Wikipedia:Peer review/Eric Heffer/archive1

Eric Heffer

This was a recent failed FAC nomination largely through not receiving sufficient support votes. There were no actionable objections but obviously everything is capable of some improvement. If anyone knows the location of a suitable GFDL good quality colour image then that would be a help. David | Talk 13:48, 1 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I don't see anything intrinsically wrong with this article, other than perhaps dwelling on minutiae a little too much. I just don't find him to be a very interesting character. He seems like a fairly generic politician, albeit with far left leanings. But in generally it looks like a pretty good reference. Thanks. :) — RJH 15:13, 1 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I think that it's main problem is aproachability, a photo of Heffer + wife to illustrate their disparate appearance? A map of the UK showing the location of his constituency? A map of his constituency? Picture of a 'Federation of Marxist Groups' pamphlet? Generally the style seems to much chopped up and a bit difficult to read; perhaps to dry. Perhaps a graph of his electoral vote. Mozzerati 21:56, August 11, 2005 (UTC)