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List of Padma Vibhushan award recipients

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Nominator(s): - Vivvt (Talk) 07:12, 8 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because last nomination was archived, mainly because of the delays in resolving comments due to my wiki-inactivity. This time I hope to get it to its desired status. - Vivvt (Talk) 07:12, 8 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Frankie talk
Comments by FrB.TG:
  • I don't see why you should hyphenate second-highest.
    • Done
  • "The Awards Committee later submits their" – correct me if I am wrong (as it looks like a proper noun due to the capitalization) isn't it the Padma Awards Committee?
    • Rephrased
  • "The criteria includes "exceptional ..." - isn't criteria plural?
    • That's correct. But I didn't get your concern. Can you elaborate?
  • Some words used repetitively in the prose, such as "confer-ral/ment/red" (11) and "includ-e/ing" (5).
    • In-Progress Done
  • I think the lead is very long for an article that lists the recipients of Padma Vibhushan and ironically it is longer than the lede of its parent article.
    • That's because the parent article has multiple sections of the elaborated content. I didnt want to make separate sections here in the list but still want to present all the necessary content. Any suggestions are welcome.
  • The captions read quite repetitive: "Awarded in 123, abc is best known..."
    • In-Progress Done
  • Since there are alternative texts for the images of the recipients, I think you should also add one for the lead image.
    • Done

Otherwise pretty good work. Sorry I didn't leave comments in its previous nomination as I was a little bit late. Anyway, hope these help. -- Frankie talk 20:37, 10 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@FrB.TG: I have addressed some of your concerns. Please let me know if you have more. - Vivvt (Talk) 05:15, 16 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man: Done. Please let me know if you have more comments. - Vivvt (Talk) 15:15, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Source review by MPJ

So I will be looking specifically at the sources to help ensure it's meeting the FL criteria.

  • The "External Links" tool shows that everything is live and well so that's good.
  • I am seeing official sources, news sources ,books etc. nothing that is not a Reliable source
  • Formatting is okay, dates consistent etc.
  • Generally the recipients are sourced, all spot checks confirm this.
  • The only statements made in the article I do not see are the "Posthumous honors" part prior to 2015 - the sources confirm they were awarded the Padma, but not posthumous? No sources on their death listed.
In Progress Done @MPJ-DK: Please check now. - Vivvt (Talk) 17:16, 10 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
All deaths do look sufficiently sources, reliable and well formatted. I figure it would not be hard to get the sources since the subject articles most likely had them already. Good work. From a Source standpoint I can give this my Support Green tickY  MPJ-US  19:41, 10 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks much. - Vivvt (Talk) 19:51, 10 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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