Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Episode 2 (Twin Peaks)/archive1

Crisco 1492 comments

• "In the episode," - In the episode or this episode?

  Changed to "this". GRAPPLE X 03:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

• "the prior two episodes." - The prior or the previous?

  They're both the immediately preceding ones so I wasn't aware there was a difference in this case; which would be preferable? GRAPPLE X 03:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

• "conflation of violence and sexuality" - Does this really need to be direct quotes?

  It was five words which I believe is considered the boundary between paraphrasing and copyvio; I've reworded it and removed it from quotes instead. It's now "violent sexuality". GRAPPLE X 03:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

• And yeah, Den of Geek needs its reliability established.

  As before, I'm comfortable removing this material if it proves not to be noteworthy enough. GRAPPLE X 03:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

• I've done a minor copyedit, mostly non-breaking spaces. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:58, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

  Thanks again for helping out. GRAPPLE X 03:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)