles on the same topic cannot exist unless one of them is SS and another is SPINOFF. If one article tells about, e.g. Great Chinese famine is a general context, another article cannot do the same in a context of Communism. If we combine a narrative about Great Chinese famine and a story of the linkage of Communism and mass killings (including Great Chinese famine), we create a second article about the same event, but it is neither SS nor SPINOFF. That is not allowed.
- END
In this situation, I see the following solutions:
- (I). To remove the two-part structure from RfC (it is the fastest and the most painless way to move forward). If the subsequent source analysis demonstrate a significant linkage between mass killings and Communism, we will have no choice but to return to this structure (for A automatically becomes C).
- (II). To suspend this discussion, and to move to the analysis of sources. If the outcome will be as I anticipate (based on my superficial familiarity with sources) then the option C will be removed as a result of source analysis. If the source analysis gives the opposite result (i.e. it confirms that a major fraction of the representative set of RS do see a significant linkage), then the option "C" stays, and, possibly, the option "A" is removed from the RfC.
I am equally comfortable with any of these scenarios, I am not going to vote for (I) or (II), that is up to you guys to decide.--Paul Siebert (talk) 04:34, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- Although I am not sure if we should make comments on other user's statements during the same round, but I think there is some minor issue that does not deserve an additional round. I point your attention at the text of B. I already explained that, and I need to stress that again: the proposed text may be a source of serious problems. "Correlation" is a strong reference to the works of a small group of genocide scholars who study correlations specifically. Importantly, most of them do not focus at Communism at all, and they study the subject in a global scale, so this makes this topic illegitimate (there are little or no sources that study such correlations specifically in a context of Communism). In addition, the word "correlation" leaves beyond the scope such authors and Courtois and Mann. However, that is up to you. I just informed you about possible problems. Paul Siebert (talk) 00:05, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
Vanteloop
edit- Re. Paul Siebert's statement above, I reject the framing of our only two options to proceed as a false choice. The argument for why C must be included have been given ad nauseum by myself and other editors both here and on the talk page, so in the interest of conciseness I won't re-re-re-repeat it here.
- Re. Moderator's statement I agree those strict rules for the source analysis are needed, and a 4 week deadline seems reasonable given that discussion is a spin-off of a spin-off. I am happy for the RfC to be put in 4 weeks, or earlier at any time (at the moderator's discretion). Vanteloop (talk) 13:26, 15 December 2021 (UTC) updated 14:50, 15 December 2021 (UTC) updated 15:58, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- Re Davide King's statement. I feel I didn't state my position as clearly as I could have done. I understood Paul Siebert's position as Robert McClenon did, that he:
was stating that an RFC could not go forward with option C unless option C was substantiated by source analysis. That appeared to me to be a conditional veto.
That is what I was objecting to. Both the phrasing that I used in my original proposal "The article should discuss both the topic A and topic B" and the alternative "The article should be an amalgamation of the topic A and topic B" are perfectly acceptable in my opinion. Vanteloop (talk) 03:23, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
Davide King
editC'mon, guys, are we really arguing about this? "The article should consist of two sections, the first of which is A, and the second of which is B" gives a structure that user(s), even those who support that, may disagree with; I may well argue in favour of such an option, but not when it restrict myself to see it as two separate sections.
"The article should be an amalgamation of the topic A and topic B", or "The article should discuss both the topic A and topic B", is exactly the same thing but leaves much more liberty and options on how to structure it. Wasn't having option C a must to give all options? I do not understand how giving a precise structure, leaving no other possible options, is fine ...
I thought that the main issue was not having an option C at all but I am fine with it — I only disagree with the wording about precise two sections which implies a clear structure, e.g. there are less options, which is exactly the same argument used in support of having option C. Both not having an option C and having an option C with predefined structure are problematic. Is using amalgamation, or whatever other term you may think off to imply both A and B are discussed together, while leaving the door open for many possibilities on how to best structure it, rather than say there must only be two separate sections, really too much to ask? Davide King (talk) 19:29, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
Nug
editI think we are all in agreement with A, B and D, the only sticking point is C. Davide King is happy with C if it is reworded to use the term "amalgamation", Vanteloop is okay with that, and I see no issue with it either. I was probably a bit over optimistic that source analysis could be done quickly, so I'm okay with the trigger being pulled on the RFC now.
A. The article should be reorganized as a summary style article, providing an overview of all mass killing events and excess mortality events that occurred under communist governments.
B. The article should discuss the concept of a correlation between mass killings and communist governments, including proposed causes and critiques of the concept.
C. The article should be an amalgamation of A and B
D. The article should be split into two articles, as described above.
--Nug (talk) 21:35, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
Nineteenth statement on MKUCR by moderator
editI wrote: "Do not report any issue about the article at any conduct forum, such as WP:ANI or Arbitration Enforcement" and was asked to clarify it, with the following question: "Does it mean the article's issues or some issues related to behaviour of some third user (who is not a party of the dispute?" Do not report any content issues to a conduct forum. Do not report any content issues to an unrelated content forum, such as the neutral point of view noticeboard either (although that was not the question). Clearly disruptive conduct (vandalism, edit-warring) by a third party who is not a party to this dispute may be reported to a conduct forum. Robert McClenon (talk) 00:09, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
There is no need for editors to make statements here if they are instead working on source analysis. Robert McClenon (talk) 00:09, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
Nineteenth statements on MKUCR by editors
editTwentieth statement by moderator (MKUCR)
editUnless there is any other suggestion for changing its wording, I will publish the RFC that is listed at Wikipedia:Dispute resolution noticeboard/MKUCR RFC 2. Any suggestions for changes to the wording of the RFC should be made before it is published (after which time any effort to change the wording is disruptive). Discussion here may continue while the RFC is running. Source analysis at Wikipedia:Dispute resolution noticeboard/MKUCR Source Analysis may continue while the RFC is running. But you only have between 24 and 48 hours to discuss the wording of the RFC. Robert McClenon (talk) 17:02, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
Twentieth statements by editors (MKUCR)
editDavide King
editWikipedia:Dispute resolution noticeboard/MKUCR RFC 2 should be updated to change Option C from The article should consist of two sections, the first of which is A, and the second of which is B
to The article should be an amalgamation of A and B
, as we resolved to accept. Davide King (talk) 21:29, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
Twenty-first statement by moderator (MKUCR)
editThe RFC on the overall approach of the article is now running. Discussion may and should continue in the RFC, and may continue elsewhere in the article talk page, and in this DRN subpage. Discussion in this DRN subpage is not required, because the most important question is being addressed in the RFC. Editors may, if they wish, list any other disagreements about the article that they would like to discuss. Source analysis may continue.
WP:Neutral point of view is the second pillar of Wikipedia. Civility is the fourth pillar of Wikipedia. Robert McClenon (talk) 06:32, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
Twenty-first statements by editors (MKUCR)
editPaul Siebert
editI presented some source analysis at the MKUCR talk page, but if DRN participants prefer to discuss it in a quite place, I am ready to continue here. In general, it may be useful to make long posts with sources and quotes that the article's talk page, and to discuss them here. What do you guys think?--Paul Siebert (talk) 20:41, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
@Robert McClenon: I am a little bit confused, I thought WP:DRNMKUCR was a link to the source analysis discussion, but it is not. Where is the source analysis subpage now?--Paul Siebert (talk) 20:44, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
Twenty-second statement by moderator (MKUCR)
editUser:Paul Siebert - There is a link in the twentieth round to the source analysis. Since you have asked, I am providing a new shortcut, which is WP:MKUCRSA. Source analysis may continue. Participation in the RFC may continue. Robert McClenon (talk) 20:55, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
Twenty-second statements by editors (MKUCR)
editTwentythird Statement by Moderator (MKUCR)
edit@Nug, Davide King, and Paul Siebert: - Well, well. I took a few days away from watching the WP:MKUCRSA subpage, and I am called to settle a dispute. I wasn't sure what the purpose of the source analysis subtask was, and I thought it couldn't do any harm and might be helpful. The list of 69 sources provided by User:Nug makes it nearly impossible to navigate the Table of Contents of this subpage. I will be moving it to a subsubpage shortly.
Now I will ask each of the editors to tell me, in this page, in the space below, in not more than two paragraphs each, what they think the objective of the source analysis task should be, and in one or two more paragraphs, what they think that they have accomplished so far. Robert McClenon (talk) 00:54, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
Twentythird Statements by Editors (MKUCR)
editDavide King
editI do not think source analysis is the problem; the problem is that we must agree on group sources and essentially what Siebert wrote here. I would like to see the moderator more involved, as they do here and did at their twelfth statement (their second statement in particular, and in general we should go back to Siebert's identification of the three group sources), and ask questions and set some clear criteria, and also weight in — what we desperately need is someone to analyze each side's argument, summarize, and weight it, otherwise we are just going to argue against each other like walls because we clearly understand the topic differently and discussion among us has not changed anything. I think that Robert McClenon is perfectly capable of that and is a good choice, but I wonder whether they are still willing to do this, and if they need any help, it should be given.
As an example, do they agree with Levivich's criteria here? If so, that would help us, as it would give a clear criteria to work on and that we all must respect and follow — Fiveby's sources do not respect that criteria and Nug's sources also included many pre-21st century sources; if they had followed Levivich criteria, and also only listed sources that summarize for us the literature (e.g. rather than cherry pick quotes from Harff et al., they should rely on secondary sources summarizing them for us and tell us their weight in the literature; also is it suddenly Karlsson 2008 good again? Did they not repeatedly question that it was not cited by anyone?), they would not have bloated the page. The issue is the weight of sources, not that they exist, and what they actually say (is it a separate, new topic or is it a subtopic within a broader context?) and what kind of structure they support (A, B, C).
Davide King (talk) 03:17, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
Twentyfourth statement by moderator
editUser:Davide King would like to see the moderator take a more active role in the source analysis task. Before I agree to take a more active role, I will ask two related questions:
- 1. What is the end purpose of the source analysis task? How will the source analysis result in improvement of the article, after the RFC on the content and structure of the article is closed?
- 2. What should be the role of a moderator in the source analysis task? (In particular, do the parties expect that the moderator will review and comment on the sources?)
I started the source analysis task because some editors said that source analysis was needed before there could be an RFC on the structure and content of the article. Then the editors agreed that the RFC should be published but the source analysis should be conducted also. Future work on the article will be controlled by the result of the RFC. How will the source analysis affect the improvement of the article.
I think that I have two more questions:
- 3. Is either the DRNMKUCR subtask or the MKUCRSA subsubtask, which are being done by a subset of editors while the RFC and other editors are involving the entire community, still serving a purpose?
- 4. Should the DRN thread be:
- a. Continued in these subtasks?
- b. Deferred until the RFC is closed?
- c. Closed as having served its purpose by starting the RFC?
So before I either agree to take a more active role in the source analysis task, or try to find another moderator, I have some questions about what we are trying to do in order to improve the article. Robert McClenon (talk) 16:04, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
Twentyfourth statements by editors
editDavide King
edit- 1. Once the RfC is closed, it will be much more clear what is the topic and which set of sources will be adeguate. Source analysis should verify that the chosen structure is reflected in majority of scholarly sources, and reflect what their weight are. Do they treat this as a separate, new topic or as a subtopic within a broader and general scope?
- 2. Indeed, that was what I expected them to do. If they have followed discussions on the talk page and there too, it is clear that we have a different reading of the same sources themselves, so someone uninvolved who is good at source analysis should step up and weight in. If a panel group worked for the AfD, a similar panel may work for this too?
Source analysis will have to affect the improvement of the article by fixing NPOV and related issues, and establish its core sources. In particular, it should try to answer the AfD's closure point — is the topic encyclopedic, and can there be consensus for it? I imagine that there is also going to be another RfC about its name to reflect the chosen structure.
- 3. I do not feel ready to answer yet, but perhaps a better way may be found; either active users at the talk page should take part to this, or this should be moved there? I do not know about the latter, or if it is even possible, but it may help to have someone moderating (e.g. keep us focused on the topic, give clear questions to answer, no new ten threads opened, apart from those relevant to current editing, and rather than back-and-forth arguments between two users who are not going to agree each other, one or more moderators may weight which argument was better and reflected by sources)1 and may be easier to get more participation; I do not know why I am the only one still writing here. One criticism was that this does not involve all interested users and it is not binding. I do not really know, I hope the moderator will find this useful and find a solution.
- 4. I think that as long as there are going to be disputes and controversies about the article, this venue is always going to be useful and I do not think the purpose was by starting the RfC; that was perhaps Vanteloop's purpose but not why we came to this — we came to this because one user falsely thought that I and Siebert were controlling the article and wanted to revert all our edits back to August 2021 or even January 2021. I see this venue's purpose to be fixing the article in respect with our policies and guidelines. Certainly, at this point we may take a break until the RfC is closed and see each other again to discuss its aftermath and what will be next.
- Notes
- 1. I know that this may sound difficult2 but I see no other way. A possibility may be to take relevant sources at the noticeboard but I am not sure which one because we disagree about what they say or that they may be synthetized and misread by one side, if they support the current structure, not their reliability.
- 2. Indeed that is why I favored deletion, namely that there were so significant NPOV, OR/SYNTH, and even VERIFY issues that could not be solved otherwise after over a decade, and that starting all over again, especially if we cannot even agree on the topic or structure (I hope that the RfC will find some positive consensus), was the only way to eventually fix it and have a good, neutrally written article about such a controversial topic. I hope that we will not need to have yet another AfD late in 2022 or by 2023.
Davide King (talk) 21:34, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul Siebert
edit- Re: "What is the end purpose of the source analysis task?" As you probably noticed, the whole talk page discussion revolves around a handful of sources, and it seems most users believe these are the major sources on that topic (if we define the topic as a set of concrete events). However, there are very strong reason to believe that the sources most of us are talking about is just a small fraction of sources, and that other sources are left beyond the scope due to a biased procedure for source selection. I can support this my assertion with concrete example, but I would prefer to do that latter to avoid inflation of my posts. Therefore, before we started moving further, it is absolutely necessary to make sure that we are having a representative set of sources on this topic.
- Re: "What should be the role of a moderator in the source analysis task?" I think the most important role of the Moderator would be to summarise a discussion at each step, which will allow us to use these summaries in subsequent discussions. In addition, the role of the Moderator may be to keep the discussion more organized, otherwise this page will become the same mess as the MKuCR talk opage.
- Re: " Is either the DRNMKUCR subtask or the MKUCRSA subsubtask, which are being done by a subset of editors while the RFC and other editors are involving the entire community, still serving a purpose?" It depends on how many users will participate in that. I think, we will know that after the RfC closure.
- Re: #4, that strongly depends on the results of the RfC. In connection to that, I propose to wait several days until the RfC is closed.--Paul Siebert (talk) 21:38, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
Twentyfifth Statement by Moderator (MKUCR)
editUser:Paul Siebert and User:Davide King have provided statements in response to my question about the source analysis subtask and about the dispute resolution thread. I am not sure whether either the source analysis or the dispute resolution is accomplishing anything that the participants couldn't accomplish in user space. Paul Siebert and Davide King have provided sources and have commented on them.
User:Nug hasn't replied to my requests for opinions as to the continuation of these subtasks. However, Nug has provided 69 quotations of varying length. Many of them do not satisfy Paul Siebert's criterion that the sources should be from the twenty-first century; Nug didn't agree to limit himself to twenty-first century sources. I have not read all of Nug's quotations, but it appears that they state that communist regimes have engaged in atrocities. We knew that. I don't think that there is disagreement that communist regimes have engaged in atrocities. I don't think that anyone is disputing that mass killings occurred under some communist regimes. There does seem to be a backdrop question of whether communism was and is worse than Nazism. That is the wrong question. Both systems were and are evil. (I personally believe that Hitler and Stalin are and will be fighting World War Two eternally, and that means that they are in the same circle of Hell.Robert McClenon (talk) 05:59, 31 December 2021 (UTC))
Unless a common purpose for the source analysis subtask is agreed on, I think I will let it continue, but without active moderation. Unless a purpose for the dispute resolution thread is identified, I think that I will conclude it, and will open a new dispute resolution thread after the RFC is closed if one is requested. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:59, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
Twentyfifth Statements by Editors (MKUCR)
editNug
edit@Robert McClenon: I did post a response in the previous section, but have moved it down to here. --Nug (talk) 06:38, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul has said previously that "99% of sources available to me do not discuss those mass killings in a context of Communism", and just above he says "there are very strong reason to believe that the sources most of us are talking about is just a small fraction of sources, and that other sources are left beyond the scope due to a biased procedure for source selection". I’ve been hoping that Paul would use this Source Analysis period to shed light on these mystery sources, this so-called “silent majority” viewpoint, and identify them for us. Nothing is stopping him creating a subpage to list these new sources, there must be hundreds of sources given his claim that 99% do not discuss mass killings. This is one of the reasons why I supported a Source Analysis phase. However the sum total of Paul and Davide's efforts thus far is to just continue their efforts to attempt to deprecate the existing sources we already know about, without bringing any new sources to the table. Then complain to the Moderator when I post 69 sources (which is still work in progress) as if that was somehow improper. Others have recently called out Paul’s misrepresentations of other editors, so we need to confirm the veracity of Paul’s representations with respect to these sources. Therefore I think the Moderator’s involvement in Source Analysis is premature, and Paul just simply needs deliver what he promised in terms of identifying these 99% of sources. —Nug (talk) 06:30, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul Siebert
editIn a response to Nug's post, I can say that I never planned to convert the discussion of sources into a contest between "sources cherry-picked by Nug vs sources cherry-picked by Paul Siebert". It is not our goal to overwhelm each other with quotes picked from source that were selected according to some obscure criterion. That is not serious, just compare this and that. That is why I proposed to start with a development of some agreement about the procedure for source selection. Nug refused to participate in that work, and his approach will lead us to nothing but spamming the DRN page with tons of quotes taken from unknown context. It is totally unworkable. We cannot analyse all sources, but we can create are representative set of them. After that set is created, we can continue a serious discussion.
One comment on the Moderator's statement about Stalin and Hitler. There are many differences between Nazism and Communism, and one of them is the following: Nazism was a very simple phenomenon, which was created and lead by the same person, and which was localized in time and space. It was not based on any serious sociological theory, and its main "theoretical" source is just a demagogic book authored by some politician. In contrast, Communism is much more complex and non-uniform concept, and one of its school was founded by one of the most brilliant sociologists (actually, Marx, along with Weber, is one of the founding fathers of sociology). therefore, Nazism and Communism are as incomparable as apples and oranges. Yes, many authors compare Hitler and Stalin, or Nazism and Stalinism, and that comparison is pretty legitimate. Few authors compare Nazism and Communism as a whole, but even more authors openly disagree with that, and openly criticise this approach. Furthermore, some authors (like Fein), compare Khmer Rouge with Nazi (Fascists), but that is not a comparison of Communism and Nazism: this author argue that KR regime had more traits of Nazi (she uses the term "fascist") regime. This article can and should discuss all of that, including who compare what, why this comparison is made, what ideas these authors are advocating, and who disagrees with that, and what is the subject of the most severe criticism.--Paul Siebert (talk) 18:52, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
- I checked the sources "collected" by Nug, and it is easy to see that that is just a collection of quotes that I removed from the article, because they violated WP:NFCC. Not only that is a totally unjustified violation of NFCC, it is a form of a disrespect. Nug haven't bothered to check the sources he quoted, and some (or most) of then simoly do not support his POV. Thun, Nug cites Mann, but he totally ignores Mann's main idea (he says that "classicide", which happened in Cambodia, and, in much lesser extent, in China and USSR), was a perversion of socialist theories of democracy, and he does not derive it from Communism. It is quite obvious that Nug just uncritically picked quotes collected by another user without bothering to familiarise himself with the context and with the main ideas of the sources he cites.
- That is a disrespect to other participants of the dispute, and I respectfully ask Nug to refrain from showing this type disrespect in future. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:34, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
- The rest of this day I am going to devote to drinking various alcohol containing liquids in a company of my relatives and friends. I wish Nug, Davide King, and Robert McClenon to have a happy New Year, and I hope that next year we, under Robert's moderation, will resolve our dispute in a productive, respectful and collaborative way.
- Happy New Year guys. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:40, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
Davide King
editI have to agree with Siebert, and strongly reject Nug's allegations (especially 'deprecation', which is absurd). I believe Siebert's approach is also in line with what the moderator have said in their second statement, we need to discuss and analyze the various group of sources, rather than discuss any source mentioning Communist mass killings, which is besides the point because no one is denying anything here and is thus unhelpful. I think Siebert's approach is much better because it is grounded in the RfC, whereas Nug's approach, rather than help us to individuate group sources, is more an attempt to prove that Siebert and I are wrong, and that sources support C and the status quo. We already went through this in the AfD, and we did not get any consensus. I think it is high time that we try another approach, and if the moderator agree, I think that Siebert's approach is good.
I also have to reject Nug's allegations against Siebert, which may be an attempt to unjustifiably exclude them. They said others
but it was really just them and Vanteloop. Again, Siebert's approach at sources has been positively reviewed in an academic journal, it does not mean that they are always right but certainly such attempts to criticize or even discredit them are disingenerous. Indeed, both Siebert and I have been misunderstood and strawmanned by them (e.g. that we deny Communist regime as a thing, which is absurd) but we never assumed bad faith or made comments like this that border on personal attacks. That is why the moderator's involvement is absolutely necessary, especially if Nug's allegations are true; surely, if such allegations are true, if the moderator is more involved and summarize for us, those allegations would be tested. To avoid any further misrepresentation, I agree with Siebert that the moderator summarizes what we said and help us with group source types. Davide King (talk) 21:42, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
Twentysixth statement on MKUCR by moderator
editI have read the statements by User:Paul Siebert, User:Nug, and User:Davide King. I am still not sure what if anything is to be gained from my efforts at moderation. The participants have different ideas as to what we are trying to do with the source analysis subtask. As a result, I think that the participants have different ideas as to what the moderator should do, and I think that they want me to take a more active role in validating their analysis than I am ready to provide.
I will in any case demand that if I am considered to be the moderator, I at least have the control over the organization and naming of materials. Nug provided 69 quotes from sources. I moved them out of the main subpage into a subsubpage because they made navigation of the table of contents difficult. I named them as Nug's sources. Nug then renamed them as sources, without identifying them as his sources. They aren't really sources. They are really quotes from sources. I won't rename them again without discussing, but I expect that I will be renaming them as quotes from sources. The quotes all seem to be making one point, which is that there are atrocities under communism. Duh. We knew that. Those who were arguing to delete the article were not arguing that there had not been mass killings under communist regimes. There were. That wasn't and isn't the issue. Just because large numbers of single-purpose accounts were brigaded for the purpose of arguing that there were mass killings under communist regimes doesn't mean that anyone said there weren't.
Davide King has analyzed various sources and has found that different authors have attributed different characteristics, such as democide, politicide, classicide, and has commented on reliability of sources. Paul Siebert and Davide King have said that the categorization of sources is useful.
I also thank User:MarioSuperstar77 for contributions.
Paul Siebert and Davide King have both said that the moderator should summarize what the participants have said. Sometimes I can do that more readily than other times. I am not entirely sure why they think it is important for the moderator to do that, but I am not entirely sure what they think should be the end result of this task.
I asked four questions about the purpose of the source analysis task, the role of the moderator, the continuation of the subtasks, and the continuation of the DRN thread. Paul Siebert and Davide King provided partial answers. They have not persuaded me that the source analysis subtask is useful while the RFC is running. Nug hasn't said what the purpose of the source analysis is, and hasn't really said what the reason for the quote farm was. It seems that Nug is trying to refute a statement that was never made, which was a denial of communist atrocities.
Unless I am otherwise persuaded, I will:
- a. Separate the analysis of sources from the listing of sources and quotes, both of which may continue without interfering with each other.
- b. Mostly limit my involvement to ensuring civility, which includes the assumption of good faith and the avoidance of casting aspersions.
- c. Close the DRN thread as pending the outcome of the RFC, and be ready to open a new DRN thread if requested after the RFC.
Comments are welcome. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:06, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
Twentysixth statements on MKUCR by editors
editPaul Siebert
editIn my opinion, the more control Moderator has, the better. Moreover, the the quotes provided by Nug clearly violate NFCC (most of them are irrelevant pieces of copyrighted text, which were posted for unknown reason). It seems it is Moderator's duty to fix this NFCC violation: all those quotes were copypasted from the old version of the article, so no information will be lost it they are deleted. I agree with most of what Moderator says, but I would like to point at some misunderstanding. I never meant that source analysis is needed before the RfC ends. My point was quite different: instead of discussing concrete sources, I propose to discuss a common approach to identification and collection of the representative set of sources on the topic. I joined the discussion of concrete sources because other users started it, but it was not my primary goal. This is task (an agreement about source identification procedure) does not depend on the RfC's outcome, so, if we come to some consensus on the procedure, we will be ready to start implementing the RfC results right after it will be closed.--Paul Siebert (talk) 06:02, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
Davide King
editI am very satisfied by the moderator's response, and I can totally understand their points as well, which is why I feel they are very much helpful and needed. I agree that we better wait for the RfC's results, if that was the point; I was talking more in general that source analysis will have to be performed if we are going to fix the article, even though it will be hard but I see no other way — their comments about Nug's sources is precisely what I aspect them to do to keep it focused. I also agree with Siebert, and it is true that it was supposed to discuss such common approach; however, Nug appear to dismiss it outright, and we never really went further. Whatever the approach will be, if the moderator find Siebert's approach (or something similar to it), we will follow it; the important thing for me is that we will rely on secondary coverage that summarize for us what those authors says and are proposing, rather than quote them directly,1 otherwise we are just cherry picking them and may give undue weight to something of their work that is not really due. In this regards, I think that this was good, which the moderator may find useful for SYNTH issues, and explained some issues that we have, e.g. majority of sources do not make generalizations.
To summarize, I wrongly thought that the moderator was questioning the whole purpose of source analysis (I think they still made fair points if it will solve the dispute but I see no other way) rather than doing this while the RfC was pending. In that, I agree with them it is not useful, and I hope that, whether it will be here or in a new thread, they will help us find some consensus on the source procedure; if they can do that, we can indeed starting to implement the RfC results and may be limit themselves to make sure it proceeds smoothly.
- Notes
1. We may still do this, of course, to get their main points, but they are primary sources about what they say, and they cannot be used to prove a point like Nug did; that job, including assessing their weight and what they actually say and theorize, will be up to secondary coverage — in line with Wikipedia's purpose. Davide King (talk) 14:21, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
Twentyseventh statement on MKUCR by moderator
editI will address a few comments. However, I do not think that Paul Siebert or Davide King have made a case for continuing this effort at moderation. It does not appear that Paul Siebert and Davide King are working toward the same objective as User:Nug, although I am not sure what Nug is trying to do. I see that Paul and Davide have the objective of categorizing sources. Do we need a moderator at this time for that effort? There doesn't appear to be a difference of opinion that amounts to a content dispute. There might be one again after the RFC is closed.
In particular, I will respond to the argument that Nug has violated the non-free content criteria. Wikipedia has established criteria that are stricter than fair use for copyrighted content. These criteria primarily have to with images, but also with text. These criteria also state that non-free content may only be used in articles; conversely, these criteria only apply to articles. This source analysis subtask is not in article space, but in project space. It is my conclusion therefore that the non-free content criteria are not applicable to the source analysis subtask. As a result, the applicable policy is fair use until any of the material is copied into the article. The stricter non-free content requirements are not necessary. It is also my opinion that Nug's collection of quotes from sources is consistent with fair use. I will be renaming it from being a list of sources to being a list of quotes from sources. Other than that, I am not sure why Paul and Davide object to the list. The list simply proves a point that we and I have already agreed is not in dispute, which is that communist regimes have committed atrocities and mass killings. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:13, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
Nug does seem to be arguing that Paul and Davide are denying the history of mass killings under communist regimes, which is not what they are saying, and is a distraction. So what point is Nug trying to make?
There is a contextual disconnect between what Nug says Paul Siebert said, and Nug's own disagreement with it. Nug says that Paul said that 99% of the sources do not discuss mass killings in a context of communism. First, I am sure that Paul was exaggerating, and that the exaggeration was not useful, but that is not the issue. Second, Nug then writes: "there must be hundreds of sources given his claim that 99% do not discuss mass killings." No. Paul Siebert didn't make that claim. He is quoted as having made the more subtle claim that the sources did not discuss mass killings in a context of communism, as opposed to discussing mass killings and communism separately in the same source.
Nug writes: "However the sum total of Paul and Davide's efforts thus far is to just continue their efforts to attempt to deprecate the existing sources we already know about, without bringing any new sources to the table." That statement is remarkable. It is not clear what Nug means that he says that PS and DK are deprecating the existing sources. I do not see any effort to label them as unreliable. Is Nug expecting that the sources should lead to a particular conclusion, such as a conclusion maximizing the total number of excess deaths? Such an expectation would turn the neutral point of view upside down, although it would explain Nug's complaint. What does Nug mean? Has Nug created a receptacle of round holes, and is Nug then looking only for round pegs to go into the round holes?
I still do not see the value of moderation when Paul Siebert and Davide King appear to have different goals than Nug. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:13, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
Twentyseventh statements by editors (MKUCR)
editPaul Siebert
editI have to respectfully disagree with Moderator, who said that they see not value in moderation. In reality, the Moderator's post clearly demonstrates the value of a moderated discussion.
Moderator correctly summarised the core issue: it is nor clear what is the main point Nug is advocating. It would be extremely helpful if Nug elaborated on that. Moderator's comments on NFCC seem quite satisfactory and encouraging. If extended quotes are allowed in non-article space, that dramatically facilitates our future discussion. My words about 99% is hardly a serious exaggeration, for the amount of sources about individual Communist states and individual events is immense. I can demonstrate that using a simple example. The "Estimates" section contains several sources that provide a figure of a total number of victims of Communism. Most of those sources are desperately outdated sources (Rummel), other sources are highly controversial (Courtois), other two sources were removed as highly unreliable (White, VoC), and remaining sources just mention that figure in passing (Brzezinski) and/or express official US point of view. Only two or three sources are relatively reliable, but they do not discuss a "global death toll of Communism", they deaths in three Communist states. Despite numerous attempts, Wikipedia users failed to find more reliable and more fresh sources on this topic. In contrast, I know at least 20 sources that discuss in details the deaths in the USSR alone, and many of those sources are much more fresh, they (in contrast to the above sources) are published mostly in peer-reviewed journals, and are of much better quality. Clearly, the number of sources that left beyond the scope of this article is immense, and the main reason why that happened is an extreme bias of the article's structure that affects the source selection and their representation.
That is a reason why I insist on collection of a representative set of sources: we are physically incapable of discussing all of them.
With regard to Moderator's "I do not see any effort to label them as unreliable", that is not completely correct. Nug is right that I maintain that some of the sources are unreliable, biased, outdated, or not relevant to the topic. However, Nug is not right when he claimed that I brought no sources to the table. Actually, I already presented many sources, and I can present many more. However, since I want to avoid a fruitless dispute about reliability and relative weight of each source (I can present tens or hundreds of them), I propose to collect a representative set of them, but Nug seems to refuse to join this work.
I think that the future development of this DRN process is totally in Nug's hands, because it seems there is no significant disagreement between me and DK. If Nug withdraws himself from the process, then this dispute should be closed. In that case, it would be preferrable that Nug openly recognized that he, for some reason, decided not to participate in this DRN (either by making some explicit statement or by striking his name in the participants list). If Nug still wants to participate in this DRN (which would be highly desirable), it would be highly desirable if he made some post to address our questions and concerns.
- @Davide King: Yes, I can provide a list of sources, but the discussion of those sources must be focused. To this end, I propose to start a discussion of sources on some very specific topic, e.g. Chinese Famine, Cambodian genocide, Great Purge, or a role of Marxist ideology in mass killings. I am still waiting for a feedback from Nug, and I propose him to pick the topic.--Paul Siebert (talk) 17:56, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
- @Robert McClenon: will you make a summary of this round and open the text one, or I should directly answer to the last Nug's post?--Paul Siebert (talk) 15:06, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
Davide King
edit- Moderator have indeed been useful and proved why they are needed
Again, I have to agree with Siebert that "the Moderator's post clearly demonstrates the value of a moderated discussion."
They did a very good post. I think they are needed because we need to do such collection of a representative set of sources by group types; however, Nug have so far show no interest in doing this, therefore if the moderator agree and think that Siebert's proposed approach is fine, Nug should participate if they want to move us forward and the moderator should help us to make sure that we can get something productive out of it. They are desperately needed because we have already tried again and again to discuss sources on the talk page but we remain entranched in our positions because we have totally different approaches, and a moderator would help us to stay focused and make all of us accountable by making sure none of us bludgeon the process.1
- List of quotes
As for the list of quotes, which I agree is a more accurate wording: "Other than that, I am not sure why Paul and Davide object to the list. The list simply proves a point that we and I have already agreed is not in dispute, which is that communist regimes have committed atrocities and mass killings."
This, especially the bolded part, is precisely my same point expressed perfectly; that is not in dispute, so what is the point? Especially if all such sources are not even new but already in the article?
- Siebert should present their own list of sources to counteract the other to prove our points, which can be verified and no longer be dismissed
If that is indeed fine, I encourage Siebert to present their own list, so that we can compare them and check that their point is correct as I believe it is, and that we got the current structure totally wrong. In addition, I am genuinely interested to see it, read them, and get an even better understanding of the topic and academic analysis. If you need any help, I can help with copy-editing and formatting, but I think that you should do it, especially to put an end to false accuses about not providing sources or engaging in OR,2 and to further highlight the current structure issues that many other users may not see or understand at first (indeed, I was one of them years ago).
- Conclusions
If Nug do not address the moderator's questions and our concerns, and refuse to engage us in such source analysis representation, with clear rules and criteria, as outlined by the moderator,3 then I agree that this dispute should be closed.4 I hope that the moderator can still look at the talk page because disruptive behavior and bludgeoning any attempt to fix the article (this should include denying that the article has any problem or make it about the events, which no one is denying) should be seen as disruptive and there will no longer be any ground rule about not reporting conduct issues. I hope that we will not have to come down to that, and that the RfC will result in a productive discussion and some consensus.
- Notes
1. Strawman and misreading examples in the moderator's post are good example of stuff that is to be avoided if we are to make any progress.
2. This discussion may be of interest for the moderator, and how progress on the talk page has not been made by dismissing us like this.
3. Again, I am talking mainly after the RfC is closed, where hopefully everything will be much more clear, and the moderator will be persuaded that their help is indeed helpful.
4. If it is closed, I would really appreciate if the moderator could make a summary of it (in particular, they should dismiss or reject as unfounded the false accuses about Siebert and I by Cloud200 that started this whole dispute) and any further suggestion to how to move next, and whether a new DRN thread after the RfC is closed may be useful, etc.
Davide King (talk) 00:28, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
Nug
editI wasn’t aware there was a continuing discussion here until Paul mentioned it to me on MKuCR Talk today. It isn’t clear what this new dispute is that requires moderation. Is it to compel me to adopt Paul’s source analysis methodology? I’m not convinced it is a sound approach for the reasons previously outlined. There is nothing stopping him pursuing that with DK if he wants to, I don’t see how it hinges on me. I find the Moderator’s questions a total misrepresentation of my position. I’ve said countless times that the absolute number doesn’t matter, whether it is 10 million or 100 million, it really makes no difference, so no, I’m not "expecting that the sources should lead to a particular conclusion, such as a conclusion maximizing the total number of excess deaths" as the Moderator wrongly suggests. If you read the section Mass_killings_under_communist_regimes#Estimates the very first line states "According to professor of history Klas-Göran Karlsson, discussion of the number of victims of communist regimes has been extremely extensive and ideologically biased."
, and despite Karlsson’s statement that such discussion of the numbers has been extremely extensive, Paul and DK seemingly want to gut that section. Reading that section further, after a bit of discussion we have a survey of notable estimates ordered by date. However Paul and DK succeeded in removing the VoC estimate as "unreliable" because it is ideologically biased, so now we have no example of an apparent ideologically biased estimate that Karlsson alluded to, and they also want to remove Rummel’s estimate because it is “outdated” even though the date is clearly given and the appropriate criticisms are presented. They also as well as remove other estimates due to “unreliability” even though it is clearly attributed to the person stating the number, leaving maybe two or three, so then the reader will not have an overview anf history of the different numbers. I won’t be responding any further here until after the RFC if necessary. I think I must have missed the many new sources that Paul said he had already presented, could someone post some diffs. --Nug (talk) 13:06, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
Twentyeighth statement by moderator (MKUCR)
editUser:Paul Siebert - Just because I haven't closed this working page doesn't mean that I plan to summarize what the participants have said. Go ahead and state your disagreement with User:Nug. This isn't a moderated discussion in any meaningful sense, because there appear to be two different agendas, and in asking me to continue to go through the motions of moderation, I really feel that User:Paul Siebert and User:Davide King are trying to get me to advance an agenda. User:Nug appears to have a different agenda. I never was sure why Paul Siebert said that a source analysis subtask was needed, and I am also not sure why Nug provided 69 quotes.
Within two or three weeks, the RFC should be closed, and then we will have a better idea what the final article should look like. We may then have a better idea whether a new moderated DRN is needed, and, if so, who the participants will be.
User:Nug - You still haven't answered what your objective was in providing the 69 quotes. They all say that there were atrocities committed by communist regimes. We know. We know. Nug wrote: 'I’m not "expecting that the sources should lead to a particular conclusion, such as a conclusion maximizing the total number of excess deaths" ' Good. I wasn't suggesting; I was asking. Apparently Nug wants to refute something, and so has 69 quotes. It isn't clear to me what they are trying to refute, but maybe I have missed something. I know that someone has missed something.
User:Davide King wants the moderator to "dismiss or reject as unfounded the false accuses about Siebert and I by Cloud200". Comment on content, not contributors. I will not deal with a conduct dispute. If anyone wants to raise a conduct dispute, WP:ANI is over there, and Arbitration Enforcement is that way. I don't recommend going there. Otherwise leave the conduct claims alone.
I suggest that the source analysis be put on hold until we know what the structure and content of the article will be, but I have had my doubts about the source analysis since it was started.
I don't know what Nug's agenda is, but at least they aren't trying to get me to do work for them. It appears that Paul Siebert and Davide King are trying to get me to do work for them, and that isn't my plan. I think that waiting for closure on the RFC is the best approach. Robert McClenon (talk) 06:27, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
Twentyeighth statement by editors (MKUCR)
editDavide King
editIf there is any 'agenda', whatever it means, Siebert and I are pursuing is fixing the article's problems (NPOV/OR/SYNTH) and have a NPOV article; of course, Nug is free to disagree with this but their perspective, which is essentially that the article has no significant problem and the structure is perfectly fine, does not bode well with the article's long history and the latest AfD's closure, which reversed consensus to 'Keep.' I do not understand what the moderator mean by 'working for us.' I thought that their 'job' was to help us all (including Nug and others, not just Siebert and I) to find a solution to the article, to improve it, and moderate this? If they do not want to do this, they can tell us. I think they did a great job so far, and I do not really understand their latest statement and I am surprised by it. I do agree with them about conduct issues and waiting for closure on the RFC is the best approach.
As for Nug's accuses, that is clearly contradicted by this, which includes discussion of a the global Communist death toll; the problem is that Nug think this is a mainstream, majority, and controversial view, when the scholarly source I put shows otherwise. In addition, it was not Siebert and I who found the VOC source unreliable, and not because it was biased, but previous discussions at RSN (1, 2). Same thing for Rummel, whose criticism by both Siebert and I is, in fact, based on Karlsson & Schoenhals 2008 (pp. 35, 69–72, 79), the same source they have cited in support of the article, and was also discussed at RSN before. Davide King (talk) 06:52, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
Paul Siebert
editRobert, if two different agendas prevents you from being a full scale moderator, let's choose one agenda and focus on it until some meaningful result is achieved. Like you, I feel uncomfortable when I have to discuss several topics simultaneously. I would prefer to focus at one topic, and, imho, it should be the development of source selection criteria. Contrary to Nug's claim, my goal is not to compel Nug to adopt my source analysis method, but just to develop a common approach. I see this process as follow: one user proposes some method, other users either agree or disagree. In the latter case, they point at flaws or omissions in that method, and we together discuss possible improvements, or propose some different approach, and after several iterations we develop some common method. The problem, however, is that I am the only participant who proposed any concrete method. Nug just pointed at some (minor) flaws, and stopped to discuss it. Why I am so obsessed with the source selection method? The reason is simple: the actual amount of sources on this topic is immense, and we cannot discuss each separate source if we do not know its proper place in the overall pool of sources. Thus, a recent talk page discussion is focused on two sources that claim that Marxism provided a theoretical ground for extermination of Jews by Hitler. It is possible to put forward some arguments for and against their inclusion, but, instead of discussing these concrete sources, we must answer a more general question first: what the whole body or RS says on that issue? Clearly, that question is not possible to answer it terms of "a source that was cherry-picked by me says A, whereas the source cherry-picked by you says B". To answer this question, we need to collect a representative set of sources (for we will hardly be capable of reading them all), and check, what they say on Marxist attitude to genocide. And we can do that only if we develop some common approach to selection of a representative set of sources.
However, if Nug does not want to discuss sources, I agree to focus on some other topic. I am waiting for concrete proposals from Nug. However, as soon as we decided to discuss that new topic, let's agree to stay focused until some agreement is achieved.
If Nug wants to discuss the "Ideology" section, let's do that. However, I remind Nug to stay civil, and to avoid discussing other user's motives. I explained my intentions about that section very clearly: first, I am going to check each source for factual accuracy, and then I am going to eliminate an obvious synthesis. That will be an iteration number zero. After that, we will discuss other steps. Do that really mean that I want "to gut that section"? If Nug sincerely believes that that section is full of unreliable or improperly used sources and synthesis, then the answer is "yes", but in that case, to "gut this section" is what any good faith user is supposed to do. However, if Nug is confident that this section contains no synthesis, and all sources are good and used correctly, then why Nug concludes I am going to "gut" it?
Twentyninth statement by Robert McClenon (MKUCR)
editI will be marking this subpage as historical.
I am completely confused as to what User:Paul Siebert and User:Davide King think can or is likely to be accomplished by my involvement in a source analysis task. We still do not have agreement as to what the objective of the source analysis task is. What we know is that there is an RFC that will determine the structure of the article. I started the source analysis task because PS and DK initially said that it should precede the RFC. Then we all agreed to the RFC.
I had written: "It appears that Paul Siebert and Davide King are trying to get me to do work for them, and that isn't my plan." Since there isn't agreement as to what our objectives are, I am not really acting as a moderator. Since I don't know what I am supposed to be doing, if I summarize what PS and DK have written, then I will either be doing their work or wasting my time.
We don't know what the structure of this article will be, and analyzing sources in support of an article with an uncertain focus seems like an exercise in nothingness. Robert McClenon (talk) 02:59, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
Twentyninth statements by other editors (MKUCR)
editDavide King
editI will just say their help will be helpful precisely to keep us focused and help us to find a common approach. If Nug completely reject Siebert's approach, or any compromise, they may end it here and other users may be invited to participate. We may take it back to the talk page but I do not think we are going to get anything useful out of it because without some form of moderation, we will just be going around in circles entranched in our positions. I do agree that analyzing sources in support of an article with an uncertain focus seems like an exercise in nothingness
, which is exactly what we are doing now; I think that they are needed precisely because they may give us a clearly focused approach and criteria that will be very helpful for source analysis, which may start soon after the RfC is closed and is when their help may be needed. Davide King (talk) 04:24, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
Paul Siebert
editRobert McClenon, I have written:
- "However, if Nug does not want to discuss sources, I agree to focus on some other topic. I am waiting for concrete proposals from Nug. However, as soon as we decided to discuss that new topic, let's agree to stay focused until some agreement is achieved."
I think I couldn't be more clear: we have very serious disagreements with Nug, and the only way to resolve them is moderation (or arbitration, but that scenario is too premature). I am not pushing any specific agenda, I am ready to start discussing each point of our disagreement (out of many), and I propose Nug to chose the topic. It is very sad that you decided not to be out Moderator, and I humbly hope that you may reconsider your decision.
I see no reason to wait for the RfC outcome, for many disagreements are independent on it.
If source analysis is something that you are not feeling comfortable to moderate, then I propose Nug to pick some other topic, for example, the dispute about the role of ideology and Communism in general. However, that is up to you guys to decide. I am always open to a discussion , and I am ready to restart the process whenever you are ready. --Paul Siebert (talk) 04:36, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
Thirtieth statement by Robert McClenon
editUser:Paul Siebert, User:Davide King - I know that the two of you mean well, and that you think that I might be able to accomplish something by going through the motions of acting as a moderator in a dispute with User:Nug. I don't know why you think that User:Nug is interested in moderated discussion, when they most recently said that they were not interested. I also don't know why you think that moderated discussion with Nug is the best way to improve an article. There are many other editors active on the article and on the article talk page.
I know that you and Nug have different ideas about sources and about the article. So do other editors. I don't want to be harsh, but I think that, if you think that you and I can improve the article by pretending to engage in moderated discussion with Nug, then that expectation is just weird and silly. What evidence do you have that it is going anywhere?
I agree that there are problems with the article. I don't see how analysis of sources is the way to resolve the problems. I don't see how a shadow-dance of moderation is advancing the article. I think that we should wait for the RFC to be closed, but I have already said that.
It appears that, in asking me to continue pretending to be a moderator, you are attributing some sort of mystical power to me, either to engage Nug or to do something else. I don't think that I have a mystical power. You really haven't given me an explanation of what you want me to do. I know that you are frustrated. I would be frustrated also in your position. I know that part of your frustration is that it is clear to you and to me that Nug has a different agenda. Why do you think that I can get Nug to engage in dialog (or to agree with you)?
Any further explanations of what you want me to do should be made on my talk page. If you want Nug to engage in dialogue with you, I suggest that you ask on their talk page. For the last week (actually more than two weeks), I have had no idea what you are asking me to do. Robert McClenon (talk) 17:30, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
Thirtieth statements by other editors
editBack-and-forth discussion on communist killings
editOld back-and-forth. New back-and-forth goes below this. Robert McClenon (talk) 21:58, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
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I find the latest DK's comments especially important, for Karlsson's "Crimes against humanity ..." (the source he cites) is one of the core sources for the Crimes against humanity under Communist regimes article. This article exists mainly due to this source, and it is being used in the MKuCR article too. It seems the opposite party sees no problem with that source, and does not consider it biased or minority. And this source says the two other sources, Rummel and Courtois, which were presented in the old version of the article (and are still partially presented in the current version) as pretty non-controversial, are controversial in reality. These two sources are core sources for MKuCR, and the fact that they are described as controversial by another author is an additional strong argument in support for article's rewrite.--Paul Siebert (talk) 14:32, 17 November 2021 (UTC) With regards to the filer's proposal to improve the article, it directly contradicts to our policy, which says that segregation of text or other content into different regions or subsections, based solely on the apparent POV of the content itself, may result in an unencyclopedic structure, such as a back-and-forth dialogue between proponents and opponents. It may also create an apparent hierarchy of fact where details in the main passage appear "true" and "undisputed", whereas other, segregated material is deemed "controversial", and therefore more likely to be false. Try to achieve a more neutral text by folding debates into the narrative, rather than isolating them into sections that ignore or fight against each other.. In addition, the apparent hierarchy is opposite to what we have in reality: what she calls "dissenting views" is actually majority views.--Paul Siebert (talk) 16:58, 17 November 2021 (UTC) Cloud200's 9th statement is an emotional appeal rather than a rational one — no sources have been provided to support such claims (I have cited one, which was supported by both of them, to show Courtois and Rummel are minority — but just look at all sources at Genocide studies and Mass killing). It is apparent that for them any source that does not support equivalency between Communism and Nazism, and thus may say things that they may consider as too positive for Communism, is somehow pro-Communist or left-wing! Are Michael Ellman, Sheila Fitzpatrick, J. Arch Getty, Ian Kershaw, Moshe Lewin, Stephen G. Wheatcroft, and many other well-respected scholars in the field pro-Communists? It also completely ignores how the double genocide theory and Holocaust trivialization and obfuscation have been used as state policy in Eastern Europe, which has grown increasingly illiberal, and unlike their claims about "left-wing European authors" we have sources for this (again, I ask the moderator, just look at the relevant articles and their academic sources). The reason why English sources are preferred is because of WP:RSUE and WP:VERIFY, and because so-called "left-wing European authors" (mainstream scholars in the field) do not engage in Holocaust trivialization, or write historiography through the double-genocide lens, which is fringe in mainstream Western academia (it may be mainstream in some Eastern European countries but we should not give them undue weight, especially when they have been extensively criticized because of it — it is also the same reason why we do not actually use Russian sources, for mainstream Russian scholars work with mainstream Western ones, hence no double standard; the ones you should be referring to, those who are truly pro-Communism, are considered fringe, though their rejection of equivalency between Communism and Nazism is not fringe or pro-Communism), and that Communism was equal to Nazism remains a controversial and revisionist view across the Western world (The Black Book of Communism was controversial mainly because of this and its intro, which was not subjected to peer-review). Again, actually cite such sources, they may be used (but keep in mind WP:ARCHIVES) — what are your core sources for the article? P.S. In that same discussion they have linked, I have literally said: Quote
Of course, they did not say I made this edit, which includes what they wanted to add. I am such a hardliner (sarcasm). Davide King (talk) 22:05, 17 November 2021 (UTC) Cloud200's statement #9 clearly says that our policy, which says that academic peer-reviewed publications are the best sources, is not working for this topic. Athough, according to her, that relates only to those authors who never lived under Communists, however, imposing this artificial condition excludes (or undermines credibility of) a wide range of the best quality sources. Interestingly, since her rationale is non-falsifiable, it is really unbeatable, for her says that the sources that "have more moderate views" (her own words) are less trustworthy, because the authors do not have access to full information. And, accordingly, the authors who have less moderate views are more trustworthy, because (these are my speculations) the authors are more informed about a true picture. This is a non-falsifiable circular argumentation ("I am right because good sources support my views, and those sources are good because they paint a correct picture, i.e. the picture that I am advocating"). Robert, frankly speaking, I anticipated that type arguments, and that is why I insisted that every statement of each participant must be falsifiable.
If they cannot answer the points Siebert and I raised, what is the point of this discussion? It should be based on rationality and verification through sources (again, not a single source has been provided by them), not emotional appeals and personal attacks — Siebert and I did not deny anything! (If they think all those respected scholars I cited are 'denialists', I do not know what to tell them, other than questioning their competence and being here to right great wrongs) In fact, that whole dispute was about our policies and guidelines in regards to WP:PRIMARY. Siebert and I wanted to respect our policies, which say independent, secondary sources are to be used, so they were advocating that we violate our policies to put their POV, and they also wanted us to violate WP:WEIGHT because they wanted to give more WEIGHT to PRIMARY over SECONDARY (The New York Times) and other scholarly sources found by Siebert that supported the previous wording, which has been long-standing until they changed it for no good reason. This is a conduct issue, a serious one, and those are personal attacks, misleading summaries of disputes, and defamation to both Siebert and I, which I am tired of. Davide King (talk) 11:37, 18 November 2021 (UTC) Sources, facts, comments (Paul Siebert)edit(To make a discussion more organized, I propose to collect all my factual comments in one place. That may help Moderator to understand some arguments better. In response to Nug's eleventh statement (06:14, 21 November 2021 (UTC))
In response to Cloud200's elevenths statement (22:32, 21 November 2021 (UTC)):
False accuses and deflecting (Davide King)editI thank Siebert for their effort but I am honestly tired of Cloud200 deflecting by making false accuses again here, especially in light of Siebert's sources, which is exactly to what we were referring to when we made such comments, which Cloud200 obviously does not understand and take out of context — those are all respected, mainstream scholars who are by no means pro-Communist (those who are, they are fringe, which is why Siebert and I never cited them in the first place). The problem is that they put their personal views first and then look for sources that confirm those views, while Siebert and I are simply commenting not our personal views but what cited mainstream scholars say, which contradicts MKuDR as a whole. Double genocide theory is indeed fringe but is, in fact, mainstream in much of Eastern Europe, which may explain Cloud200's emotional appeals in their false accuses. At least Nug attempted to address our concerns and questions, and I look forward to their response to my next round's questions, but Cloud200 continue to link to our past comments without context; Cloud200 believe that anyone who does not think Communism and Nazism were absolutely equal and the same is a Communist apologist. Many mainstream scholars are Communist apologists according to their absurd view. Britain and the United States are Communist apologists because they sided with the Soviets rather than Nazi–fascism in the 1930s and 1940s, even though the Soviets indeed did awful stuff during that same period.3 In fact, this is the view of the nationalist Right in post-Communism — Soviets were not equal to but worse than the German Nazis. "As it seems to reduce the responsibility of the Nazis and their collaborators, supporters and claqueurs, it is welcomed in rightist circles of various types: German conservatives in the 1980s, who wanted to 'normalise' the German past, and East European and ultranationalists today, who downplay Nazi crimes and up-play Communist crimes in order to promote a common European memory that merges Nazism and Stalinism into a 'double-genocide' theory that prioritises East European suffering over Jewish suffering, obfuscates the distinction between perpetrators and victims, and provides relief from the bitter legacy of East Europeans' collaboration in the Nazi genocide." — Thomas Kühne
1. I do not know about you, but this4 does not sound at all like apologetics. 2. What they failed to realize is that we are not relying on Hough, and they completely ignored the fact scholars use so many different definitions, so that much-lower estimates are because they may consider only direct deaths (e.g. Hough referred only to two years in the 1930s, while Rummel to almost the whole Soviet period), while the higher-estimates may include people who were not even born due to demographic catastrophes, therefore their argument makes no sense. They may have had a point if Hough was in the article or if we were specifically pushing for him as a mainstream source on estimates but we are not, and it does not rebuke Rummel as a minority and unreliable for estimates. 3. They indeed did, this is a fact. That does not mean Communism was worse than Nazism, or that Britain and the United States should have allied with Nazi Germany. 4. I do not know whether Genocide: A History is the work Siebert referenced to, since I could not get access to their link, but there is no way one can dismiss Rubinstein as either Communist or apologist. Davide King (talk) 02:09, 22 November 2021 (UTC)
Davide King (talk) 02:37, 22 November 2021 (UTC) — (Fifelfoo)editThis topic is shamefully in violation of coat, wp:histrs (essay IIRC), and standards of discourse. None of the synthetic claims by academics that persons kill people due to reasons have any traction in the literature. This has been twenty years of coat push by people who don't wish to advance individual articles on scholarship on the awful fucking shit done in the Soviet Union or People's Republic of China but, rather, to engage in politics that the rest of the scholarly world is utterly disinterested in. Everyone has a real interest in how the 2nd five year plan resulted in outputs ("failed" is a generally summary category)). Just because something is god damn horrific and violates your personal views doesn't meant that a few classicists publishing their hot takes constitutes a scholarly opinion. And this is the sufficient category: do the majority of histories of the 1927-1943 crisis in soviet society privilege the racial categories so common here: no, no they don't. Andrle. Fitzpatrick. Even our chaps employed by the British state don't concieve it so. Nor should we: This crap has gone on too long: an article about a folk myth deserves good article status. An article about class warfare in the soviet union deserves to have a lot of detritus removed from it. Fifelfoo (talk) 08:15, 22 November 2021 (UTC) Double genocide theory (Cloud200)edit
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I think this type arguments should be avoided on this page. We came here to present our rational arguments. We are expecting that our rational arguments will be rationally addressed by others, and we are prepared to accept them if their logic is correct and the facts they are based upon are valid. The argument: "I want this to be included, and other users support me" is not a rational argument: it cannot be refuted by rational means and, therefore, does not belong to this page. If those "other user" have some good counter-arguments, please, describe them: maybe, these arguments will be convincing, and I will have no choice but to accept them. However, just to claim that "other users support me, so you must bow before a majority" is exactly what our policy prohibits. In my opinion, DRN is a place where not the number of votes, but the strength of arguments matters.--Paul Siebert (talk) 23:22, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
An important question: If option 4 was included in the RfC and the consensus was achieved for that option, would you accept that outcome User:Paul Siebert? Vanteloop (talk) 23:40, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
No. 4 is essentially within the context of Communism as a single phenomenon, or Communist mass killings in general, which is done only by a minority of sources. It would not be an issue if we were allowed to discuss all views but the fact the article is within that context,1 it does not allow us to do that. Did not Nug complain that most of sources Siebert is talking about do not write within the context of Communism?
1. As showed here by Siebert, sources remain a big issue — if Siebert is indeed correct, sources do not support No. 4 because they do not write within the context of Communism either, as it is assumed and taken for granted. How can we have No. 4 if we disagree on whether they are writing within the context of Communism or mass killings in general? Davide King (talk) 11:35, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
Back-and-forth on and after 15 December 2021editWRT "The argument for why C must be included have been given ad nauseum by myself and other editors both here and on the talk page, so in the interest of conciseness I won't re-re-re-repeat it here." If some argument is repeated ad nauseum that means there is some problem with argumentation. Sincec the OP refuse to "re-re-re-repeat", I tried to summarise their arguments, and the only summary that I was able to make was "I insist C must be in the RfC, and other users support me" (I still don't understand what this argument is based upon). In contrast, I am proposing fresh arguments, which another party refused to address: their old arguments, which had been made before I made my new statements, are incapable to address the latter. One way or the another, since another party resorted to !veto, that de facto means that the only option is (II). Let's start source analysis, and let's see what majority sources say about connection between "A" and "B". I suspend my participation in this DRN, and I made my first post at Wikipedia:Dispute resolution noticeboard/MKUCR Source Analysis. Let's hope a discussion there will be more productive.--Paul Siebert (talk) 15:28, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
@Davide King: WRT "Both not having an option C and having an option C with predefined structure are problematic." I would expand that:
In other words, "A" also must include a discussion of a linkage of Communism and mass killings (because it is at least a minority view). And now imagine:
In connection to that, can you imagine a situation when a neutrally written "type A" article and a neutrally written "type C" can be different?--Paul Siebert (talk) 19:49, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
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Yet more back-and-forth. Editors are reminded to be civil and assume good faith. Robert McClenon (talk) 17:02, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
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RemindereditIf multiple editors misunderstand something, that may (not necessarily, but may) imply that it wasn't stated clearly. It appeared to me, and evidently at least also to User:Vanteloop, that User:Paul Siebert was stating that an RFC could not go forward with option C unless option C was substantiated by source analysis. That appeared to me to be a conditional veto. At no point did it appear that User:Vanteloop was exercising or trying to exercise a veto or a conditional veto. If Paul Siebert was not attempting to exercise a conditional veto, I suggest that they take into account that their statements may be subject to misconstruction. I have compromised, because I did not think that source analysis was required, or that it was likely to resolve the dispute. There will be an RFC on the structure of the article when the source analysis is declared to be completed. I know that User:Paul Siebert and User:Vanteloop know that neutral point of view is the second pillar of Wikipedia. I remind them that civility is the fourth pillar of Wikipedia. Robert McClenon (talk) 22:22, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
I haven't been following (just glancing) but would suggest that if you have an RFC with three or more choices, that you ask respondents to give their opinion on every choice. Otherwise you introduce math problems. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 03:40, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
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- User:Davide King - The source analysis discussion and the RFC can both continue, and discussion in the RFC can refer to sources identified in the source analysis. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:14, 18 December 2021 (UTC)