Many editors have contributed to this article and I think it is somewhat well written and a good article. I'd like to incorporate others' ideas and improvements. I notice that the scoring table is a little strange, so maybe someone can fix that too. Thanks for your time. Ryanminier 14:02, 16 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Several quick points:
  1. the strategy section should be fleshed out, and the list of "commandments" removed, or at the very least restated in a more formal fashion
  2. the dealing section should be compressed somewhat - it seems too long for what should be a reasonably easy thing to explain. (Also, I don't think that dealing cards one by one is uncommon)
  3. an image showing and describing how the scoring is done would be useful
  4. I'm not sure if everything labelled as being a Midwest rule or style is actually just done in the Midwest. For example, "first black jack deals" is done in Ontario too.
  5. we need to check facts for the Guernsey variation.
I've just perused the article quickly, so I'm sure I've missed a number of things. Mindmatrix 15:39, 16 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]