Wikipedia:Peer review/+1 (film)/archive1

I've listed this article for peer review because I want to improve it to a higher status. Koridas 📣 22:24, 23 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Gerald Waldo Luis

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  • Koridas, It's a relatively short article with not much details; the most being in the plot. While I expect shorter, more dynamic articles to have that FA star, I expect a little bit more content in this article too.
  • Typically, the first paragraph states the writer/director/producer, casts, and the synopsis. Maybe merge para 1 and 2?
  • Lots of redlinks. Redlinks are usually just for subjects that may be worthy to make an article upon. Maybe reduce the number of reds?

GeraldWL 06:47, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]