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  1. Request on 01:07:40, 1 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Esolischi
  2. Request on 14:52:48, 1 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Michron777
  3. 14:55:49, 1 May 2019 review of draft by Skohl
  4. 15:09:03, 1 May 2019 review of draft by SJND
  5. 16:06:46, 1 May 2019 review of submission by GlitchBJ
  6. 17:47:54, 1 May 2019 review of draft by Michael212427
  7. 18:19:30, 1 May 2019 review of draft by 64.124.122.226
  8. Request on 18:30:52, 1 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by AlishaTurner
  9. Request on 18:32:07, 1 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by AlishaTurner
  10. Request on 20:54:38, 1 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Kpillai856
  11. 23:12:06, 1 May 2019 review of draft by Communna

May 2

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  1. 01:45:19, 2 May 2019 review of draft by INeedSupport
  2. 02:41:33, 2 May 2019 review of submission by CruzBebe
  3. 05:30:14, 2 May 2019 review of submission by Krutika Samnani
  4. Request on 08:51:36, 2 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Webplanet12345
  5. 15:50:14, 2 May 2019 review of submission by Abovingdon
  6. 17:37:03, 2 May 2019 review of draft by Barry Bernas
  7. 22:47:00, 2 May 2019 review of submission by DanStallman

May 3

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  1. Request on 07:17:47, 3 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by CCFBROWN
  2. 08:51:30, 3 May 2019 review of submission by LewisManz
  3. 11:21:28, 3 May 2019 review of submission by Badal Saboo - Connect the dots
  4. 13:08:30, 3 May 2019 review of draft by Gshallo
  5. 17:13:28, 3 May 2019 review of submission by Makingeditsandwhatnot2018
  6. 19:55:05, 3 May 2019 review of submission by OR Marine Reserves
  7. 23:09:07, 3 May 2019 review of submission by 2601:280:4E00:23C2:2DA6:DEBD:1CBC:BEF4
  8. 23:50:04, 3 May 2019 review of draft by ShyhBCRaps

May 4

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  1. 01:09:21, 4 May 2019 review of submission by ShyhBCRaps
  2. 05:40:05, 4 May 2019 review of submission by Abnerclymer
  3. 08:26:43, 4 May 2019 review of submission by Swatians
  4. 09:49:03, 4 May 2019 review of submission by Wordsfrombimpe
  5. 10:12:12, 4 May 2019 review of submission by Adamszala
  6. 19:25:36, 4 May 2019 review of draft by HirmizM

May 5

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  1. 02:17:30, 5 May 2019 review of draft by Davismichira
  2. 02:18:04, 5 May 2019 review of submission by Davismichira
  3. 04:30:51, 5 May 2019 review of submission by Lalisekhon
  4. 04:32:06, 5 May 2019 review of submission by Lalisekhon
  5. 13:27:06, 5 May 2019 review of draft by INeedSupport
  6. 14:41:06, 5 May 2019 review of draft by 197.14.134.219
  7. 14:51:11, 5 May 2019 review of submission by Webplanet12345
  8. 20:40:09, 5 May 2019 review of draft by WIKIrestrict

May 6

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  1. 04:46:51, 6 May 2019 review of submission by Krutika Samnani
  2. 05:45:18, 6 May 2019 review of submission by Routerdude
  3. 10:02:36, 6 May 2019 review of submission by Krutika Samnani
  4. 14:36:19, 6 May 2019 review of submission by 5.104.160.86
  5. 16:47:29, 6 May 2019 review of submission by 77.247.249.172
  6. 18:20:23, 6 May 2019 review of draft by Lambdeb
  7. 19:18:11, 6 May 2019 review of draft by SD1014

May 7

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  1. 07:10:15, 7 May 2019 review of submission by Wp4321
  2. 08:03:23, 7 May 2019 review of draft by Manager1kz
  3. 09:52:55, 7 May 2019 review of submission by Tle003
  4. 14:08:29, 7 May 2019 review of submission by Gruznov
  5. 16:40:45, 7 May 2019 review of draft by Worddust
  6. 19:38:27, 7 May 2019 review of draft by ADSTucson
  7. 20:38:35, 7 May 2019 review of draft by LucasBDaniel

May 8

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  1. 00:58:16, 8 May 2019 review of draft by LorriBrown
  2. 01:41:18, 8 May 2019 review of draft by Cmhatten
  3. 11:16:58, 8 May 2019 review of submission by Wikiwel
  4. User:Musa lawi mafolo/sandnox
  5. 15:11:59, 8 May 2019 review of submission by Wikiwel
  6. 16:11:38, 8 May 2019 review of draft by DelicateAloe
  7. 17:27:48, 8 May 2019 review of submission by RobinEMiller
  8. 18:17:38, 8 May 2019 review of submission by ADSTucson
  9. 20:46:25, 8 May 2019 review of submission by Onomatowoo
  10. 23:03:11, 8 May 2019 review of draft by JoelDougal: Draft Environment lost map's 2 zoom controls
  11. 23:22:46, 8 May 2019 review of submission by Sobernoodle

May 9

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  1. 08:05:36, 9 May 2019 review of submission by Jakeelias23
  2. 12:27:57, 9 May 2019 review of submission by Kanmbiey
  3. 12:32:09, 9 May 2019 review of submission by Techcherio
  4. 15:29:24, 9 May 2019 review of submission by Cvxs
  5. 19:30:39, 9 May 2019 review of submission by 80.2.222.121

May 10

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  1. 05:10:19, 10 May 2019 review of draft by Philhorn
  2. 06:00:20, 10 May 2019 review of submission by Dutysamu51
  3. 09:28:28, 10 May 2019 review of draft by RHall1970
  4. 10:33:02, 10 May 2019 review of submission by Leezk
  5. Biografía
  6. Referencias
  7. Bibliografía
  8. External links
  9. Request on 12:24:57, 10 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Cine Autorreferencial - Basel Ramsis
  10. 13:40:31, 10 May 2019 review of draft by 2A00:23C4:494:A600:A422:BB66:97A8:1641
  11. 15:46:21, 10 May 2019 review of submission by Wangsophie110

May 11

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  1. 02:47:28, 11 May 2019 review of draft by Playlikeastar
  2. 10:39:17, 11 May 2019 review of draft by Nandanikri
  3. 17:49:49, 11 May 2019 review of draft by Irenemoresa
  4. Request on 20:07:42, 11 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Muhammad Nabeel Shafqat
  5. 22:56:57, 11 May 2019 review of submission by KiddCartelSA
  6. 23:01:29, 11 May 2019 review of submission by Lucky 0310

May 12

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  1. 03:35:05, 12 May 2019 review of submission by E-Stylus
  2. 07:53:17, 12 May 2019 review of draft by 2600:1700:F260:C6B0:94D0:F538:97AE:87F7

May 13

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  1. 01:14:49, 13 May 2019 review of submission by Akarnikos
  2. 03:17:15, 13 May 2019 review of draft by Dianahendricks
  3. 04:03:09, 13 May 2019 review of draft by 2600:1700:F260:C6B0:DCB:7FC9:7F2F:2819
  4. 08:51:26, 13 May 2019 review of draft by Paul Zawilensky
  5. 10:41:51, 13 May 2019 review of submission by SYED JAVED HAIDER
  6. 11:03:29, 13 May 2019 review of draft by Tollywoodcorns
  7. 11:46:29, 13 May 2019 review of submission by Asfabutt2001
  8. 12:05:00, 13 May 2019 review of submission by Dlisauskas
  9. 14:32:57, 13 May 2019 review of submission by Moemika
  10. 14:37:04, 13 May 2019 review of submission by ApeleleDaniso
  11. 15:55:11, 13 May 2019 review of submission by Steve attridge
  12. 21:26:30, 13 May 2019 review of submission by PeterMa1234
  13. 22:33:56, 13 May 2019 review of submission by Dtwinlauser
  14. 23:00:48, 13 May 2019 review of submission by Amgray19
  15. 23:41:15, 13 May 2019 review of submission by 192.30.126.111

May 14

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  1. 00:26:40, 14 May 2019 review of submission by Kfarren23
  2. 03:09:29, 14 May 2019 review of submission by Downcycle
  3. 08:34:28, 14 May 2019 review of submission by Jasminenkmould
  4. 09:56:30, 14 May 2019 review of submission by Speaklar
  5. 10:39:48, 14 May 2019 review of draft by Dragon0562
  6. 15:26:52, 14 May 2019 review of submission by Sarahmalikbell
  7. 16:45:02, 14 May 2019 review of draft by Believeitornot1
  8. 18:41:06, 14 May 2019 review of submission by GangGangCrip
  9. 18:50:40, 14 May 2019 review of draft by Jayson mark

May 15

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  1. 01:57:37, 15 May 2019 review of submission by Aosmali
  2. 05:39:30, 15 May 2019 review of draft by Yche3321
  3. 11:17:55, 15 May 2019 review of submission by Wp4321
  4. 11:56:44, 15 May 2019 review of submission by Papi Paul Poeme
  5. 16:31:41, 15 May 2019 review of submission by Kranthi Kumar Mukkera
  6. 17:08:48, 15 May 2019 review of submission by Kranthi Kumar Mukkera
  7. 20:06:29, 15 May 2019 review of submission by Jessie Trapp
  8. 20:30:30, 15 May 2019 review of draft by Asherdbwiseman
  9. 22:50:33, 15 May 2019 review of submission by Ryan Mindo

May 16

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  1. 00:54:18, 16 May 2019 review of submission by Nickyjamyelcangri787
  2. 08:38:09, 16 May 2019 review of draft by أبو السعد 22
  3. 08:50:51, 16 May 2019 review of draft by Drbadloti
  4. 11:22:46, 16 May 2019 review of draft by Mlawsn
  5. 11:25:16, 16 May 2019 review of submission by Gihongamerbr
  6. 13:26:32, 16 May 2019 review of submission by Louisgm
  7. 16:26:47, 16 May 2019 review of submission by TobiasStage
  8. 17:20:38, 16 May 2019 review of submission by Yangkou
  9. Request on 18:30:41, 16 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Mlawsn
  10. 21:08:48, 16 May 2019 review of submission by Mlawsn
  11. 22:12:52, 16 May 2019 review of submission by Mlawsn
  12. 23:00:54, 16 May 2019 review of submission by Paul.jonah.paul

May 17

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  1. 00:47:20, 17 May 2019 review of draft by THX1136
  2. 02:06:29, 17 May 2019 review of draft by Isaac Omar
  3. 08:47:08, 17 May 2019 review of submission by Onglipo
  4. 09:16:38, 17 May 2019 review of submission by Marthanewson
  5. 10:44:47, 17 May 2019 review of submission by Mlawsn
  6. 11:39:28, 17 May 2019 review of submission by Mpampismate
  7. 13:39:32, 17 May 2019 review of submission by Shieru2411
  8. 23:55:21, 17 May 2019 review of draft by 2600:1700:F260:C6B0:B0CB:D3F8:CFC:33ED

May 18

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  1. 02:48:24, 18 May 2019 review of submission by Meshuggah101
  2. Request on 03:17:55, 18 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Dbexpert
  3. 05:12:26, 18 May 2019 review of submission by Dianahendricks
  4. 06:55:35, 18 May 2019 review of draft by Ritz082
  5. 14:40:22, 18 May 2019 review of draft by Innovative Username
  6. 16:37:55, 18 May 2019 review of submission by S.H.Waqif
  7. 17:59:00, 18 May 2019 review of submission by Gedgmoss
  8. 19:40:19, 18 May 2019 review of submission by Robeatlas
  9. 20:07:40, 18 May 2019 review of submission by Zroxuf
  10. 20:47:20, 18 May 2019 review of draft by Chilledude

May 19

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  1. 07:43:42, 19 May 2019 review of submission by Orenah oal
  2. Request on 07:57:43, 19 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Orenah oal
  3. 12:54:37, 19 May 2019 review of submission by Mcvicworld
  4. 14:22:38, 19 May 2019 review of draft by SimaDC
  5. 16:48:36, 19 May 2019 review of draft by Jussi Karlgren
  6. 17:03:54, 19 May 2019 review of submission by Asfabutt2001
  7. 22:07:51, 19 May 2019 review of submission by Jayaneeshvj

May 20

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  1. 04:12:33, 20 May 2019 review of draft by Hariyadav
  2. 05:00:04, 20 May 2019 review of submission by Amna21
  3. 07:13:25, 20 May 2019 review of draft by Ladkap
  4. 08:05:27, 20 May 2019 review of submission by Kranthi Kumar Mukkera
  5. 11:48:26, 20 May 2019 review of draft by 217.147.174.57
  6. Request on 12:28:45, 20 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Noixdegalle
  7. 13:34:52, 20 May 2019 review of draft by Corowitz
  8. 14:32:17, 20 May 2019 review of submission by Eadredwallace
  9. 16:40:17, 20 May 2019 review of submission by Asfabutt2001
  10. 19:50:29, 20 May 2019 review of submission by JSBenichou
  11. 22:52:29, 20 May 2019 review of submission by Downcycle

May 21

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  1. 00:39:15, 21 May 2019 review of draft by Isaac Omar
  2. 01:04:22, 21 May 2019 review of draft by 2405:205:4320:41EC:694E:EF36:C0A8:6A2C
  3. 01:30:57, 21 May 2019 review of submission by Mn films
  4. 08:39:34, 21 May 2019 review of submission by TravisGTAGamer
  5. 11:32:41, 21 May 2019 review of submission by Ian J. Saunders
  6. 12:14:24, 21 May 2019 review of draft by GVTeg
  7. 20:50:51, 21 May 2019 review of submission by Ronmun
  8. 21:06:25, 21 May 2019 review of submission by 82.187.36.133

May 22

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  1. 00:27:45, 22 May 2019 review of submission by Basem3.Azez1990
  2. 01:57:59, 22 May 2019 review of submission by Stanfordai
  3. 02:37:22, 22 May 2019 review of draft by Bagotroad
  4. 03:34:54, 22 May 2019 review of submission by Immuthuppandi
  5. 04:22:37, 22 May 2019 review of submission by Lesenwriter
  6. 06:27:52, 22 May 2019 review of submission by Kirsty Liu
  7. 08:02:44, 22 May 2019 review of submission by SYED JAVED HAIDER
  8. 08:02:47, 22 May 2019 review of submission by Samirsangroula
  9. 08:03:13, 22 May 2019 review of submission by SYED JAVED HAIDER
  10. 09:34:09, 22 May 2019 review of submission by Dolphin Scholar
  11. 14:32:28, 22 May 2019 review of draft by Dgold11
  12. Request on 17:13:14, 22 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Mukkera Kranthi
  13. 19:35:51, 22 May 2019 review of submission by Ryan Mindo
  14. Request on 19:52:08, 22 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Nikko Curtis
  15. 21:40:26, 22 May 2019 review of submission by Swordswfriends

May 23

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  1. 00:45:30, 23 May 2019 review of draft by Jenoa9
  2. 09:51:05, 23 May 2019 review of submission by Streamingriver
  3. 12:46:32, 23 May 2019 review of draft by Zimou Yuan
  4. 13:47:06, 23 May 2019 review of draft by Gilcrease1227
  5. 16:47:22, 23 May 2019 review of submission by Ryan Mindo
  6. 19:06:30, 23 May 2019 review of submission by Ericawallace35
  7. 21:15:42, 23 May 2019 review of submission by Bigzeus
  8. 22:54:12, 23 May 2019 review of submission by LOBOSKYJOJO

May 24

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  1. 03:30:28, 24 May 2019 review of draft by IronDerBear414
  2. 08:22:32, 24 May 2019 review of submission by Dolphin Scholar
  3. 10:31:49, 24 May 2019 review of submission by Terrence Dewar
  4. 11:32:00, 24 May 2019 review of submission by Creativefabien
  5. 16:23:02, 24 May 2019 review of draft by MintentDS
  6. 19:06:26, 24 May 2019 review of draft by SD1014

May 25

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  1. 05:54:51, 25 May 2019 review of submission by JoeGhantouss
  2. 06:35:19, 25 May 2019 review of submission by Naveen93080
  3. 07:14:04, 25 May 2019 review of submission by Naveen93080
  4. Request on 12:17:13, 25 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by SvenskDJ
  5. 15:17:14, 25 May 2019 review of submission by Basem3.Azez1990
  6. 19:18:43, 25 May 2019 review of submission by Byadamfitch
  7. 21:13:26, 25 May 2019 review of submission by SvenskDJ
  8. 21:18:49, 25 May 2019 review of submission by 103.60.175.112
  9. 21:26:02, 25 May 2019 review of submission by Florafro2

May 26

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  1. 00:01:26, 26 May 2019 review of draft by Addisonandros
  2. 00:05:50, 26 May 2019 review of submission by Basaintl
  3. 07:36:12, 26 May 2019 review of submission by LOBOSKYJOJO
  4. 23:15:28, 26 May 2019 review of submission by BananaSlug

May 27

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  1. 03:16:43, 27 May 2019 review of submission by Lolos2508
  2. 08:45:06, 27 May 2019 review of submission by Mifriend3
  3. 14:34:05, 27 May 2019 review of submission by Dinakarr
  4. 10:44:30, 27 May 2019 review of submission by LLcentury
  5. 16:38:45, 27 May 2019 review of submission by Gesielgbernardes
  6. 21:27:19, 27 May 2019 review of submission by Jessiecarbone3
  7. 22:08:40, 27 May 2019 review of submission by 89.164.167.75
  8. 23:50:07, 27 May 2019 review of draft by AminNash

May 28

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  1. 00:23:23, 28 May 2019 review of draft by Gilcrease1227
  2. 07:04:06, 28 May 2019 review of submission by Arno.
  3. 09:15:29, 28 May 2019 review of submission by Gdams1
  4. 09:36:56, 28 May 2019 review of submission by LOGIMUSIC
  5. 11:38:17, 28 May 2019 review of submission by Belena70
  6. 11:50:16, 28 May 2019 review of submission by Lateshkj
  7. 15:04:42, 28 May 2019 review of submission by Aislinnlily
  8. 15:39:59, 28 May 2019 review of submission by Terrence Dewar
  9. 17:05:35, 28 May 2019 review of submission by Antolepore2
  10. 17:15:38, 28 May 2019 review of submission by Go art -X

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  1. 04:24:05, 29 May 2019 review of submission by 93.39.184.54
  2. 07:05:51, 29 May 2019 review of draft by 86.13.186.156
  3. 12:39:58, 29 May 2019 review of submission by E-Stylus
  4. 15:45:46, 29 May 2019 review of draft by INeedSupport
  5. 17:54:19, 29 May 2019 review of draft by Lizzyd111
  6. 21:58:09, 29 May 2019 review of draft by WildChild300
  7. 22:11:18, 29 May 2019 review of submission by SlyKiinz

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  1. 01:07:58, 30 May 2019 review of submission by Fanssnap
  2. Micromobility is sufficiently notable
  3. 02:38:59, 30 May 2019 review of submission by DavidLevinson
  4. 10:13:12, 30 May 2019 review of draft by Sussex Wolves
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  8. 15:28:27, 30 May 2019 review of submission by SteveJBishop
  9. 16:41:28, 30 May 2019 review of submission by 42.107.200.138
  10. Request on 16:50:43, 30 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Fasil Mp
  11. 17:04:56, 30 May 2019 review of submission by Fasil Mp
  12. 17:30:12, 30 May 2019 review of submission by Ryan Mindo
  13. 18:03:23, 30 May 2019 review of submission by Wanderguides
  14. 18:06:27, 30 May 2019 review of submission by Fasil Mp
  15. 19:53:59, 30 May 2019 review of submission by Fasil Mp
  16. 20:23:56, 30 May 2019 review of submission by 223.230.140.171
  17. 22:17:39, 30 May 2019 review of draft by T1aacref

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  1. 00:35:34, 31 May 2019 review of submission by MuchTime
  2. 03:30:48, 31 May 2019 review of draft by FowDay
  3. 05:12:14, 31 May 2019 review of draft by Shaista.ameer
  4. 06:17:11, 31 May 2019 review of submission by Tollywoodcorns
  5. 08:08:32, 31 May 2019 review of submission by Thakur Golu Singh
  6. 09:10:31, 31 May 2019 review of draft by 89.138.228.20
  7. 12:16:48, 31 May 2019 review of submission by Theaniketyadav
  8. 16:14:07, 31 May 2019 review of draft by Sanderson462
  9. Request on 17:27:46, 31 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Liewhz
  10. 18:15:36, 31 May 2019 review of submission by Veena srivani
  11. 18:22:13, 31 May 2019 review of submission by Veena srivani
  12. 18:31:59, 31 May 2019 review of submission by Ilyasshas
  13. 22:24:13, 31 May 2019 review of draft by ChristieChan1231