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Until the End (album)

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I've listed this article for peer review because… page is coming along, and is nearly there. please look out for dumb errors, unclear phrases and things that don't make sense, among other issues.

Thanks, Chchcheckit (talk) 15:24, 22 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

Why are some of the sources in the inline citations and some in a sources section? I would standardise this one way or the other.
"The album expands upon the death metal stylings of Oracle, and features more melody and dynamics than the aforementioned album.[21][29][31][32]" Are four inline citations needed here? Can some be removed or WP:CITEBUNDLE?
The Reception section falls into the "X says Y" pattern. Read WP:RECEPTION for ideas on how to avoid this.
The Europe row in the Release history needs an inline citation.

Those are my thoughts. Z1720 (talk) 01:21, 24 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Could you explain what you mean by the first point? Chchcheckit (talk) 12:40, 24 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]